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Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 11:20 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By simdog
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

You've already gotten a few comments basically saying you have a lot to work on.

Here's what I see...

What's In It For Me?

Forget super cool headlines and ninja persuasion skills. I don't...
Forum: Copywriting 21st January 2010, 07:11 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,125
Posted By simdog
Re: Sales Letter Advice Please

Hey Ben, I just wanted to add my two cents.

That headline makes me cringe. It’s so close to Carlton’s headline but the problem is you don’t have the hook Carlton had... so it just doesn’t work...
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