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Posted By dddougal

Re: Help me With My Headline

You would be better off steering away from your how to do blah blah blah approach in my opinion. You need to make them read your copy, if you already told them in the title everything there is to...

Forum: Copywriting

4th January 2015, 11:20 PM

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Posted By italk

Re: Help me With My Headline

"How To Launch A Successful WSO On The Warrior Forum Using 3 Simple Ingredients You're Most Likely Already Aware Of "

Respectful criticism:

-> How To Launch A Successful WSO On The Warrior...

Forum: Copywriting

3rd January 2015, 02:55 PM

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Posted By ewenmack

Re: Help me With My Headline

How about doing what almost nobody is doing,
calling out who this is for.

When everybody is screaming bigger and faster results,
your prospects tune out, other than the raw newbies.

I presume...

Forum: Copywriting

3rd January 2015, 05:54 AM

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Posted By celente

Re: Help me With My Headline

look to use about 3 benefits in your headlines like our copywriters do.

Pick three things that gain curiosity. Like this.

"How To Predict A Stock Market Crash Before It happens, Using 3...

Forum: Copywriting

2nd January 2015, 03:58 PM

Replies: 29

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Posted By ewenmack

Re: Help me With My Headline

Better read the new rules for launching WSO'S.

If you make income claims you will be asked to show proof by the administraters.
...

Forum: Copywriting

10th December 2014, 02:12 PM

Replies: 25

Rate My Landing Page

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Posted By elmo033057

Re: Rate My Landing Page

I totally agree with Kevin. It really needs some work. Not a total loss by any means, but you need to rework it.

Let's look a few lines of your header:

"Discover a cool style of marketing..."...

Forum: Copywriting

9th December 2014, 06:52 PM

Replies: 25

Rate My Landing Page

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Posted By Rory Singh

Re: Rate My Landing Page

1)The look and feel of it is nice, the colors all flow easily giving it a trustworthy feel

2) The text at the top (headline) needs to be shortened and maybe a different font. The words are okay...

Forum: Copywriting

25th November 2014, 07:37 AM

Replies: 25

Rate My Landing Page

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Posted By KevinWellsMarketing

Re: Rate My Landing Page

I'd rework the headline for one thing.

The laptop lifestyle stuff is too cliche.

How about mentioning in the headline that your offer doesnt include SEO, MLM etc - could this be a bigger hook?...

What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

12th November 2014, 10:06 AM

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Posted By Mary Davis

Re: What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

Great post! I love great takeaways and insight from new marketing campaigns. Thanks for sharing your observations!

My takeaway is how it took on a secondary challenge of having to re-create and...

What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

12th November 2014, 09:52 AM

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Views: 625

Posted By HostZealot

Re: What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

I wanted to offer you a possible solution.
Actually, everybody gets herpes eventually, it's like flu - you catch it nearly every year and can't do anything with it. Herpes is not always venereal,...

What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

12th November 2014, 09:38 AM

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Views: 625

Posted By vtotheyouknow

Re: What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

Big takeaway for me was how eagerly people embrace attention whoring if they're given permission under the banner of a good cause.

If you can find a way to legitimize peoples' desire to be seen...

What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

12th November 2014, 07:26 AM

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Views: 625

Posted By rhinocl

Re: What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

The question I have is how this challenge could have been altered to produce more contributions?

What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

12th November 2014, 07:15 AM

Replies: 7

Views: 625

Posted By ebooksmaster

Re: What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

That is a nice dissection of ice bucket challenge.
As i look upon you as a authority in viral marketing,
I Hope you wont mind me asking a question that is related to my niche only...
I am in a...

What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

11th November 2014, 04:47 PM

Replies: 7

Views: 625

Posted By DaleRodge

Re: What Did We Learn from the Ice Bucket Challenge from a Marketing Perspective

Nice post, thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Just expanding this point, or rather moving onto another one closely related...

One of my top marketing tips is to never give the visitor chance...

Forum: Copywriting

6th June 2013, 01:08 AM

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Posted By jedsonack2

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

Thats a pretty long title i suppose, and it is not giving clear vision of what you exactly offer. So better to change Title in a manner that it must give perfect idea for the viewer about your offers.

Forum: Copywriting

6th June 2013, 12:50 AM

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Posted By Igor Fridrihs

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

Hey,

1. Make it curious. It works.

2. Highlight your main words by different color, bold, italic, etc. and give highlighted words a chance to compose finished thought. It influences...

Forum: Copywriting

5th June 2013, 06:22 PM

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Posted By travlinguy

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

There is definitely a time to use it.

The problem is that people have heard conversions are better with it. So they go out of their way to put it into the equation. So far out of the way, in...

Forum: Copywriting

5th June 2013, 03:11 PM

Replies: 25

Views: 874

Posted By travlinguy

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

Why is everyone so enamored with the word Discover? Want to improve the headline in your op? Try this:

How To Create Valuable Content To Drive Sick,
Server-Crashing Traffic To Your Sites Today!...

Forum: Copywriting

5th June 2013, 02:08 PM

Replies: 25

Views: 874

Posted By laurencewins

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

I personally don't believe in headlines that have numbers in them...but that is just me. Also I think the headline is way too long. I am sure it can be shortened a bit and still achieve maximum...

Forum: Copywriting

5th June 2013, 01:47 PM

Replies: 25

Views: 874

Posted By urban renewal

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

How about specific numbers like:

"Discover How I Drove 4,587 Targeted Visitors To My Web Page in 48 hours by Leveraging Valuable Content (That Only Took 2 Hours to Create)"

(or whatever numbers...

Forum: Copywriting

5th June 2013, 11:03 AM

Replies: 25

Views: 874

Posted By shawnlebrun

Re: Would You Guys Help Me Improve My Headline?

So, let me ask....

What is your single biggest problem your target market has?

What is your single best solution you can come up with, to help them solve that problem.

Can you weave any...

Kindle Publishers: A Fast & Easy Method to Get 15 - 25 Free Amazon Kindle Reviews

28th May 2013, 06:48 AM

Replies: 36

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Posted By LilaJade

Kindle Publishers: A Fast & Easy Method to Get 15 - 25 Free Amazon Kindle Reviews

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Here's a 5-minute method for getting
dozens of reviewers to look at your book
and post reviews on Amazon!

1. Go to...

17th September 2012, 03:57 PM

Replies: 27

Kindle Publishers, What Are Your Best Kindle Tips?

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Posted By pizzatherapy

Re: Kindle Publishers, What Are Your Best Kindle Tips?

I think it is also helpful to set up an author page.

According to Amazon:

"Add your biography, photos, blog, video, and tour events to the Author Page, your homepage on Amazon.com."

I've...

17th September 2012, 03:33 PM

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Kindle Publishers, What Are Your Best Kindle Tips?

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Posted By aprilm

Re: Kindle Publishers, What Are Your Best Kindle Tips?

Hey Ioan,
No prob. Not sure if you can do this in every country, but on Amazon.com you can give your book as a gift right on your book's sales page. You have to actually buy your own book, but it's...

17th September 2012, 08:01 AM

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Kindle Publishers, What Are Your Best Kindle Tips?

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Posted By aprilm

Re: Kindle Publishers, What Are Your Best Kindle Tips?

Hey Ioan,

Since the books are already written, I would focus on the following:

Choose categories for your book that are easy to get into The Best Seller's List.

Do the categories that your...