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Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2017, 07:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 329
Posted By Zentech
Forum: Copywriting 19th January 2012, 02:48 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,625
Posted By Zentech
Re: If You Read Nothing Else, Read This...

Fantastic post. During my past year or two of working with actual clients and looking at real-world conversions, I've found all of this to be true. There's a metric megaton of copywriting advice out...
Forum: Copywriting 19th January 2012, 02:38 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 853
Posted By Zentech
Re: Help: Need to add more power in my headline

Does anybody else want a massive list the EASY way? Here are ___ killer techniques to explode your list and flood your account with back-end sales that the other guys won't tell you (because they are...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 13th January 2011, 11:19 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,238
Posted By Zentech
Re: 'Golden Radio Voice' Guy Enters Rehab - LOL {Still a junkie}

Bizarre thread. Why would someone revel in another person's misfortune? I'm guessing the OP either secretly or openly hates the homeless. A thread like this doesn't make sense otherwise.

What...
Forum: Mind Warriors 12th January 2011, 09:38 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,489
Posted By Zentech
Re: Where Do YOU Think Greatness Begins?

Greatness begins in the heart. Follow that and you'll move toward it - but don't expect it to be easy. Setbacks and obstacles will be everywhere. They have to be, because that's how you learn to...
Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2011, 09:28 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 2,554
Posted By Zentech
Re: New Copywriters... Dealing With Tricky Customers... Paypal Chargebacks

Never work for cheapskates. If you have a feeling somebody is trying to get the moon for pennies, just turn the client down. The headache you save will be your own, because it's usually clear very...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2011, 06:42 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 604
Posted By Zentech
Re: Question about Long Sales letters

Don't worry about word count. Worry about conversions.

Does it contain enough copy to sell the product? Does it succeed in getting the prospect engaged and highly motivated to buy?

On the other...
Forum: Mind Warriors 5th January 2011, 07:43 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 1,582
Posted By Zentech
Re: Help Please, if You Can

Please, take him to the vet and do whatever the vet suggests. That is the way to help him.

Best of luck, and here's hoping for a quick recovery.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 5th January 2011, 01:11 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 614
Posted By Zentech
Here you go, somebody do this

I have so many business ideas every day that there's no way I could pursue them all even if I had the resources (which I don't). So here's a freebie for whoever wants to act on it.

The thyroid...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th January 2011, 04:49 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,136
Posted By Zentech
Re: 73.86% refund rate!

Huge refund rates are what happens when people massively over-hype mediocre products with killer sales letters, and set overly high price points.

Just part of the business. There are those who...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2011, 07:41 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,166
Posted By Zentech
Jay Abraham School of Copywriting

Mal pointed me to this, and I just wanted to throw him a nod for that, because it's definitely gold. Very easy way to get a metric ton of headline and copy ideas that are coming straight from the...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2011, 12:02 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,343
Posted By Zentech
Re: I hate blind ad copy. And so do you. So why does it sell?

In my opinion, it's because in the IM niche (in particular), a lot of people don't even really want to know what the product is. They may think they want to know what it is, but they really don't -...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd January 2011, 07:53 PM
Replies: 75
Views: 2,930
Posted By Zentech
Re: Making public allegations in this forum

I'd watch her make dirt cakes if it meant watching her...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd January 2011, 07:33 PM
Replies: 89
Views: 5,269
Posted By Zentech
Re: Please show me that it really is possible - $500 a day consistently

I saw it and am about to send a response - but you're right. The letters are good enough and that isn't the problem, IMO.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd January 2011, 05:48 PM
Replies: 75
Views: 2,930
Posted By Zentech
Re: Making public allegations in this forum

Wow, you just admitted you live in a mobile home on Warrior Forum? That takes balls. I'm not making fun of you here, I'm for real. I've seen people torn to shreds for less on forums that weren't...
Forum: Mind Warriors 2nd January 2011, 03:22 PM
Replies: 59
Views: 1,667
Posted By Zentech
Re: Help with Stop Smoking!

I personally haven't found the answer yet - but I'm still working on it. I do intend to find a way to quit. Everybody says that, but everybody ain't me. I will find a way.

Haven't quite found it...
Forum: Copywriting 1st January 2011, 05:58 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,401
Posted By Zentech
Re: Looking for constructive qualified criticism - betta fish care

Yeah, exactly. I'm thinking this is not a naturally lucrative market - but then again, if your pitch is good enough, that may not matter.

