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Forum: Copywriting 20th August 2018, 09:42 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By ryanbiddulph
Re: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

Don't get too bummed Jordan. The feeling will pass buddy.

This reaction to the advertisement just reflects back to you the fear and lack of clarity you had creating the ad. Your mind felt good...
Forum: Copywriting 20th August 2018, 08:54 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By stegibson
Re: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

Hi Jordan,

I'm in your niche, and I'm in your profession.

How did the re-design fair?

On reading through your first draft, I would agree with the others that is sounds salesy rather than...
Forum: Copywriting 17th August 2018, 05:50 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By Copylifemike
RE: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

Copy Bloggers and Copy Hackers are good places to start.

So as you see, your page and objective is totally confusing.. Let's keep this simple.

You ultimately just want to give free music...
Forum: Copywriting 17th August 2018, 04:15 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By Copylifemike
RE: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

Literally your value is lost behind a boatload of graphics and subjected texts under each...

Headline is a bit better.

You totally lose the audience to where I honestly won't even read it.
...
Forum: Copywriting 17th August 2018, 12:42 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By Gixzard
RE: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

Hey welcome to the community! I have a couple of suggestions that might be helpful, maybe just keep an open mind with what I say.

So I would say the most important thing to think about is that you...
Forum: Copywriting 17th August 2018, 05:00 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By Frank Donovan
Re: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

I'd echo what's already been said, but also - if your article is being "trash talked", what's everyone saying about it? That would give you some idea of what you're doing wrong.

And when/if you...
Forum: Copywriting 17th August 2018, 04:43 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 329
Posted By SARubin
Re: Why Does Everyone Seem to Hate This Ad?

Welcome to the forum Jordan.

I'm going to offer you my honest opinion here, and I'll try not to be too harsh.
But honestly, Jordan - I gotta agree with DWolfe here...

My first thought is...
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