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Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2013, 02:15 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By Jonathan 2.0
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

No, I think a lot of it is relevant if you're considering using my headline. Especially:



...

Mistake #1.
“Searching For The 'Magic Button' That Will Make You
Rich Overnight By Doing...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2013, 11:04 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By Tim R
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

The headline actually states $100 daily, not $100 total. To many people who are interested in making money online and have been struggling with IM, $100/day will actually be very tempting. For a...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2013, 09:02 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

I mean you could chop EVERYTHING in the letter off up to that point and it would still make sense and read essentially the same.

Don't worry, when I write copy the same thing happens. It takes...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2013, 08:52 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By Jonathan 2.0
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

What about taking a different approach. Here's a headline suggestion:


“You Will Never Make A Single Penny Online If You Do Any Of The Following…” (This May P**s Off Some Of The Internet...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2013, 04:31 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By Quality Copywriter
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

quick thoughts...

in the lead...why do i need to read this now? no urgency

look at your subheads...are they interesting? why would I read them?

no reason given for your dramatic price...
Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2013, 07:04 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By JohnRussell
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

Just take the solo ads part out of the list of things you couldn't do - to clear up any doubt.

Thanks for the kind words - don't curse me if the headline doesn't work for you :p
Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2013, 05:32 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By JohnRussell
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

Where is your traffic coming from? Are you assuming (in your headline) that the readers know what a solo ad is?

I found the phrase 'solo ads business' confusing. At first glance (at least to me)...
Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2013, 03:54 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By max5ty
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

Thought the warning thing was a bit out of place...

was waiting for you to break bad on me, or try a triple round house kick or something.

After the warning I kept waiting for it...waiting for...
Forum: Copywriting 16th November 2013, 09:05 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 927
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: Salesletter critique needed :)

Headline: $100...and I have to wait 8 weeks? I understand it's easy, but that's a LONG time for most people, and hardly a great reward...in first world countries, anyway.

Email lists and solo ads...
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 19th September 2013, 11:08 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 14,387
Posted By Anton Louis
Re: Store Coach vs Dropship Lifestyle

There's really no copy and paste formula so costs can and will vary but to give you some of idea of costs related to starting an eCommerce business:

- You will obviously have to purchase a domain...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th March 2013, 10:34 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,766
Posted By focusedlife
Re: How to get into the Solo Ads business?

i'd like to just give you an alternative way to build a list, if I may, as its something that I did myself and has worked very well.

Setup a gig on fiverr that addresses one IM problem that seems...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 04:42 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By KenThompson
Re: I'm stuck...

You have not gotten much done probably because as you said, you're not sure what to do. Since that's the case, then you have no specific goal (direction) other than making more money. But you don't...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:55 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Declan O Flaherty
Re: I'm stuck...

Start here..

Find people with a problem.
Find the solution.
Set up autoresponder
Set up opt in form on webpage
Drive people with the problem, to the page where you give them the solution, for...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:46 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Eric Huard
Re: I'm stuck...

List building. The money is in the list.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:44 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Steve L
Re: I'm stuck...

SEO has changed a lot in the last year. These days, the best SEO strategy is simply to forget about SEO (http://truewebpresence.com/best-seo-strategy-is-to-forget-seo/).

I recommend...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:39 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Abul-Hussain
Re: I'm stuck...

Repeat after me: The money is in the f****** list!

There's a lot of info on this forum to help you get started on list building. If you need more specific help with your situation and further...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:34 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By gpwilson
Re: I'm stuck...

You are doing the same thing over and over again. And if you are doing this thing then time is coming that you would get in dilemma. You need to create your own product and your own site as well. It...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:31 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Ellie M
Re: I'm stuck...

Gotta have a list! :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:17 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By johnben1444
Re: I'm stuck...

The only issue i see you facing in the near future is the small niche sites, i advice you start looking at creating real site for human and not a hit and run visitor from SEO.

With your experience...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:13 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Punsak
Re: I'm stuck...

Create your own product such as
-talking about your experiences or a real case study.
-create plug in or software by hiring outsource.

And let other affiliate work for you :D
I love the story...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 03:08 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Abul-Hussain
Re: I'm stuck...

Hjalte,

You are right, the sniper sites will take a hit when Google finishes it's second round of Penguin updates and brings out the Zebra next year.

List building is the best form of marketing...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 02:55 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By jbsmith
Re: I'm stuck...

Hjalte - sounds like building more niche sites is just not in the cards, you don't have the passion for it anymore.

Is there one niche that you have found produces more than the others or that...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 02:23 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By leningovea
Re: I'm stuck...

