Forum: Copywriting 
5th September 2014, 10:16 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192  Re: Please, help critique my copy
I sought the critiques, because I am trying to improve the copy.
I will pick the positive and specific elements in all the critiques, and I will improve it.
I've got a tough skin. Bring it on....
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Forum: Copywriting
5th September 2014, 12:29 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,192 Re: Please, help critique my copy
I truly appreciate your taking the time to offer an in-depth critique.
I will definitely improve the copy, based on the suggestions I've been given.
Best regards,
M.N.
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Forum: Mind Warriors
3rd July 2012, 02:35 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 903 Re: LOVE.. What do you think about it??
If you limit love to the narrow world of male-female relationships, then you'd have to be a bit sceptical, especially if you look at the divorce rates, and listen to those who are in such...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th March 2012, 11:44 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 716 |
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2012, 01:27 AM
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Replies: 35
Views: 1,140 Re: What to do if you have no testomonials
I'm sure you'll get fellow warriors who'd be willing to use the product and provide objective
testimonials. There is a sub-forum, under the ''Warrior products and services section''. All the best...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
11th February 2012, 12:14 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 450 Re: From Copywriting to Info Marketing
I'd suggest joining the War Room, tons of high-quality information available free of charge. Do a search for whatever you're interested in. In addition to that, please check the websites of Fred...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th February 2012, 03:41 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 519 Re: What Do I Have To Do To Win?
At times you have to give up certain things/niches because you come to the realization that there's really no good alignment with your ''real'' self/purpose. They might even be profitable....
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Forum: Mind Warriors
27th December 2011, 09:39 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 5,691 Re: How did Jay Abraham get his Start? / Biography
Jay Abraham's stuff blew me away when I came across them about a decade ago. Simple, almost simplistic strategies and distinctions, yet they work like magic. When I read THE STRATEGY OF PRE-EMINENCE...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
7th December 2011, 02:44 AM
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Replies: 28
Views: 26,741 |
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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
16th June 2011, 12:05 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 2,015 Re: IM coaching with a GUARANTEE
Thanks a lot for this very insightful post. Deep. The idea of ''guaranteed '' income, could easily make one forget vital fundamentals, like the one you shared above.
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Forum: Mind Warriors
6th May 2011, 01:14 PM
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Replies: 38
Views: 1,203 |
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Forum: Mind Warriors
5th May 2011, 01:53 AM
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Replies: 105
Views: 4,432 Re: Can you really control how you think?
What is ''action''? It's really just a more concrete and condense form of thoughts. If you believe we're in control of our actions, then you're agreeing that we can also control our thoughts. Their...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
5th May 2011, 01:39 AM
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Replies: 52
Views: 1,880 Re: What Motivates you ?
I work--very hard. I spend quality time reading uplifting and inspirational literature (I try to integrate some of the lessons). I'm dropping some vices. I listen to lofty classical music. I pray.
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Forum: Mind Warriors
4th May 2011, 01:35 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 740 Re: The Problem With Other People
I'm probably not the ''right'' person to advise you. Seeing as I spend most of my time with my work. No, I think isolating oneself is ultimately limiting. But, I'm a firm believer in identifying...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
4th May 2011, 01:06 AM
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Replies: 97
Views: 3,673 Re: Is SELF-DISCIPLINE the ultimate trait?
Right on the dough, magnates. Baby steps, and the fact that after a while, some of the work actually becomes easier and habitual. If we clarify what we really want, focus...and tweak as results come...
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Forum: Offline Marketing
19th April 2011, 08:48 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 3,135 |
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Forum: Copywriting
18th April 2011, 05:12 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 2,005 Re: Power Verbs
Julie,
The folks at American Writers & Artists Inc. | Make Money Writing | Copywriting Courses | Get Paid To Write | Copywriting Careers (http://www.awaionline.com) have dedicated courses that are...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
5th April 2011, 04:04 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 797 |
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Forum: Mind Warriors
5th April 2011, 03:53 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 841 Re: Ask And It Is Given
I've got to thank you again, bro. I've read about 18 pages. Awesome stuff. The central theme of reconnecting with ''the source'' makes a lot of sense. How can there be lack if we were really...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
2nd April 2011, 03:19 AM
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Replies: 35
Views: 1,667 |
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Forum: Mind Warriors
31st March 2011, 02:05 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 848 Re: Advice From The Grave
Interesting information.
