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Forum: Warriors For Hire 12th August 2010, 05:35 AM
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Posted By WeavingThoughts
Re: Awesome Writers!!

More feedbacks from satisfied clients :)
Forum: Copywriting 24th March 2010, 03:58 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Rezbi
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

An excellent reason to learn to write copy... even if you don't want to be a copywriter.
Forum: Copywriting 24th March 2010, 02:12 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By dorim
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

No, run as far away from this copywriter as you can.
Forum: Copywriting 19th March 2010, 05:39 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By NicheHunter
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Jimisan,

Honestly, if I had gone to the website I would not have bought anything. It is not because the sales copy is bad, it's because the website itself does not hold my attention. It's laid...
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2010, 09:53 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By zenmarketing
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

I couldn't bring myself to read past the first fold.

Layout is a huge part of successful copy. People will not read it if it doesn't look interesting.

Just study some copy from the top selling...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2010, 11:27 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Ashley Gable
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Can I just say that is very refreshing to see someone stick with their thread, all the way through!

And to boot you are graciously taking the advice and putting it to use.

I myself sometimes...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2010, 11:12 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Christopher_Stella
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

look at your bullets then take a look at some like john cartlons.

there's no curiosity and creates little to no emotion when reading.

the feature/benefits aren't strong when they could be...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2010, 10:57 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Cryp
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Well what does the numbers say? I can take an educated guess that its not pulling very well - at all.

Headline is weak. Try:

"Siamese twin splits in two - one becomes a stud after a secret...
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2010, 04:11 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

And set up a facebook page. You can now embed videos on the page - with opt-in and clickable links. PM me for (unaffiliated details).
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2010, 07:40 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By DonFinch
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

“Why is there no mention of all this good stuff in the sales page?”


There have been some really good points given on this thread, a lot of advice offered and by the sound of it… a lot of the...
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2010, 09:55 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Ken Strong
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

No, even then it's against Warrior Rule #1 to talk about it publicly here. Even if he deserves it.
Forum: Copywriting 13th March 2010, 08:46 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By fasteasysuccess
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Headline needs to express major benefit or concern and No proof my friend. There's tons of products, how's yours really different and why choose you. No wow or really big benefits expressed and if...
Forum: Copywriting 12th March 2010, 09:40 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By ChrisChoiSEO
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

A better headline just off the top of my head could be "An All Natural Peruvian Secret That's As Effective As Viagra But Without The Side Effects"
Forum: Copywriting 12th March 2010, 02:10 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

If you opt-in to Bob Silber's list he'll send you some stuff on FTC & Compliance - FTC New Rules (http://www.websitelawforms.com/ftcnewrules.htm) I think he also has some free Disclaimers for your...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 02:09 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By ElGatito
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

I see a couple flaws with the target as well with the copy

Segmentation

Like Elisabeth said, you are targeting the world, both men and women. I'd repeat what she said, do two sites, with two...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 12:36 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By wordwizard
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

A thought that occurred to me as I was reading this thread...

How about creating two (or more) separate letters -- one aimed at men who are looking to improve their "performance," one aimed at an...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 11:04 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Exactly. I've notified Bob Silber about this thread and I hope he chimes in. But this nonsense about "how much money is it making?" is exactly that - nonsense. And irrelevant. And you copywriters...
Forum: Website Design 11th March 2010, 10:38 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 756
Posted By OhJay
Re: How do I get my webpage to have a border like this?

FYI you can now do drop shadows in pure CSS without needing any image files. Dead simple, really.

-moz-box-shadow: 3px 3px 3px #666;
-webkit-box-shadow: 3px 3px 3px #666;
box-shadow: 3px 3px 3px...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 09:04 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Collette
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

The fact that this product is being sold from a country other than the U.S. does not exempt the seller when the product is being sold to, or in (as in affiliates), the U.S.

In December 2006,...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 05:58 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By MikeHumphreys
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

I agree with Hugh. Frankly, you should be talking to your copywriter about the salesletter's performance... especially if you're talking about potentially rehiring them.

If it's not converting...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 12:14 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By DougHughes
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Wow...yikes!

If you have the money I would recommend spending it on a good copywriter.
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 12:11 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Collette
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Sorry, dude, as Mal said,



The entire thing - design and copy - is a confused mess. There is no clear idea of what this page is about.

The copy throws every possible benefit against the...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 09:57 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By David Babineau
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

I have to agree with Kay.

Here's another example in your P.S. - one of the most read parts in any piece of copy...




Cheers,
Dave
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 09:42 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Kay King
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

I'm not going to tear your copy apart - you have some good suggestions above - and some not so good ones. However, the line copied above tells me "English as a second language". That needs to be...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 08:28 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By dorothydot
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

Hi there,

I think you need to know who your actual purchasing prospect is. Although the sex angle is important to men, do you want this supplement to come up only when sex search-terms are...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 08:09 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

[Note: this post is about a sexual aid product. As such it uses strong language. Please do not let the kiddies read this or they may end up with nightmares about huge, angry man-parts...]

I...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 07:51 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By NetWorth
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

The header is off but almost more that the actually copy itself the font needs to be larger and the layout needs to be more reader friendly. People on the internet don't read then skim looking for...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 07:37 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By RogozRazvan
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

I think that the copy can be a lot better.
1) The headline should enter a conversation that is already going in the prospect’s mind. He is not doing this. Instead, he tries to go the...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 07:35 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

It's from The School of No Idea. Not even Peruvian Viagra will get that page up.

"Oprah's Jaw Will Drop When She Finds This". WTF. Oprah will run screaming from the room, more likely.

Once...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 07:19 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

No.

The header's too big, no need for the Copyscape and social media bit, the headline's not good and the facts aren't credible. And that's only above the fold!
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2010, 07:08 AM
Replies: 87
Views: 4,103
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Is my copywriter doing a good job? Should I give him another one?

The headline is silly. It means nothing because it has no reference to your product.

You're also wasting a lot of valuable space above the fold with that group shot graphic of the medical types....
Forum: Website Design 8th June 2009, 04:57 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By Jorge05r
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

it looks very simple, nothing too professional but it's good enough for it's purpose. Just make sure to invest some of the earnings on a new design if the results are good.

Good luck and keep up...
Forum: Website Design 8th June 2009, 02:47 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By indigo
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

I'd use PNG images instead of JPG to make the graphics cleaner. Check the color noise on areas around texts.
Forum: Website Design 8th June 2009, 11:59 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By SocialMarketing4U
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

And don't forget to match your footer colors in the toup.html page, with your main pages (HOME | CONTENT | PRODUCT | LINK | FREEBIE | FUN).

It's pretty evident that your "Disclaimer, Privacy,...
Forum: Website Design 8th June 2009, 06:44 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By Harry Behrens
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

I would seriously consider getting rid of all that stuff in the sidebar, bringing the main content up and centered, getting rid of the green background color in the content area (have it be white),...
Forum: Website Design 8th June 2009, 12:35 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By mixelplik
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

Good attempt. I think you need to look at a site that you like and study what elements draw you to it. Then take these elements and integrate them into your design.

Templates are great for this...
Forum: Website Design 7th June 2009, 11:46 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By JMartin
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

What is the goal of the site?

First thing that came to my mind was to click away as the site wasn't visually appealing and lacked instant purpose.

Good news is this can all be fixed.

Step...
Forum: Website Design 7th June 2009, 05:26 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,064
Posted By abs007
Re: Please give me your constructive comments.

Hi
Your site looks nice and clean. a few issues that I noticed. Your content link leads to a 404 not found - your fun link leads to a 404 not found. The links in your horizontal header all open...
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