Still, I agree with those who voiced concerns about the...
Forum: Copywriting 1st January 2011, 05:32 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,381
Posted By Zentech
Re: Ryan Deiss Hiring Junior Copywriters

Anyone Want To Know How It Feels To Fly? Then Get Ready, Because The Only Thing You'll Be You'll Be Doing Until Further Notice Is Finding Out What It's Like To Be An Eagle.

From The Desk Of: John...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 31st December 2010, 03:27 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 697
Posted By Zentech
Re: Do You Have Any Odd Little Quirks?

I don't have any little quirks. I decided not to have kids.

Hint: For those who don't get the joke, click my sig link. Not trying to get traffic or whatever - trust me, just do it. You'll get the...
Forum: Copywriting 31st December 2010, 04:25 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,830
Posted By Zentech
Re: Gary Halbert's Direct Marketing "Course"

No, I don't mean in a super-detailed way, but just a quick examination of the key points. To examine 5,000 ads in detail, systematically, would of course be a Herculean task and an implausible claim...
Forum: Offline Marketing 31st December 2010, 12:17 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 55,615
Posted By Zentech
Forum: Finished Contests & Challenges 30th December 2010, 09:28 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 6,146
Posted By Zentech
Re: Help Choose My 2011 Charity! (HUGE Prize Package)

Love this thread. I don't have a suggestion for you, but I just wanted to single this thread out for praise. What a wonderful idea for a contest. Best thing I've seen on WF today.
Forum: Copywriting 30th December 2010, 07:09 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 830
Posted By Zentech
Re: 32% conversion rate... Critique required

Anybody fit to write copy for clients wouldn't be asking others to tell them whether they are fit to write copy for clients. I don't mean to insult you, of course. If you're doing as well as you say,...
Forum: Copywriting 30th December 2010, 07:02 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,830
Posted By Zentech
Re: Gary Halbert's Direct Marketing "Course"

Although I personally am not into "courses" and what-not, being more the "natural" type, Gary Halbert's as solid as they come and you really can't miss with anything he says. If he says to paint your...
Forum: Copywriting 30th December 2010, 05:41 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 830
Posted By Zentech
Re: 32% conversion rate... Critique required

This thread is wrongly titled. It should be titled:

"32% conversion rate... Critique NOT required"

Don't fix what ain't broke. If you're doing this well, the last thing you want to do is let...
Forum: Copywriting 30th December 2010, 04:47 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,641
Posted By Zentech
Re: How much should I charge?

Charge what you're worth. This may sound like a non-answer, but the truth is, you know how much you're worth. You may not be clearly aware of it, but that's only because you may not have looked at...
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2010, 11:46 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,277
Posted By Zentech
Re: need opinions on my copy please

Well, I still don't think he's saying that, but if he is, then I'd completely disagree.

The truth is not only relevant, but is essential - not only to staying out of trouble, but to building good...
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2010, 11:15 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,277
Posted By Zentech
Re: need opinions on my copy please

I read it a little differently, Mal. The way I read it, Dan was saying that the fact that it's true has no relevance if it isn't believable. That's different from saying that it's OK to lie. In my...
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2010, 04:48 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 713
Posted By Zentech
Re: Humbly requesting some eyeballs and a little feedback on site copy

Hi Derek,

My chief concern with your site is that I'm not sure what you're offering me. You seem to be trying to play two niches at once, which is an interesting approach, but I'm concerned about...
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2010, 04:08 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,277
Posted By Zentech
Re: need opinions on my copy please

So the "video game Godfather" retired from his "verifiable" million dollar business to sell a $49 Clickbank report?

But other than a few plausibility problems like that, this is pretty good copy....
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2010, 03:11 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,497
Posted By Zentech
Re: Rookie Copywriter Humbly Asking For Help

Hi Eric,



Don't worry about this. What important is not whether you have any experience, it's whether you have any talent. That's something only you know in your heart. If you do, then that's...
Forum: Website Design 18th June 2010, 02:29 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,864
Posted By Zentech
Re: Help Needed With Charity Website Design

Hi Justin,

This is a great charity. The work you're doing is incredibly important, and too few people are doing it. With that in mind, let me give you some preliminary ideas and impressions.
...
Forum: Website Design 18th June 2010, 01:01 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 904
Posted By Zentech
Re: What is the best program/process to create a landing or squeeze page?

