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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 03:08 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By hangtimenino
Re: Critique my site please

i dont know exactly why, but it seems like the pages look unfinished. maybe because of the high contrast of the black background, and very white page. they dont come together, and u could use more...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 03:04 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By pritesh
Re: Critique my site please

i would say it doesnt look much professional and also the fonr size is small.. :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 01:17 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By Muhammad Hassan
Re: Critique my site please

As above - especially the bit where people are congratulating for actually taking action. A lot of people never take action. You have so you are in a better position then many people well done.

By...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 12:42 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By Sean Hoffman
Re: Critique my site please

terrible fonts

bad design

needs paragraphs

text is all over the place

...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 08:01 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By Dana_W
Re: Critique my site please

Couple of thoughts here...

As has been pointed out before...the reason that sites with that general theme keep popping up is that they make money for the creators. Sites and tactics that you or I...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 07:09 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By willz605
Re: Critique my site please

If this is your first draft you have some simple steps to follow. Sylviad hit most of the points on the head....

Could use more graphics about firing your boss.......where's the "wow" factor...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2009, 04:53 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By ztrek
Re: Critique my site please

I thought it looked pretty decent. Once you've made all the changes as already suggested it'll rock!!
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th May 2009, 04:31 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By sylviad
Re: Critique my site please

Ok. First... empoweredcreator, anonymity is good, but it sure would be nice to know who to address this to... Joe? Peter? Jack? rather than your username. :)

About your site. Several things that...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th May 2009, 08:09 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By new2ebiz
Re: Critique my site please

Congratulations on taking that first step. Many people never get this far.

Here are a few ideas.
It almost looks like you have two header banners when one would do. And I would have a main...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th May 2009, 05:48 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By deskmonkey
Re: Critique my site please

Aside from the advice to improve the site design (which most already pointed out, anyway), you'll also need to work on your sales copy. I've read the entire thing and, to be honest, I'm not sold on...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th May 2009, 05:21 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By JP Wilson
Re: Critique my site please

You've been given some very constructive advice here my friend. But there are 3 things that I would change/add to your site straight off the bat:

1) Add a personalized video message! Even the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 07:42 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By wbakhos
Re: Critique my site please

Hey great feedback. Great constructive feedback for the guy.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:57 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By Pat Ordenes
Re: Critique my site please

Good effort mate, and congratulations for stepping up!
but you could use a better layout.
The page looks a bit scattered...
maybe a header and footer, just to consolidate the page...
The font...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:33 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By BillOliver
Re: Critique my site please

No No No1 I like Times New Roman!

Yes, congrats for getting started. Keep going.

MAIN PROBLEM: Lack of credibility.
What should reader believe you?
Why you instead of someone else?...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:28 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By Marian Berghes
Re: Critique my site please

1. Hire a designer or something to do your ecovers, headers etc...

2. try using white or navy blue background

3. reduce the width of the text area, there's just too many words per line

4....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:20 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By SmartTeenager
Re: Critique my site please

Yeah the images definitely need a bit of TLC, but I also agree with jkiley. There are so many sites online that follow this same exact format that are scams. You may want to consider trying to...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:14 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By JC Antas
Re: Critique my site please

Strong color around content attracts attention and makes people lose focus on the most important thing: your copy.

All design elements should work for your copy, not against it.

Tyrus :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:10 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By DrewG
Re: Critique my site please

Hey EmpoweredCreator,

You did a fine job, sometimes just getting something created can be the biggest task. Now you can improve from here. There's a couple things I would recommend changing up-
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 08:00 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By dlwebb610
Re: Critique my site please

Being brutally honest is ok but we all could use a pat on the back once in awhile. For your first attempt I think you did a fine job. However, if I was to make a suggestion it would be to increase...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2009, 07:29 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,163
Posted By radhika
Re: Critique my site please

1. Improve images. All of them ... Hire a graphic artist to create a header, order button, softwarebox guide etc (Look in WSO section. you will find some nice deals)

2. Black background? nah ......
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th May 2009, 08:59 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 4,113
Posted By charlesburke
Re: Please Refund- This excuse blew my mind and I think it will yours too!

Congratulations! That's a new one to me too. It just further proves there's no end of excuses people can find to justify taking advantage.

But cheer up. That kind of person, even if they were to...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th April 2009, 10:51 AM
Replies: 40
Views: 786
Posted By Zeus66
Re: Do you have to like a niche to be successful?

rant

Like the topic of a niche? Hell no. I hate all the rubbish spread around about how you have to be passionate and love something to stay motivated about it. Nonsense! You have to be...
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