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Forum: Copywriting 22nd March 2012, 06:12 AM
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Re: Promised I wouldn't do this, but can I get a critique?

Hi KimboJim

Just my 2 cents, other people will disagree...

OK first thing: I quite liked the headline.

2) A darker background would draw your eye to the text more

3) Having the order...
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