Forum: Copywriting 
12th March 2010, 01:57 PM
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Replies: 16
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Forum: Copywriting
11th March 2010, 03:42 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 984  Re: Alright - My Turn to Ask for Review -
I'm afraid it's back to the drawing board for you buddy...
It seems like you have a lot to tell - but not a whole lot to sell. That's Job #1 - what's your offer? I just see a "List of Stuff"...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th March 2010, 04:49 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 935 Re: Be Gentle With Me
San,
You've already received some terrific advice here. I would add that you need to add "an upside" to this letter. I understand that anger, suspicion, and betrayal are key emotions here - but...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd February 2010, 05:46 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,246 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st January 2010, 09:26 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,009 Re: Critique of my squeeze page please
Hi,
Get this entire page rewritten by a native English speaker. Right now this page is unintelligible because I'm tripping over the horrible sentence construction.
You can't move on until you...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th January 2010, 10:26 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 742 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th January 2010, 01:13 PM
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Replies: 38
Views: 1,597 One of the best I've seen
Guys check out
Old School Crappie Fishing Family Secrets (http://www.oldschoolcrappiefishing.com/)
This guy has nailed tone, angle, proof, and offer. He writes like a pro but as far as I can...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st January 2010, 09:25 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 853 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th January 2010, 09:05 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 606 Re: Please comments on my review page.
Yep, don't publish this until you've had a native English speaker give it a once through.
Plus consider simplifying the presentation. It is extremely graphic heavy and the overuse of...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th January 2010, 10:35 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 609 Re: Copy Critique Please...
I love your tenacity Santosh.
It's not easy coming in here for help.
Your Letter
Your entire presentation needs some heart and soul. It feels so corporate. A red-blooded "hero" would give it...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th January 2010, 10:27 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 1,123 Re: Help Me Improve My Sales Page
Hey,
Congrats to you for taking action. Most people don't get past the "dreaming" stage.
I'll just focus on the headline and lead because it has the most impact on your conversions.
Headline:...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th January 2010, 03:47 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 761 Re: What Do You Guys Think?
It's getting brutal in here - but it's all great stuff.
The big takeaway is that you cannot work a template and get a winning salesletter. If your audience was brand spanking new to Internet...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th January 2010, 03:18 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 692 Re: Help Me Optimize My Squeeze Page
The layout itself has the elements in the right spots but...(you knew it was coming didn't you!)
...Clean up the formatting - right now the opt-in form is a mess in my browser
...Is this product...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th January 2010, 08:49 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,363 Re: Some (very) basic newbie questions.
I'll answer #7.
I realized that copywriting was my gig when I discovered that I loved selling to complete strangers. It's fun climbing into someone elses head, seeing how they click, and solving...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th January 2010, 09:24 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,067 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th January 2010, 09:15 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 705 Re: Where Can I find Examples?
Do a google search for Lawrence Bernstein, this guy has put together tons of swipe files for offline and online.
That should help.
Stan
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Forum: Copywriting
10th January 2010, 01:44 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 881 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th January 2010, 10:08 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 657 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th January 2010, 09:16 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 878 Re: Help!! Need a sales page critique please!
Avis,
Actually, This is a great first effort.
As usual the critique comments are great. Implement them and you will add polish to this letter.
One thing I noticed: I am missing the part where...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th January 2010, 09:05 AM
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Replies: 34
Views: 3,745 Re: Need a really good hook!
Sara,
I am on a "testing" kick today. All of the suggestions you've received are excellent. Tons of wisdom here. However, you should plan on testing multiple headlines. Don't expect to nail the...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th January 2010, 12:37 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 672 |
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd January 2010, 04:00 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 895 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st December 2009, 07:33 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 855 Re: Salescopy First Time - Critique Please...
Santosh, I admire your moxxy. You have a great product with a lot of value. All you need to do is refine your presentation and raise the emotional roof on this puppy.
So, my critique will feel a...
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