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Forum: Copywriting 3rd December 2011, 05:22 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 886
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Extremely Important

Perhaps a dumb question, but why "traditional" over "tradition"? Is it because the word "tradition" conjures up something that "anti" types are trying to stay away from or is there some other reason?...
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2011, 09:51 PM
Replies: 73
Views: 3,741
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: "Not Professional Enough; OMG You've Gotta Be Kidding"

I would get rid of the bit that refers to your potential buyer as illiterate. You incentivize your reader not to identify with your message by using that term.

Using the wording “Good cause I’m...
Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2011, 12:01 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 10,308
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Something Important (Please Read)

Donation made. Hoping for a positive outcome for Ken.
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2011, 07:17 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,589
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: How Good Are You?

Gotta love an Ohio guy with an awesome Britt kind of wit.
Forum: Copywriting 6th November 2011, 11:34 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 601
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Question: Persuasion - Getting Customers To Walk In Your Shoes?

In most instances, for them to agree with you, you need to have them believe that you agree with them. Instead of having them come to where you are, you are going to where they are and walking to...
Forum: Copywriting 6th November 2011, 09:06 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,185
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Would Your Copy Actually Sell In The Real World?

The point of copywriting is to persuade. I think most of us agree on that, yes? I hope the methods of persuasion you use in selling are different than the style you've used in this post, because...
Forum: Copywriting 4th November 2011, 06:50 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,065
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Would You Say That Social Proof Outsells Sales Copy?

The age of your target market factors into how much weight your audience gives social proof verses sales copy. Preteens and teens will likely place more orders based on social proof then sales copy,...
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2011, 07:15 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,232
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Looking for a good copywriter

If the goal of using words to express a product or service is making sales, isn't that copywriting?
Forum: Copywriting 30th October 2011, 09:36 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 2,334
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: She's Tired Of Waiting

I understand where you're coming from, but I think many people will do a double take because they think she is flipping the bird... and that will grab their attention long enough to get the billboard...
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2011, 06:24 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,286
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Drilling down to the slogan

I actually really like that, Steve.
Forum: Copywriting 18th October 2011, 09:46 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 946
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: I Want You To Want Me - Why Trying To Create Awareness Of A Problem Costs You Money

Thanks, Ewen. I think that is the answer, really... that it depends on why you are offering the product or service to the reader. So different intentions have different patterns of connecting with...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2011, 07:43 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 861
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Practice

I am in that stage now, Thomas (and taking on a few projects here and there). Very good advice.
Forum: Copywriting 12th October 2011, 08:51 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 840
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Need Your Help: should I offer to strip to my undies here?

Also, as I am thinking about hooks and your copy… what is the main benefit of your letter, as it pertains to the people themselves (not as it pertains to their bosses, as you detailed in the PS)?
...
Forum: Copywriting 12th October 2011, 08:25 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 840
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Need Your Help: should I offer to strip to my undies here?

A couple of editorial points:



you said: "My name is Matt and I’m contacting you from Swallow Tail Secret Super Club. We’re a culinary event’s and…"
Is that supposed to be “Super” or was it...
Forum: Copywriting 11th October 2011, 10:57 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 2,303
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: My first-ever PAYING copy writing client... I need advice.

Thanks, Toniy. I always enjoy your posts and the personality infused in them.
Forum: Copywriting 10th October 2011, 10:42 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 708
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Differentiating my "Make Money" copywriting from the competition?

I really love the following line by Lora:
There's a huge unsaturated market that you're unaware of -- and it's right under your nose!

I don't know if the copywriters here work with NLP in their...
Forum: Copywriting 10th October 2011, 10:32 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 2,303
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: My first-ever PAYING copy writing client... I need advice.

Just wanted to say congratulations on landing your first paying gig!
Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2011, 12:40 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 708
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: Differentiating my "Make Money" copywriting from the competition?

I found some of your subheading and other "down the page" text to be more compelling than the headline: "Make Money Buying and Selling Cell Phones". You mentioned that there's a huge untapped market...
Forum: Copywriting 4th October 2011, 01:21 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,364
Posted By CopyWriteHer
Re: How 1 Question On The Warrior Forum Launched My Career

Thanks, Steve. It does help, yes. I am really amazed by the wealth of knowledge and insight in this community.
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