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Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2014, 11:49 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 3,494
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Interview with Bob Bly: How New Copywriters Can Land Clients

Bob Bly and I discuss:


What 'bait' you can use to attract potential clients, and how to get traffic to it
How to make sure your first clients can afford a $1000 or more sales letter
What...
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2013, 01:47 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

Here's the title for your e-book...

Managers Career Shift: A practical guide in a tough job market

Reasons why this will work...

1 taken from parts of the titles on the best sellers list on...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 06:42 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By serryjw
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

HOW About:
7 Deadly Hunting Job Mistakes
ENTER
The Wall of Shame

IMO, NO resume is going to get you a C-level dream job. ALL you can...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 06:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By copyassassin
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

I like that one.

But, here's the issue, the OP said this is meant for "32 to 45 men and women, middle managers to c-level executives."

Competition is really fierce in this segment.

My...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 05:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By maximus242
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

No

They care about making mistakes. One of the best control packages for this market was written by Gary Bencivenga. The title of the ad was:

"Do You Make These Mistakes In Job Interviews?"
...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 01:35 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By copyassassin
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

ozanK,

i think you're going about this ALL wrong.

Who gives a **** about the biggest mistakes.

What people care about are 1) getting their resume read, 2) getting an interview, 3) getting to...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 01:11 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By maximus242
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

You exaggerate way too much. Honesty sells much better than bs.

Advertising is useless if nobody BELIEVES your advertising

Just say the truth:

"Head Hunter Reveals: 7 Mistakes Most People...
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2013, 09:52 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By marciayudkin
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

I suggest using that fact in the title/headline. This would get my attention more than any promises from Joe Schmoe.

Marcia Yudkin
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2013, 06:27 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By Curtis2011
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

Honestly, I like the original better. It is shorter and captivates your attention faster.

However, maybe your 2nd version could look like:

Job Hunting Failures: The 7 Worst Mistakes That Will...
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2013, 05:38 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By GlenH
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

An idea for one....

The 7 Stupid Job Hunting Mistakes You’re Making That Will Ensure You NEVER Get Hired.
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2013, 12:14 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

Think about centering the headline around the current state of the economy. That's what unsuccessful job hunters think is their problem.

Alex
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2013, 10:43 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By maximus242
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

Resume Writing Magic: Your Surefire Formula
To Easily Craft A Resume
That ALWAYS Gets Read And Gets YOU Hired!

This headline is unbelievable. Who is going to believe there is a formula that...
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2013, 10:31 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,132
Posted By gjabiz
You had me at Brutal. But...

I need more information, and as always have more questions, ok?

Where are these eBooks being offered?
How are prospects reaching these sites?
Is there an opt in on the carrot?
Who, exactly,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st November 2012, 04:29 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 597
Posted By P.Sharma
Dynamic Date & Geo-Location

I was just adding some more content to my War-Room thread (best place for IM info. :) ) and realized that these scripts can be useful to almost anyone in the internet marketing space.

I mean...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd August 2012, 03:51 PM
Replies: 137
Views: 14,100
Posted By Kim Roach
Sites that ACTUALLY Send Traffic (because EzineArticles.com is dead!)

Warriors,

As many of you probably already know, article directories like EzineArticles.com are not NEARLY as effective as they used to be. It's a HUGE time waste.

So if you're looking for...
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