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Forum: Copywriting 23rd December 2012, 01:24 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 1,633
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Please Help Critique My First Sales Copy

Agreed.

These people are probably depressed while reading the salesletter. It might not take much to push them over the edge and swallow a handful of mothballs.

I'd dive straight into a...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd December 2012, 01:12 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 1,633
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Please Help Critique My First Sales Copy

Comments:


Design needs to be more professional... If you find it difficult to piece together good design, my advice would be to strip everything down, forget the fancy header and shadow...
Forum: Copywriting 30th October 2011, 09:50 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 564
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: The Right Way To Forget About Copy...

@Steve Copywriter



That's an eye opener.

27 times is huge.

Would I be correct to assume that each of those 27 times represent a specific edit you do?
Forum: Copywriting 20th October 2011, 01:33 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,122
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Critique of copy for a post card mailing

Sounds like you've got a great offer.

However the copy reads too general. Its targetting too many people.

For example, you could tighten up your headline by making it more specific.

From...
Forum: Offline Marketing 17th October 2011, 11:17 AM
Replies: 71
Views: 4,434
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: How I closed 11 out of 11 meetings in the last 4 weeks

This is key. Assume the sale.

If its something they want they WANT IT fast.

Its been my experience too that when the business owner says thigns like "I've got a business partner and I need to...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 17th October 2011, 10:40 AM
Replies: 399
Views: 45,594
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Mobile Website Showcase [IMAGES]

These are just beautiful!
Forum: Copywriting 16th October 2011, 09:13 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,953
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Psychic Predictions for 2012

I'm kinda excited for February 2012 now!

Lets hope its something cool.
Forum: Copywriting 16th October 2011, 08:49 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,645
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Looking For Weight Loss Ads

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Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2011, 03:43 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,826
Posted By IdrisSG
Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2011, 03:35 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 793
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Im really not happy with my new sales page

AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:



Seems to have multiple calls to action - there's an optin form and a download button. Try to have just one CTA.
Text is left justified and then center justified and...
Forum: Copywriting 5th October 2011, 07:27 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,151
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: Copywriter For Large Direct Mailer Fixes Ailing Mailer With This...

This is brilliant...

How a million dollar copywriter rescues a failing mailer.

I'm bookmarking this one.
Forum: Copywriting 5th October 2011, 07:08 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,290
Posted By IdrisSG
Re: How 1 Question On The Warrior Forum Launched My Career

Here's How They Did It...

Bob Bly - I mailed out 500 letters and within four or five weeks, I had 35 people respond, which was a 7% response and I was on my way. I had 35 people who were...
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