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Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 01:52 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 893
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Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:42 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 759
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Stop trying to get money and contribute instead

You're pretty profound for a young guy!!

What a sagacious and wise post! I believe that the reason people are so unhappy in this world is the constant focus on the self, which emanates from an...
Forum: Copywriting 25th April 2012, 10:33 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,553
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Are You Comfortable Using FEAR to Sell Your SOLUTION?

Speaking as a reader (of a multitude of sales copy), I find fear to be a powerful motivator to push that Buy Now button. If a writer doesn't expose my fear or soothe my pain (as mentioned above), the...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd April 2012, 12:55 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 1,623
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Copywriters Are To Blame for the Ignorance Taking Over the Planet!

Agreed. SMH.

And furthermore, Mark. COPYWRITERS ARE NOT responsible, as a collective unit, for destroying the planet. I'm a vegan too, but I know Big Ag / Dairy are chiefly responsible for the...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd April 2012, 11:55 AM
Replies: 67
Views: 2,142
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Did you quit your job?

Yes. I quit. My job was a horrible, low-paying nightmare.

I jumped in with both feet.

This is much better than a long commute, office politics, and long work hours.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2012, 07:55 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,150
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Sales page critique needed?

Hi Beats,

Yes. Regardless of the direction you take, it's undeniable that you NEED copy written. None of us dispute that.

IMHO, the size of the ebook doesn't matter if you're giving them a...
Forum: Copywriting 21st April 2012, 08:13 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,150
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Sales page critique needed?

Hello Beats,

My ex was a DJ, so that's all I heard about. Your program would have been perfect for him!

I have to agree with videolover7 on this one. It sounds like you're giving away the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:35 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,025
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: YOU Are a Major Factor in Whether or Not Your Copy Converts

...which was determined by their approach...which was ultimately determined by their mindset.

Sorry. I drank the Kool-Aid. Burp.

Shanen
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:08 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,332
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Critique for my first sales page. Thanks from a Newbie

Wow, Mark. That was the most eloquent evisceration I've ever witnessed on a forum.

Makes me want to tighten up my own game. Spot on, mate.
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2012, 12:52 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Thanks Mark! That was such a helpful post. I've checked out your blog too. I couldn't wrap my head around all of it, but I do like your overall message about getting rid of limiting beliefs.

P.S....
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 09:09 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

You guys are awesome. Thank you, Mark. This is spot on. I think I'm ready to go write an award-winning control!! (Where's the fist bump emoticon when you need one?)

Why didn't I just join this...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 08:04 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Ahhh man! I thought I caught all of those! Dangit! Thanks for clarifying, I did waffle on whether to include the dollar sign or not.




LMAO!!! Thanks. :D I will be sure to do those daily...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 05:15 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

(Ohmigod, Reflection Marketing. Tell me how you really feel. :o)

Truthfully speaking, however, I do appreciate your point of view. It's obvious that I really overreached in trying to appeal to the...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 03:16 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Thanks Steve, I know I'm not really spooking anyone, but I thought it would add a bit of intrigue. :o I do like your angle about turning the newbie thing into a benefit, so I'll work on that tonight...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 02:51 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 980
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Headline feedback, please

What about "a floor care service" that they'd rave about? It is after all a service, right?
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 01:54 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 980
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Headline feedback, please

Personally, the first one did it for me. It was more specific. The second one left me thinking, "Brag about to whom?"

I think that the reader will get an instant mental picture of their best girl...
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