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Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 01:37 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,788
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

I understand what you're saying, but in the interest of helping n00bs like me everywhere ...

Let's say he's already saddled this horse and has to get to the town barn dance before his betrothed...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2011, 10:46 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 2,325
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Hubby Did My Copy! Should I Sack Him?

Hi -

I know how hard it can be to write your first long form letter. I feel your hubby's pain.

Some grammar tips that may help:


Try not to overuse passive verbs like "will be". Look...
Forum: Copywriting 7th August 2011, 07:27 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,772
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter

Good stuff.

The targets are "unsuspecting, naive and inexperienced" marketers. You're right, I never come out and directly address that specific state (naivety). I touch it a bit with the...
Forum: Copywriting 5th August 2011, 03:35 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 2,772
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter

This:



... is fantastic writing! Thanks Pete!
Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2011, 12:01 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 665
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Please review my salespage

The concept is pretty cool.

I'm not a huge fan of future tense in sales writing, i.e. "You will soon discover ... we will show you ... worries will soon be over ... you will make money today...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th April 2011, 02:27 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,611
Posted By writeandreview
Re: What's your favorite type of PLR site?

Sometimes you get higher quality articles from "mom and pop" type PLR sites. Peggy Baron's PLR shop (http://www.allstarplr.com/) springs to mind.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th April 2011, 01:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 523
Posted By writeandreview
Re: writing articles

And if automatic writing doesn't work, you can always try something with a little more oomph. (http://www.buzzle.com/articles/how-to-channel-spirit-guides-by-automatic-writing.html)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th April 2011, 01:10 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 2,067
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Intelligence of an internet marketer.

Successful internet marketers generally fall into 1 of two groups:

A. Have very developed heuristics
B. Are smart enough to follow in the footsteps of IMers in group A

Perseverance and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th April 2011, 11:42 PM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,029
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Article Writing, Article Marketing, Article Syndication - Aarrgh! :)

Most of my articles are uniquely original. Those that aren't were originally unique.
Forum: Copywriting 7th April 2011, 07:23 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,306
Posted By writeandreview
Re: ClickBank: New Rules

I love Clickbank. Clickbank have (or has, depending on your style guide) been very good to me.

Clickbank will compete against Amazon, whatever Apple decides to throw in the mix and a host of...
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2011, 01:46 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 734
Posted By writeandreview
Re: A little help with my sales page

Take Your Income To 6 Figures Quicker Than You Ever Thought Possible With Secrets From Some Of The Best Marketers On The Internet

Headlines that start with a verb like "take" aren't compelling.
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th March 2011, 12:59 PM
Replies: 95
Views: 3,547
Posted By writeandreview
Re: $10 - $20 a day is all I need or I will turn green, with purple spots!

I like the title of this thread. It's clever and picturesque.

I can tell you don't care for the service provider idea and that's okay. It's a quick way to make much more than $20 per day,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th March 2011, 12:27 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,142
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Repurposing My Ezinearticles As PLR Packages

If the pen name you submitted the articles under in the article directory is different than the name you're releasing the PLR packages under is different, how can anyone tell?

Publish date vs....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th March 2011, 11:53 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 755
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Is the 2:1 rule the most effective way to promote through Email Marketing?

I follow the ABP rule. Always Be Promoting :) When you've got them on the hook (they actually opened your e-mail) you've got to tighten the line.

Alexa is correct, your list demographic, the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th March 2011, 11:28 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,142
Posted By writeandreview
Re: How do you write articles for niche that don't interest you much?

Is it coming up with things to write about or the writing itself that's the problem?

This always works for me:

Pretend you're a newspaper journalist hired to write. Then, imagine the $$$...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd August 2010, 08:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,737
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Would you critique my review page?

You'll get great advice on the copywriting -- I'll point out a few aspects about the general readability.

There are currently two brands that have a reputation for having having a high integrity...
Forum: Copywriting 1st August 2010, 09:20 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 4,803
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Feedback on a Site Please

This one is easy -- "feedback" can be positive or negative. Argument over.

Harlan asked everyone for positive and negative thoughts ... and (implicitly) to materialize them as comments for all to...
Forum: Copywriting 28th July 2010, 05:28 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 796
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Headline Opinions

You'll probably get a lot of sales copy advice, so I won't go there. Instead, here are a few small tips for tightening up the writing. Eliminating the grayed out words will help readability and...
Forum: Copywriting 28th July 2010, 03:39 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,124
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Good copywriting doesn't have to be difficult.

Great thread. Proves the adage that we can learn more from our failures than from our successes.

Vip-ip - seems like you're taking this "merciless burn" gracefully. Although, other than Rick...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th July 2010, 11:48 PM
Replies: 163
Views: 5,342
Posted By writeandreview
Re: $2 articles? I don't get it.

I love haughty grammarians. However, to completely fit the bill, you must work on the haughty and ease up on the wit and charm.

David, thanks for the thread. I've wondered about the...
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