Forum: Copywriting 
8th April 2014, 12:06 PM
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Replies: 63
Views: 3,404  Re: Helping a homeless guy out...
Hey Mark... you might want to tell the story of transformation that's already happened.
How by his action and intention of sitting down to write and finish his book... the coffee shop is rallying...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th April 2014, 07:13 AM
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Replies: 63
Views: 3,404 Re: Helping a homeless guy out...
This is very cool Mark.
If you create a blog, you might want to use Culture | Tumblr (http://www.tumblr.com/spotlight/culture) as a platform to get traffic and social media that sh*t up.
I...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2013, 07:48 AM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,293 |
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Forum: Copywriting
4th January 2013, 09:02 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 895 Killer Makes Bread (Damaging Admission Inside)
I was browsing Reddit this morning and came across this
picture of a loaf of bread...
A Loaf Of Bread (http://i.imgur.com/e3fiS.jpg)
Only... it's not any ordinary bread.
It's made by a...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th July 2012, 08:54 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,096 |
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Forum: Copywriting
16th June 2012, 11:41 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 886 Re: Life story in sales copy!?
Think in terms of how who you are... helps you SELL.
A story about a visit to the hospital and nearly losing everything for a weight loss product can help you. Not just because it helps connect...
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Forum: Copywriting
1st April 2012, 04:06 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 919 Re: First CB product would like Honest reviews..
You've got a lot more work to do. Not because what you've done so far is that bad. But... because this is an ultra-competitive market. You're not where you need to be yet.
Here are some notes:
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Forum: Copywriting
21st March 2012, 02:14 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 752 Re: What Would You Do If...
>>> What would you do?
Yep... listen to Daniel.
Something else is when you're just getting started...
You don't have to wait for clients to come to you... you can go to them.
Contact up...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2012, 07:06 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,298 Re: Sales letter from Heaven? or Hell!
Hi Sev,
A big note for you...
You need to work on crafting a better offer... what it is that you're going to give the prospect when he/she responds to your letter.
For instance, your offer...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th March 2012, 07:26 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,051 |
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd February 2012, 03:43 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 823 Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?
Hi Melanie...
You're on the right track. But, here are some notes for you to make your sales copy even better...
First... the biggest objection you face is... "I can't do it." Your target...
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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
23rd January 2012, 01:51 PM
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Replies: 51
Views: 11,075 Re: mobile money bandit
Inside the members area, Justin has a list of around 20 affiliate networks for just U.S. affiliates and a second list of about 15 affiliate networks that people in other countries can apply to.
...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd November 2011, 02:51 PM
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Replies: 182
Views: 11,034 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2011, 01:38 PM
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Replies: 30
Views: 773 Re: I cant get my website to convert
You've already received lots of comments on your design. But... when you get that solved, you still have a lot of work to do fine-tuning your pitch.
Here are some notes regarding the copy:
*...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th November 2011, 08:43 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 642 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd October 2011, 08:08 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 878 Re: My first Opt-In Copy page
Hi Diana,
Ashley is right. The sample headers you have are pretty bad.
So... first thing I'd do is remove them.
The second thing is you need to spend some money to get better background...
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Forum: Copywriting
20th September 2011, 12:49 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,123 Re: 7 Facts you didn't know ...
Gary Halbert had a good issue on how to incorporate odd facts into the intro of your copy:
The Gary Halbert Letter (http://www.thegaryhalbertletter.com/Newsletters/zaza_interesting_facts.htm)
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Forum: Copywriting
5th September 2011, 10:14 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 879 |
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2011, 12:42 PM
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Replies: 40
Views: 1,700 Re: Do I need to fire this copywriter?
I hate to say it. I would love to be supportive of whoever wrote this.
But I don't think this piece isn't salvageable without a complete rewrite.
The entire premise of "Mental weight loss" is a...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th August 2011, 09:09 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 914 Re: I Don't Know What I'm Doing Wrong?
Hi Matt,
A couple of notes:
* Why is keyword research important?
You say, "you show how to find the best keywords"... but how are they the "Best?"
Get more specific...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th August 2011, 11:33 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 556 Re: A/B Split Tests
The easiest way to get started is a tool provided by Google: http://www.google.com/websiteoptimizer
The main things you need to watch out for are:
1. Making sure you've received enough traffic...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th August 2011, 11:12 AM
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Replies: 53
Views: 3,610 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th August 2011, 08:22 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 947 Re: My First Copywriting Attempt!
