Forum: Copywriting 
17th November 2014, 11:38 PM
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Views: 1,039  Re: VIDEO SALES LETTER QESTION!!!
HAVE ASWER FOR YOU!!! ;)
Start with a basic powerpoint video sales letter. All you need is powerpoint and camtasia. Or powerpoint and have someone else make the video (what I do).
Once you find...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd October 2014, 10:24 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 3,740 |
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Forum: Copywriting
10th September 2014, 11:51 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,308 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th September 2014, 11:34 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,308 |
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Forum: Copywriting
28th July 2014, 04:12 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,054 |
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Forum: Copywriting
25th March 2014, 10:10 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,317 Re: Is This the Best Salesletter Ever??
lol...
Needs work both in terms of content and design. But not completely terrible. The headline and sub-headline I think work - clear and direct.
I'd look into what your competitors that are...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th March 2014, 11:53 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 1,108 Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?
The 2nd one. It's not about like, it's just better. A lot better. They get their market. Your headline is "Go from NOTHING..." But your target market isn't at "nothing" - they've been trying to dunk,...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th January 2014, 07:17 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,254 Re: Still Only Getting 15% Opt In Rate
Hey. Just curious... how are your opt-ins backing out so far? People throw these big opt-in %'s around all the time, but the reality is 30% is very high. And the opt-in % in and of itself really...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2013, 06:30 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 2,180 Re: Offer/copy/list ratio --- HELP PLEASE!
[QUOTE=Mr. Subtle;8473262]
Financing is a copy element - Zero down at signing and 1% interest for 60 months.
/QUOTE]
Financing is an offer element; it's modifying how the product is offered,...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd September 2013, 07:46 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 2,180 Re: Offer/copy/list ratio --- HELP PLEASE!
I would agree with what Brian posted. Exact numbers don't matter but relevantly speaking, that's about right.
Offer is absolutely not just the product/service you're selling. It's also how...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th June 2013, 05:53 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 4,807 Re: Do you do what Ben Settle says?
I don't think anyone is disputing the power of proof. It's this that people disagree with:
Frank Kern had a very involved launch, leveraging all kinds of tactics - likability being at the top...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
3rd June 2013, 08:10 PM
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Replies: 457
Views: 17,525 Re: The 2012-2013 Official NBA Thread
Spoelstra definitely owes Vogel a nice Christmas card this year for pulling George and Hibbert during the first half.
If the Heat win, that was the game.
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Forum: Copywriting
21st May 2013, 10:09 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 981 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2013, 01:08 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,274 |
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Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2013, 02:48 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,481 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2013, 10:43 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 784 Re: The copy
Steve,
I think a lot of marketers overlook this. "Likeability" can be very powerful.
I don't necessarily disagree with other opinions here. The objective of sales copy is not humor. Of course...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th March 2013, 10:13 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,116 |
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Forum: Copywriting
4th March 2013, 09:37 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 12,208 Re: Chris Haddad's Latest VSL...
I think the offer is a lot weaker than his others. I mean... I could be mistaken... but I don't think a long distance relationship is that appealing to most people.
I still give them credit for...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd March 2013, 10:31 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 12,208 Re: Chris Haddad's Latest VSL...
Fantastic opening. He makes an irresistible offer within the first minute. I also found it interesting how quickly he introduces the product (around 12 minutes in) and then proceeds to close hard for...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th February 2013, 10:29 PM
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Replies: 38
Views: 1,378 Re: Another boring-ass video?
Mainly because it's being seen by people who already see the speaker as credible. In other words: warm traffic. From his list or other respected "gurus".
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Forum: Copywriting
25th February 2013, 12:41 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,855 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th February 2013, 02:59 AM
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Replies: 33
Views: 1,383 Re: A Headline That Works
Yes, I think it does. Personally I'd go a size smaller and change it to Arial or Arial Narrow. But really... I wouldn't worry too much about it. I recently changed the font on a sales page from Times...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th February 2013, 03:35 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 1,383 Re: A Headline That Works
Where's the traffic coming from? It makes a big difference. Are you looking for more clients from WF, or actual brick and mortar local businesses?
In either case, I think what you have right now...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th February 2013, 06:38 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,084 |
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
10th February 2013, 03:15 PM
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Replies: 457
Views: 17,525 Re: The 2012-2013 Official NBA Thread
Lakers are such a disaster.
The problem is clearly D'Antoni and Howard. I don't know how that isn't blatantly obvious to everyone. Howard is not going to get a ring, ever. Me, me, me players......
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Forum: Copywriting
9th February 2013, 09:33 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 903 Re: Copywriters for Banner Ads
Yes - come up with some good copy and instruct your designers to create banners that emphasize it... But c'mon, you already knew that, right? :)
This is true...
The last thing you need...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th January 2013, 08:56 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 1,256 Re: Advice for Sales Letter & Site
No problem. Yeah, "lack of competition" is the last reason to choose a market. It's actually the #1 reason to avoid it. Why? Because in a competitive market, people are already spending money. It's...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th January 2013, 01:19 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,677 |
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Forum: Copywriting
6th January 2013, 10:57 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 643 Re: Advice on Using Imagery
Yes, it's appropriate. Anything that you think will help advance the sale is appropriate.
