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Forum: Copywriting 17th January 2013, 09:34 AM
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Re: Not asking for a free critique - just some feedback!

The copy itself is very generic, what are you selling exactly, it's not clear?

Personally I think your heading is too long, and it still doesn't tell me anything about what I'm about to read. Tell...
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