If you ask me I recommend you list building... But of course you need the right help in order to nail it, so of you can afford it look for coaching, and don't look for deals but for real marketer...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th October 2012, 02:03 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 608
Posted By Alex Blades
Re: I'm stuck...

You've answered your own question my friend ;)

"I've always wanted to get my foot inside listbuilding and email marketing"
Forum: Copywriting 28th April 2012, 11:31 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,983
Posted By Pusateri
Re: Examples of loops in copy

When I write emails I will usually open a loop that requires the reader to click through in order to get closure. Maybe that makes it more of a wormhole. Anyway, I don't think it's insulting....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th April 2012, 09:04 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 6,446
Posted By nvs74191
Re: Adf.ly a Huge Joke?

I have made sales using adfly.

I built an optin form using bullets from a sales page in moneymaking niche, and redirected to sales page.

I used US traffic, and got 10 sales in a day. (4000...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th January 2012, 07:23 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 939
Posted By Rose Anderson
Re: Do You Have Any Unfinished Projects?

I know what you're saying. A lot of times I start things and then ...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th December 2011, 08:56 PM
Replies: 387
Views: 30,943
Posted By Rod Cortez
57 Lessons Learned Over 14 Years In Internet Marketing - The List I Wish I Had When I First Started

Edit: Updated for 2013

Warriors,

I first stumbled upon the Warrior Forum back in 1999 through a free viral report written by Allen Says, the owner of this forum. I browsed through the forum,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th May 2011, 07:44 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,675
Posted By Heather H
Re: How to write followup emails? - I need some help...

This one stumped me for a long time too. Now I craft a story. It usually works better than facts. Since you are in a niche you care about it shouldn't be too difficult. You want to pull at their...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th May 2011, 07:23 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,675
Posted By wayne60618
Re: How to write followup emails? - I need some help...

Neil offers some really good advice, so I will build on what he says. First, put on the hat of your reader. They subscribed for a reason and generally that reason was the "bribe" that you offered,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th February 2011, 12:59 AM
Replies: 83
Views: 3,857
Posted By naji
Re: My First $100 Day on Clickbank!

A massive hi 5 to you kayden the figures say it all. You are doing well because you you are taking ACTION Consistently (2000 subscribers in 3 months=consistent action). Most people fail with internet...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th February 2011, 09:04 PM
Replies: 83
Views: 5,148
Posted By John Romaine
Top ten reasons why I wasn’t making any money online – and now I am (consistently)

Hey guys,
This is a post that I wanted to share, in the hope that it might just HELP those that were where I was not too long ago. The last few months have really begun to turn around for me, so I...
Forum: Programming 20th February 2011, 06:28 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,164
Posted By michael_gourlay
Re: Example Clickbank IPN Url

They post it, so use $_POST[]
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2011, 10:27 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 689
Posted By jtunkelo
Re: Video Sales Letter Critique

I would try getting to the point much, much, much faster. You don't want to have a single slide that's not necessary. It could be a lot tighter.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 3rd February 2011, 09:30 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,640
Posted By ArticlePrince
Does the name Pavlov ring a bell? 9 tips to being more productive

For those that don't know who Pavlov was, he rand a bell every time before he would dogs (this was a psychology experiment). After doing for a while, the dogs started to salivate at the sound of a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd February 2011, 11:11 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,747
Posted By AnthonyKrese
Re: Wordpress Theme for selling Software

Have a look in the WooThemes business section. I've noticed a few software companies running their themes (like MarketMeSuite).
Forum: Copywriting 18th January 2011, 05:55 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 946
Posted By Johnny12345
Re: Think you've got copywriting chops - how would you improve this?

I must be confused. Isn't that what ALL phones are designed to do?

John
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th January 2011, 07:51 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,660
Posted By Michael Meaney
Re: After 1 week, still no sales for my product at ClickBank

Try this.. and in this order..


Main headline needs a promise / attention grabbing statement
Bring attention to the problem you're solving
Provide your solution
Show what qualifies you to...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 11th January 2011, 08:07 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 864
Posted By cypherslock
Re: Dragon Speaking Naturally 11

It is MUCH more responsive. Faster too. Couple it with Blue's Yeti microphone (http://www.bluemic.com/yeti) and you can't lose.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd January 2011, 05:49 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,722
Posted By dorothydot
Re: 4 Unbreakable Copy Rules

You forgot the Cardinal Rule of Copywriting:

Use the magic 3-letter word every chance you get: Y-O-U.

Not I. Not We. Not They. Not She or He.

Y-O-U.

