Forum: Copywriting
30th January 2013, 05:16 PM
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Replies: 3
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Forum: Copywriting
30th January 2013, 05:13 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,206 Re: Hate on my Squeeze Page
Hey there,
If this is your first copywriting attempt, than good job, you're wayyy better than most newbies.
Here are my thoughts:
First of all, big claims need either big proof or a unique...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th January 2013, 05:03 PM
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Replies: 80
Views: 2,066 Re: What services are you outsourcing and why?
Graphic design is what I outsource the fastest. There are so many good deals out there. I've actually gotten ebook covers off Fiverr.com that were better than ones my friends paid $300 for.
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Forum: Copywriting
29th January 2013, 04:09 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 683 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th January 2012, 06:53 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 918 Re: My first product - criticism desired!
Hey Nick,
Welcome to the Warrior Forum! (And for the record, there's no better reason to join than to get help on your current projects you're taking action on.)
I'd work on tapping the big...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2011, 03:44 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 1,016 Re: New to copywriting, help please
Hey Blaze,
"Just keep writing" is necessary but far, far from what is sufficient to get paid for your work. You can be an amazing writer and still not have any idea how to write great sales copy...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th June 2011, 03:27 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 953 Re: Does my squeeze page suck?
Hey 4K,
Some major issues to correct on this one.
First off, you need to create a headline that gives a compelling description of what you offer and why it's special. You have a nice "slogan"...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd January 2011, 04:56 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,041 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
27th September 2010, 01:05 PM
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Replies: 54
Views: 1,427 Re: What Makes You Click Unsubscribe
With most email lists, if I'm not interested, I often just won't open the emails anymore, and they'll go unread into my archive.
However, there is one type of email promotion that peeves me off so...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th September 2010, 07:37 PM
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Replies: 61
Views: 4,824 Re: good copy outside the 'make money'/IM niche?
Hey Dave,
Ross Jeffries (of SpeedSeduction.com) had a legendary one for his home study course ten years ago. His new copy is ok, but his old sales letter was dynamite. I had to search for it,...
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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
11th September 2010, 10:30 PM
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Replies: 59
Views: 14,482 |
Forum: Copywriting
29th August 2010, 01:39 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 818 Re: Can You Help me Choose The Best Headline
Hey Warren,
Davemiz is right, testing overrides all.
However, here is a critique of your headline strategy anyway.
1) It's unclear what the "$2000+" represents. Is it $2000 a month? A...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th August 2010, 04:58 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,022 The "Catchy Slogan" Trap
Hey guys,
Since there are a lot of new copywriters here, and business owners interested in improving conversion rates, I'm going to be sharing something more basic, but absolutely essential today....
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Forum: Copywriting
27th August 2010, 01:39 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 3,060 |
Forum: Copywriting
22nd July 2010, 12:35 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 617 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
20th July 2010, 09:13 PM
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Replies: 71
Views: 2,525 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
6th July 2010, 05:52 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 2,102 If You're Broke, Ask Yourself This...
"Do I love money more than I hate poverty?"
I got this question from watching Bob Proctor's "Born Rich" program, and it had a profound effect on me.
There are twin polarities in achievement: ...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th July 2010, 05:28 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 731 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th July 2010, 01:49 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,316 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th July 2010, 01:19 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,214 Re: First copy writing job
My thoughts:
Quite good for a first try!
Let me give you some feedback for you to make it even stronger...
DESIGN:
I know you were thinking about copy here more than design, but visual...
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