Death is something most of us would rather not think about...yet, it's inevitable.
I've has glimpses of the here-after...indescribable beauty. I'm also a student of...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
31st March 2011, 10:16 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 810 Re: Communication And Public Speaking
I'm a public speaker, and I read a lot. But, nothing beats practice.
I have a few tips, first, I'll recommend, Million Dollar Speaking by Allan Weiss.
The tips: Be completely focused on the...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
30th March 2011, 04:21 AM
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Replies: 104
Views: 6,305 Re: I am very lazy.
Don't be too harsh on yourself, bro.
Even a lot of hard-working folks are spinning their wheels! Find something you're passionate about (it's easier to be more hard-working and focused, when we're...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
29th March 2011, 10:05 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 2,078 Re: Would Robin Hood have good or bad karma?
As a child, Robin was one of my heroes... and don't get me wrong, I still like the dude. But, there's something Machiavellian about his actions. The end does not justify the means. The...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
28th March 2011, 11:55 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,251 Re: A Success Secret
I cannot recall how many times I've read Think and Grow Rich. I agree with the central thrust of your thread. To me, it's about the power of persistence, and how we re-frame failure.
What you're...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th March 2011, 05:01 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 550 Re: writing an e-book
Hello Gunslinger,
If you'll be writing e-books or whatever...you'll need to improve your writing skills (or outsource). There are errors in what you wrote, and that leaves a lot to be desired. It...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
23rd March 2011, 06:35 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,129 Re: Life isn't about finding yourself.
Nothing random about your insight. It may be the starting point, like you noted.
I've discovered that in the sweet and constricting embrace of trying ''to be responsible''...it's quite possible to...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
16th February 2011, 12:46 PM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,157 Re: Ultimate WSO Failure - Lessons I learned
Hello,
Thanks a lot for this. There's a lot to learn from our ''failures'' (are they failures, if we can gain from them?). I was drawn to your thread because I tend to learn more on a deeper...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
13th January 2011, 01:47 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 537 Re: What Is Love?
Love involves treating others as we would like them to treat us. It involves selflessness and putting the welfare, growth and joys of others before ours. It's the strongest power for being and...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th November 2010, 11:11 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,061 |
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Forum: Copywriting
24th November 2010, 02:00 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 743 Re: Question for all you writers out there...
Hi,
My current challenge is how to increase my productivity.I am something of a perfectionist.I like to put in a lot into my writing.Yet,I realise that to increase my earnings,I need to produce at...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
26th October 2010, 10:22 AM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,663 Re: Warriors needed! Desperately needs advice.
Hello Rayson,
I know how you feel.
What I would advice is not sexy,it is simple, and you may not make $4k per month,but,in a little while you can be making a steady 2k per month.You can then...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th October 2010, 02:38 AM
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Replies: 73
Views: 4,279 Re: Luring Men
Is it the law of attraction at work?I was just thinking about the fact that there are very few female copywriters...happened on your post.Interesting question.I gotta think (have to complicate the...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th September 2010, 09:51 AM
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Replies: 35
Views: 2,570 |
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd September 2010, 09:48 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 2,400 |
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Forum: Copywriting
21st September 2010, 02:47 AM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,970 Re: Why Did You Start Copywriting?
I have been writing since I was 15.I love the process of turning some inchoate stuff in my brains into stuff that can enrich myriads.I love the fact that it fills my bank account too.I stumbled into...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
20th September 2010, 04:33 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 793 Re: What is Progress
For me,progress can be positive or negative-it is a sustained movement towards conscious or unconscious goals.I think of it in a holistic sense,encompassing the...
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Forum: Plug-In Profit Site Support Forum
21st March 2010, 12:48 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 2,174 Re: Newbie at Article Writing
Article writing is not difficult.You can find training materials on EzineArticles Submission - Submit Your Best Quality Original Articles For Massive Exposure, Ezine Publishers Get 25 Free Article...
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