Dot
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st December 2010, 07:32 PM
Replies: 178
Views: 5,907
Posted By PatrickBrianONeill
Re: What are your secrets as a successful internet marketer? Let us know...

Secret that has changed me completely.
I used to get up at 7, try to get started, couldn't focus, had no energy.
Then I started waking up at 7, putting on a pot of coffee, taking a shower while...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st November 2010, 10:18 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 670
Posted By Solag
Re: Low Ezine CTR - Appreciate Any Helpful Ideas

kongming,

take a look at this article that I wrote a while back.

Farmville Cash - How to Get More Free FV Cash Quickly...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th October 2010, 05:42 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,079
Posted By Keith Boisvert
My $100 a day Theory and why it works for me

For a long time I did what most people do...I read and learned about marketing online. I would come up with awesome ideas, but somewhere during the process of brainstorming out those ideas, I either...
Forum: Mind Warriors 31st August 2010, 07:40 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 1,032
Posted By DomenicoGrecojr
Re: How do you keep yourself motivated and on track?

Here's something that works really well for me.

1. Have a good night's sleep. Preferably 7 - 8 hours.

2. Wake up and think of positive thoughts only.

3. Pump yourself up by listening to...
Forum: Mind Warriors 31st August 2010, 07:31 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 1,032
Posted By Brad Spencer
Re: How do you keep yourself motivated and on track?

Here are two sites I would like to share with you...neither are mine but I think they're good resources full of stuff you can use to get more productive. Remember saving 4 minute per day is like...
Forum: Mind Warriors 30th August 2010, 09:43 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 1,032
Posted By Sheryl Polomka
Re: How do you keep yourself motivated and on track?

It isn't always easy staying motivated and I know how you feel when you're going through a bad time in your life it can get you right off track. My dog passed away a few weeks ago and I was...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2010, 02:58 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 751
Posted By humbledmarket
My Way to organize

Hello Warriors,
For a long time I've been trying to find ways to organize my self so I know the task and to accomplish them.

Internet marketing sure is about marketing in perhaps creating a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd August 2010, 10:19 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 512
Posted By sbucciarel
Re: Site Flipping

Here's the WF All in One Thread on Site Flipping

http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/122174-all-one-all-about-flipping-web-sites.html
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th August 2010, 01:10 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 3,582
Posted By NicheMayhem
Re: Most of Us Will Never Make a Full Time Living Working Online

I have two words for anybody in the position of feeling like they either aren't ever going to make it or are going to wait it out and see what happens:

Ready?


Baby Steps.

Pick a goal or a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th August 2010, 12:51 AM
Replies: 89
Views: 3,582
Posted By nicheman
Re: Most of Us Will Never Make a Full Time Living Working Online

I've been in the place you seem like your in and it's not fun. So here are my steps to get out of the "funk":
1 Count your blessings. Realize that you do have so many abilities to be thankful for....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th July 2010, 09:09 PM
Replies: 111
Views: 15,102
Posted By Jeremy Kelsall
This can make you a couple hundred thousand bucks....

I was trying to send this to my list, but aweber won't let me login? So, I decided to post it here, I hope you guys enjoy it and get something out of it because it is powerful stuff....

Hello...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th July 2010, 09:27 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 1,877
Posted By Mohsin Rasool
Re: What's Your #1 Secret to Being Productive?

For me,

This works:

Working on a PC with NO internet ACCESS!

I try to work on that PC 2 or more hours a day and I get my best
content written there. It always works.

Regards,
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2010, 04:36 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 2,963
Posted By David Jackson
Internet Marketing is a Joke!

Internet Marketing is a joke! At least, that' s how a lot of people coming online treat it. They come online totally unprepared, no money and no clue. Many of them treat forums like some kind of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2010, 02:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 566
Posted By oihjk
Re: First Product launch Advice

To have an effective launch is more than simply saying: "Ok here's my link everyone go buy my stuff."

Observe how Apple launches their new products. If you notice the people at Apple aren't the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th May 2010, 05:02 PM
Replies: 253
Views: 41,882
Posted By indie08
Re: Lessons Learned from earning $60,151.68 in past 12 months with Amazon Associates

Chris,

That is commendable man! Way to go! Here is my method of making money with Amazon:

1. Select a good niche w/buyers. (low competition/high search) - obvious
2. Register an exact matching...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th May 2010, 12:19 PM
Replies: 253
Views: 41,882
Posted By jan roos
Re: Lessons Learned from earning $60,151.68 in past 12 months with Amazon Associates

If you get let's say 1% conversion rate with clickbank and you make 60 bucks per sale and I get 20 bucks per sale with Amazon but my conversion rate is 4% then I mke more than you. Of course you can...
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