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Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2012, 05:23 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,787
Posted By netvicar
Re: Please critique my marketing piece for my cleaning biz. Thanks!

Good to see you are attempting to be proactive in marketing your business. That said, this is a bad piece. Don't use it.

If this letter arrived in my mail I probably would have tossed it right...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 01:03 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,005
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique This Sales Copy 2.0

Your new opening is much much better.



The headline still needs work though. Also, after this point you still jump into talking about yourself too soon. And the attempt at a story involving...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 01:17 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 4,590
Posted By netvicar
Re: For newer copywriters, a few bits of advice for getting paying clients.

Thanks. I listened to the interview. I had not known of Doug's history. Interesting account. Thanks for sharing.

I'm miffed you left off the punchline about how MH's meeting with those twenty...
Forum: Copywriting 12th August 2012, 09:18 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,005
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique This Sales Copy 2.0

Ok. I make a point of never reading other reviews before commenting. This is to avoid skewing my observations. That said, there may be redundancies here.

Your sentences are too long.

Your...
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 06:38 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,115
Posted By netvicar
Re: Who Are Some Copywriters on WF that I Can Learn From?

LOL!!!! Funniest thing I've read all week. Of course, it ain't entirely true but still funny :)
Forum: Copywriting 18th July 2012, 05:09 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,024
Posted By netvicar
Re: How do you attract prospects to take you up as a copywriter?

To build up your portfolio create mock ups. At least three different fields or niches.

Oh. Here's a dirty little secret you may feel a little squeamish or reluctant to use: after you create the...
Forum: Copywriting 14th June 2012, 05:56 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,485
Posted By netvicar
Re: Anyone Know The Elements of an Offer that Frank Kern suggests?

Howdy RH. I don't normally 'plug' other copywriter's works on forums (it seems sleazy) but this is a page worth bookmarking, if not printing:

21 Incredible Copywriting Formulas (I Use)...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 10:04 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,335
Posted By netvicar
Re: Critique for my first sales page. Thanks from a Newbie

Joner.

First off, I'm not here to attack you. And I've not read all the comments - yet. So if this hurts that is not the intention.

Anyhow, this sounds very much like the questionable credit...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 09:28 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,292
Posted By netvicar
Re: Prospecting Email--Whadda' You Think?

I basically like this, as a sales letter. But there are three things you should consider. I'll get to those in a moment...

Before you send this out keep in mind that no matter how much you stick...
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 05:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,292
Posted By netvicar
Re: Prospecting Email--Whadda' You Think?

I basically like this. But there are three things you should consider. I'll get to those in a moment...

Before you send this out keep in mind that no matter how much you stick to CAN-SPAM rules...
Forum: Copywriting 6th October 2009, 03:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,041
Posted By netvicar
Re: First Salesletter - Your critique and feed back please!

First off, nice choice of colors. Also like your web layout [opening drop case, font usage, tables, bullet graphic, ebook covers , etc]. Lots of consistency in design throughout the page. Your use of...
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