Hi John...
Far more important than what the copy says... is how you're positioning yourself.
Give yourself a pay raise... and don't call yourself another "Article writer."
Look around in the...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th July 2011, 08:26 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 948 |
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Forum: Copywriting
15th June 2011, 02:26 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 892 Re: Copywriters coming to the NC Warrior Event?
Brian you and Sam did a great job putting together the event. It was good to meet you and hang with Mike, Ross, and all the other copywriters there. It was a packed house!
Looking forward to next...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th June 2011, 08:05 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,210 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th June 2011, 12:47 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 892 Re: Copywriters coming to the NC Warrior Event?
Hey... don't hate. I like to keep my toes looking good. They are after all the most underrated, of all body parts. I mean without them... you may have minor difficulty swimming or running swiftly....
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Forum: Copywriting
31st May 2011, 07:04 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 682 Re: Is this heading in the right direction?
Hi Jackson...
>>> cost you more money to get someone to rewrite it or is going to cost you precious time in making it reach that level of quality that you strive to deliver to your readers.
...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th April 2011, 08:44 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 770 Re: Critique This Hostel's Sales Copy Please? :)
Why should someone stay here versus another hostel?
So, it's not just giving the benefits (safe, clean, etc...). But, what's you're strongest selling point others lack? Then, drive this home. Why...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th November 2010, 10:14 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 2,296 |
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Forum: Copywriting
18th November 2010, 08:55 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 2,296 Re: Yep It's Here!! Christmas Offer Sales Letter
This is the perfect email to tell a story... to remind folks' about childhood memories or old times of Holiday's past where music was an integral part of the experience.
Tell a story about how the...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd November 2010, 08:25 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 880 |
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Forum: Copywriting
25th October 2010, 07:08 AM
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Replies: 28
Views: 902 Re: Which Headline Is More Powerful?
With money and the success of your piece on the line, it would be wise to head back to the drawing table.
How should you do this?
Here are a few possibilities to consider:
* Start by...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd October 2010, 09:08 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 548 Re: New Sales Page - Feedback Appreciated
Hi Mike... Here are a few quick comments from taking a glance:
* How can you get more specific? "Truck loads of Hungry buyers" might be transformed into something with more specific claims like,...
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Forum: Copywriting
20th October 2010, 11:49 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,226 Re: Graphics in Copy?
Graphics tend to go one of two routes:
1. Distract from the selling process. Rather than focusing on the copy, the reader focuses on the graphics that don't have much meaning.
2. Enhance...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd September 2010, 12:53 PM
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Replies: 67
Views: 3,363 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th September 2010, 09:07 AM
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Replies: 68
Views: 6,960 Re: Why Are Copywriters So Expensive?
I think what a lot of marketers miss is that a skilled copywriter is NOT just someone in charge of putting words to paper.
But, he or she helps run the show. A good copywriter also:
* Helps...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th September 2010, 05:30 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,016 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th September 2010, 12:41 PM
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Replies: 42
Views: 1,190 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th August 2010, 01:28 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 893 |
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Forum: Copywriting
24th August 2010, 10:11 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 1,435 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th August 2010, 09:58 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 1,503 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th August 2010, 08:19 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 3,120 Re: How I got my first Client
Cool topic.
Here's my "first client" story...
I had written for myself and studied a lot of the books...
Learning about direct-response was something that I was passionate about.
So, at...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th August 2010, 09:39 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,008 |
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Forum: Copywriting
31st July 2010, 06:55 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,093 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th July 2010, 07:09 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 715 |
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Forum: Copywriting
28th June 2010, 01:36 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 861 Re: My Flyer for services - How Bad is It?
Hi Eric,
Rather than educate your prospects about direct-response (they don't care)... tell them what it does for them (I wouldn't even mention the word "direct-response" in your lead gen ad)
...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st May 2010, 07:40 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,070 Re: How would you sell or position this?
Hi Gixxer,
Great question.
>>>I've lived it and learned and can help a lot of people.
That's great that you're actually practicing what you preach.
The thing about alternative health/...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th May 2010, 08:19 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 1,268 Re: Any chance of having a peek...
The first thing that hit me is that the headline says, "Finally what astronomers have been looking for", but the market seems like it would be amateurs and so I am think you need to put the word...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th May 2010, 09:19 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,092 |
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Forum: Local Meetups, Mastermind Groups and Warrior Events
26th June 2009, 10:36 AM
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Replies: 109
Views: 8,208 |