Don't get too caught up with the mechanics. Copywriting is an art, not a science. When in doubt......
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Forum: Copywriting
20th December 2012, 09:39 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 873 Re: Sales Ad fo Cold Caller
Hey Highlander,
I think it's awesome that you're taking the initiative to help businesses get results.
As far as your ad... First off, what is the post title? That is essentially your headline...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th December 2012, 12:21 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,447 |
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Forum: Copywriting
11th December 2012, 10:18 AM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,447 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th December 2012, 03:46 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,447 Re: Couple Quick Questions For Copywriters
So your personal preferences as a consumer take precedence over what the market votes for with her wallet?
If video sales letters convert better without the controls then why is your personal...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th December 2012, 08:26 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,447 Re: Couple Quick Questions For Copywriters
1)
Not at all.
As a marketer, I will cheerfully sit though it (assuming I've done a little research and have confirmed it's successful) and observe why it's successful. Actually, if it's...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th October 2012, 12:53 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 3,783 |
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Forum: Copywriting
24th September 2012, 04:41 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 717 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th September 2012, 03:24 PM
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Replies: 83
Views: 2,368 Re: Using the F bomb in my headline
Getting attention and getting someone to take a desired action
are two completely different things.
How many successful headlines can you think of without the
F word? How many can you think of...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd August 2012, 12:12 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 2,910 |
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Forum: Copywriting
16th August 2012, 07:37 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 2,910 |
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Forum: Copywriting
14th August 2012, 09:50 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 2,910 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th August 2012, 03:34 PM
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Replies: 37
Views: 6,569 Re: Looking for a Free Copywriting Course
Read the newsletters posted on this site: The Gary Halbert Letter (http://www.thegaryhalbertletter.com/) and the archives on this site: http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/
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Forum: Copywriting
8th August 2012, 01:37 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 834 Re: Critique This Sales Copy
"Get back to basics!"??? in sales copy... Uh yeah, no way my friend.
What should the headline be? Well consider these three questions:
1) What is the ultimate benefit your service offers?
2)...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
21st June 2012, 09:35 PM
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Replies: 412
Views: 11,322 Re: NBA Season 2011-12
lol... Hey, when you're wrong you're wrong.
It seems like everything that could possibly go right for Miami is. Unreal shooting %, role players stepping up left and right... etc...etc...
And...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
10th June 2012, 01:21 PM
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Replies: 412
Views: 11,322 Re: NBA Season 2011-12
From a completely objective POV I really think OKC is gonna destroy Miami. Better players, better talent, better coaching, more heart, better chemistry, better fans...etc. Just about better in every...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
6th June 2012, 09:54 PM
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Replies: 412
Views: 11,322 Re: NBA Season 2011-12
I think we are!!! Yeah buddy, awesome to watch!
Kinda reminds me of watching the Bulls in the 90's... Yeah, I know... of course they are FAR from that kinda team at this point... but what I mean...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
5th June 2012, 10:43 PM
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Replies: 412
Views: 11,322 Re: NBA Season 2011-12
On paper the Heat are clearly better... Younger, in better physical shape ...etc. But the Celtics are straight up WARRIORS. These guys want it, and they play like a TEAM. Seriously inspiring to...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
5th June 2012, 02:29 PM
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Replies: 412
Views: 11,322 Re: NBA Season 2011-12
yeah did you see when he blocked that shot right before halftime when the whistle had already been blown? lol NBA playoff basketball!!! He'll mature... and despite his dumb plays (like that double...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
22nd May 2012, 03:01 PM
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Replies: 412
Views: 11,322 Re: NBA Season 2011-12
I have no idea how Lebron was declared the MVP... Kevin Durant is an absolute stunner. That guy has ice in his veins and performs his best when it matters! Not only that, but he's humble and lets his...
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Forum: Copywriting
1st May 2012, 03:01 PM
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Replies: 35
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Forum: Copywriting
14th March 2012, 09:28 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 934 Re: Are Traditional Sales Copies Still The Answer
I'd do it now. Not to put water on your fire by any means... but I think that sales copy is going to have a tough time converting. See, that's another great thing about video... you can get away with...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th March 2012, 09:46 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 934 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2012, 07:48 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,458 |
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Forum: Copywriting
4th March 2012, 02:05 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 4,792 Re: Bill Jayme Ads?
More of his work can be seen cited in this report:
http://www.andyowen.co.uk/pdfs/copywriting_andy_owen_bill_jayme_the_greatest_copywriter_of_them_all.pdf
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd March 2012, 05:04 PM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,151 Re: Critique My Copy and Get My Program Free
You have a lot of work to do my man...
First off, the first 3 paragraphs... there's no big promise. No hook. If you don't grab people right away, they're gone.
Then you go on to say you're...
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Forum: Copywriting
1st February 2012, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 59
Views: 3,495 Re: Fiction recommendations?
Sydney Sheldon... incredible storyteller. Try "The Master of the Game" or "A Stranger in the Mirror".
Even though he didn't start writing novels until his mid 50's, there aren't too many people...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th October 2011, 07:40 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 2,026 |