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Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2011, 09:01 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 479
Posted By Nicks Iglesias
Re: Any thoughts on my sales page?

Hmm... Its good to some extent. But i suggest you to add more realistic testimonials.. :)
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2011, 08:56 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 479
Re: Any thoughts on my sales page?

Agree with the other comments that this is a little bland and doesn't really grab the attention.

One of your problems is that "mindset" might have been a new thing for Internet Marketers a couple...
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2011, 08:35 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 479
Posted By AlfieBoy
Re: Any thoughts on my sales page?

I would lose the weird stare in your pic. It looks as if you're trying to hard to look intense and hypnotic. You can't hypnotize people from a photo... Woof woof I'm a dog, I'm a dog tickle my tum,...
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2011, 07:15 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 479
Posted By stevenalowe
Re: Any thoughts on my sales page?

The headline does not grab my attention.

The purpose of the headline is to get the reader's attention, and compel them to read the sub-head

the sub-head should immediately address a benefit to...
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2011, 07:04 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 479
Posted By maximus242
Re: Any thoughts on my sales page?

Graphic design helps not hinders.

Biggest thing required in this copy is more belief. The prospect must believe, with feeling, that this is the missing key to their success. Look at how the same...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2011, 10:15 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By Stephen Bray
Arrow Re: Can you please have a quick look at my opt-in landing page?...

Quickly, and off the top of my head:

As others have stated where's your proof?

It could be that I'm English but I fancy the voice is just a little too over-produced and powerful.


It...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2011, 08:50 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By IMBotz
Re: Can you please have a quick look at my opt-in landing page?...

Your third bullet point is missing a 'to' how slash learning curve. And the video is well made:).
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2011, 08:43 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By Hans Klein
Re: Can you please have a quick look at my opt-in landing page?...

Yep... Daniel got the main issue.

There's nothing special about the content you're offering.

Who are you? Why don't the "Gurus" share these secrets? How did you discover them?

On a short...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2011, 08:00 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By jbtooloo
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2011, 09:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Can you please have a quick look at my opt-in landing page?...

Answer this question in your copy...

"Why should I listen to you? What credibility do you have that makes it worth my while to take your advice?"

Everyone's pushing the offer you have made....
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2011, 08:23 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By TopKat22
Re: Can you please have a quick look at my opt-in landing page?...

I can't exactly put my finger on it. Maybe it is just because I don't like video, I can read a lot a glance and usually bounce right off pages that have video on them. My mentors say no videos or...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2011, 08:18 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By Karson
Re: Can you please have a quick look at my opt-in landing page?...

I would say its pretty good.

It is defiantly targeted at newbs.

The video voice is pretty powering, I might prefer a normal voice I could relate with. You can get voice overs at fiverr.
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2011, 01:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 690
Posted By jaggyjay
Re: ExitSplash Breaking My Buy Buttons!

Hey Anth,

Hmmm... Is the "Add to Cart" a link or image button on a page you control?

If so, try this workaround:

Copy the following code to the inside of your HTML Head Tags:


<script...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th July 2011, 06:03 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,194
Posted By Andy Fletcher
Re: What Were Your Biggest "stumbling blocks" before really making money online?

Definitely a lack of focus and a lack of business mindset for me.

I definitely fell into the trap of trying a little bit of everything (although that experience is now very useful I'd have done a...
Forum: Finished Contests & Challenges 11th December 2010, 11:51 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 10,690
Posted By theplugindude
Re: Post Your Obstacles! $100 CASH To The Most Thanked Post!

Hello there.

I can see what your problem is.

If you want I can be your mentor and help you make money online..
I genuinely want to help ppl out there...So if you want coaching,pm me or shoot...
Forum: Mind Warriors 14th November 2010, 05:26 PM
Replies: 286
Views: 17,642
Posted By Mario Brown
Re: Newbies, PLEASE WAKE UP! The Truth About Internet Marketing

Thanks everyone for the kind words !!!

I'm happy that I could inspire so many people with this video and I'm going to keep them coming! :)

So get rid of these darn distractions and focus on one...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 5th July 2009, 03:02 PM
Replies: 109
Views: 7,002
Posted By freedomguy
Lightbulb Re: I'm A Newbie And Who Do I Trust

Hi Starr

There is some very good advice in this thread, but in answer to the question 'Who do I trust?' I would answer, trust someone who is willing to help you get started without initially...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 2nd July 2009, 05:08 PM
Replies: 109
Views: 7,002
Posted By metabinltd
Re: I'm A Newbie And Who Do I Trust

Trust no-one! Nobody will show you all the pieces of the puzzle, all the big marketers just advertise each other's pieces of the puzzle.

You are prime picking for them as you are desperate to...
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