Please make sure you hire a copywriter so that your squeeze page not only looks good, but also converts.
Forum: Website Design 18th June 2010, 12:58 AM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,864
Posted By Zentech
Re: Help Needed With Charity Website Design

Hi,

I'm a pro copywriter. If you need help with your content, let me know. I'll do it free.
Forum: Copywriting 16th June 2010, 11:40 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 2,681
Posted By Zentech
Re: Creating a copywriting job board. Brainstorming different markets/categories if anyone wants to

Mike,

Personally, I wish you luck. Some here apparently feel that any copywriter who is looking for work isn't worthy of doing any work. I know that isn't true, and I realize that in this tough...
Forum: Copywriting 15th June 2010, 12:51 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,480
Posted By Zentech
Re: Idea: Remove "that" from your spell check dictionary

That's crazy! It's odd that I never knew that that was that kind of a problem in that context. That is amazing. That I ever though that that was that acceptable is just that kind of mistake that I...
Forum: Copywriting 14th June 2010, 11:29 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,923
Posted By Zentech
Re: How Important Are Testimonials?

I agree with many here. I've had a brief look at the sales page, and testimonials aren't even what you need to be looking at right now. They are important and may be a valuable addition to your...
Forum: Copywriting 11th June 2010, 06:36 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 717
Posted By Zentech
Forum: Copywriting 29th May 2010, 06:08 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,265
Posted By Zentech
Re: Any chance of having a peek...

OK, I'm gonna concede this one to you, Rick. I've read enough of your posts here to have a high respect for your skills. I think Metronicity is good too, but it just seemed like something that might...
Forum: Copywriting 29th May 2010, 01:25 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 3,622
Posted By Zentech
Re: How do I learn copywriting?

Oleg, nice way to cheat someone who was trying to help you with a question you asked and then laugh about it.

You know, one thing you also need to be a successful copywriter is a functioning...
Forum: Copywriting 28th May 2010, 06:35 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,158
Posted By Zentech
Re: Copy Critique Request: Seduction Product (Inner Game, Hypnosis Audio)

It's not bad, but not fantastic. It's rather long and crowded, and I'm not asked to buy until the end. Even if I'm convinced to buy halfway through, nobody asks me to. Some of the bolding and...
Forum: Copywriting 28th May 2010, 12:38 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 838
Posted By Zentech
Re: Need to improve sales copy for an ebay item. Help!

The above is not a re-write, just a little tweaking and clean-up. The copy still isn't the best it could be, but I don't do full re-writes free. Even this much will help, though. Best of luck. :)
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2010, 08:26 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,265
Posted By Zentech
Re: Any chance of having a peek...

It needs some work. There are grammar errors, clumsy phrasing, and ineffective wordings. It's a fairly bad sales letter overall. Looks like an awesome product, though. I'm very into astronomy.
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2010, 11:03 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,107
Posted By Zentech
Re: Quick Help - Which Headline Is Better

#1 by far - with all due respect, this client does not know anything about copywriting if he or she thinks there's a contest. "Pull rank" if necessary. If clients don't trust you to know these...
Forum: Warrior Special Offers 26th May 2010, 07:46 PM
Replies: 8,893
Views: 615,498
Posted By Zentech
Re: 465 Dollars In 4 Hours? No Way!

I just read this WSO and it is very solid. It didn't take me long to read, was super-simple to understand, and I can see for a fact that money can be made.

It's obvious that you can't miss if you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th May 2010, 01:21 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 561
Posted By Zentech
Re: 800 impressions, 2 hops, no sales, how can I do better?

Your ad copy kinda sucks, to be honest. It's generic and doesn't compel anyone to click. How about something more like this:

Starving Artist Wakes Up To Discover $1800 in His PayPal Account,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd May 2010, 11:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 569
Posted By Zentech
Re: The Cat Whisperer-which direction do I take it?

Go with whatever helps to brand you most effectively. You want to build a name as THE cat whisperer. Basically, this is gonna be one central site, and then whatever spinoffs you want to do.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd May 2010, 09:01 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 1,061
Posted By Zentech
Re: Noobie group project. Any takers?

If y'all need a copywriter sometime down the road (and you probably will), hit me up and I'll see if it's something I'd be interested in taking on.
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