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Forum: Off Topic Forum 23rd September 2010, 12:13 PM
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Posted By BenSalez
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st August 2009, 09:46 PM
Replies: 568
Views: 18,978
Posted By admin
[YOU] Is A World Famous Internet Marketing Master!

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th June 2009, 10:12 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 5,527
Posted By Tom Brite
The How To -> Quickly Ping Any Open Page In Seconds! Time Saver Tip/Trick!

Hey,

This little trick i use will save you alot of time in the long run and will allow you to simply click the bookmark on your browser and then it will automatically add in the url and other...
Forum: Copywriting 19th February 2009, 07:38 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By Bruce NewMedia
Re: Bash it-Please critique my salespage

OK, here goes: Bad font for headline. I'd replace with Verdana for instance.

You make big over-the-top claims and offer absolutely NO PROOF - NOTHING.

Why not show a sample article in Ezine...
Forum: Copywriting 18th February 2009, 06:48 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By colmodwyer
Re: Bash it-Please critique my salespage

Your header graphic seems a little over the top and distracts from the stuff that actually does the selling.

There is smidgens of really good copy in your sales letter, but it looks as though you...
Forum: Copywriting 17th February 2009, 02:33 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By procopywriter
Re: Please critique my salespage

Yes... good points so far. Copy is very awkward and needs a lot of work.

The headline is too long and convoluted. Why is the capitalization inconsistent? "Mind Blowing" is just as worn out as...
Forum: Copywriting 16th February 2009, 07:00 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Please critique my salespage

Speaking of 'laser targeted,' that phrase is getting pretty worn out...
Forum: Copywriting 16th February 2009, 06:57 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By FitJerk
Re: Please critique my salespage

Scott's got it bang on...

"generate 1,276,220 Laser Targeted Traffic to his articles"

Should be: "...generate 1,276,220 Laser Targeted Leads to his articles"

And if these leads are so...
Forum: Copywriting 16th February 2009, 03:41 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By Scott Murdaugh
Re: Please critique my salespage

First thing, headline.



"used to generate 1,276,220 laser targeted traffic to his articles" doesn't make any sense.

Second, what's the real benefit here? Traffic? Or money? So why not tell...
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