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Forum: Copywriting 25th June 2009, 08:44 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,040
Posted By Kevin Lam
Re: Review my killer sales page

First off, your headline needs serious work. I'd bounce after seeing a page like that. It looks like one of those PLR pages from the 90's or something where you can find for free all over the...
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2009, 01:53 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,040
Posted By CDarklock
Re: Review my killer sales page

You sound like a geek who discovered something awesome and wants to share, but also recognises the value of his discovery and wants to be rewarded for it.

And geeks don't know how to lie. They're...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 18th June 2009, 11:45 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 920
Posted By Chris Drinkwater
Re: Help me earn $1000 to support The Wife and Kids

Hi.. I guess your post got moved? Anyway I saw this in the main forum and if you can do basic seo then this looks doable to me...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 18th June 2009, 11:25 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 920
Posted By dvduval
Re: Help me earn $1000 to support The Wife and Kids

Start a google document and start writing out your plan. Include the things you know how to do (design websites, do seo, copy writing, mentoring). Then under each of these items note some specific...
Forum: Copywriting 8th December 2008, 05:44 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 687
Posted By Lambert Klein
Re: Advice - FREE Automatic marketing solution

I think your second bullet on "test" is missing a word.
Forum: Copywriting 8th December 2008, 03:04 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 687
Posted By maximus242
Re: Advice - FREE Automatic marketing solution

Graphic design is less frightening but still induces fear.

You have no real headline man. Its more like a product name.

You need a headline... a real one with a benefit. Or two or three.
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