Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2013, 02:15 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
No, I think a lot of it is relevant if you're considering using my headline. Especially:
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Mistake #1.
“Searching For The 'Magic Button' That Will Make You
Rich Overnight By Doing...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2013, 11:04 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
The headline actually states $100 daily, not $100 total. To many people who are interested in making money online and have been struggling with IM, $100/day will actually be very tempting. For a...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2013, 09:02 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
I mean you could chop EVERYTHING in the letter off up to that point and it would still make sense and read essentially the same.
Don't worry, when I write copy the same thing happens. It takes...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2013, 08:52 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
What about taking a different approach. Here's a headline suggestion:
“You Will Never Make A Single Penny Online If You Do Any Of The Following…” (This May P**s Off Some Of The Internet...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2013, 04:31 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
quick thoughts...
in the lead...why do i need to read this now? no urgency
look at your subheads...are they interesting? why would I read them?
no reason given for your dramatic price...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th November 2013, 07:04 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
Just take the solo ads part out of the list of things you couldn't do - to clear up any doubt.
Thanks for the kind words - don't curse me if the headline doesn't work for you :p
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Forum: Copywriting
16th November 2013, 05:32 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
Where is your traffic coming from? Are you assuming (in your headline) that the readers know what a solo ad is?
I found the phrase 'solo ads business' confusing. At first glance (at least to me)...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th November 2013, 03:54 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
Thought the warning thing was a bit out of place...
was waiting for you to break bad on me, or try a triple round house kick or something.
After the warning I kept waiting for it...waiting for...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th November 2013, 09:05 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 927 Re: Salesletter critique needed :)
Headline: $100...and I have to wait 8 weeks? I understand it's easy, but that's a LONG time for most people, and hardly a great reward...in first world countries, anyway.
Email lists and solo ads...
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Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping
19th September 2013, 11:08 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 14,387 Re: Store Coach vs Dropship Lifestyle
There's really no copy and paste formula so costs can and will vary but to give you some of idea of costs related to starting an eCommerce business:
- You will obviously have to purchase a domain...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th March 2013, 10:34 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 2,766 Re: How to get into the Solo Ads business?
i'd like to just give you an alternative way to build a list, if I may, as its something that I did myself and has worked very well.
Setup a gig on fiverr that addresses one IM problem that seems...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 04:42 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
You have not gotten much done probably because as you said, you're not sure what to do. Since that's the case, then you have no specific goal (direction) other than making more money. But you don't...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:55 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
Start here..
Find people with a problem.
Find the solution.
Set up autoresponder
Set up opt in form on webpage
Drive people with the problem, to the page where you give them the solution, for...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:46 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:44 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
SEO has changed a lot in the last year. These days, the best SEO strategy is simply to forget about SEO (http://truewebpresence.com/best-seo-strategy-is-to-forget-seo/).
I recommend...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:39 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
Repeat after me: The money is in the f****** list!
There's a lot of info on this forum to help you get started on list building. If you need more specific help with your situation and further...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:34 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
You are doing the same thing over and over again. And if you are doing this thing then time is coming that you would get in dilemma. You need to create your own product and your own site as well. It...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:31 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:17 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
The only issue i see you facing in the near future is the small niche sites, i advice you start looking at creating real site for human and not a hit and run visitor from SEO.
With your experience...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:13 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
Create your own product such as
-talking about your experiences or a real case study.
-create plug in or software by hiring outsource.
And let other affiliate work for you :D
I love the story...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 03:08 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
Hjalte,
You are right, the sniper sites will take a hit when Google finishes it's second round of Penguin updates and brings out the Zebra next year.
List building is the best form of marketing...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 02:55 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
Hjalte - sounds like building more niche sites is just not in the cards, you don't have the passion for it anymore.
Is there one niche that you have found produces more than the others or that...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 02:23 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
If you ask me I recommend you list building... But of course you need the right help in order to nail it, so of you can afford it look for coaching, and don't look for deals but for real marketer...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th October 2012, 02:03 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 608 Re: I'm stuck...
You've answered your own question my friend ;)
"I've always wanted to get my foot inside listbuilding and email marketing"
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Forum: Copywriting
28th April 2012, 11:31 PM
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Replies: 31
Views: 3,983 Re: Examples of loops in copy
When I write emails I will usually open a loop that requires the reader to click through in order to get closure. Maybe that makes it more of a wormhole. Anyway, I don't think it's insulting....
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th April 2012, 09:04 AM
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Replies: 65
Views: 6,446 Re: Adf.ly a Huge Joke?
I have made sales using adfly.
I built an optin form using bullets from a sales page in moneymaking niche, and redirected to sales page.
I used US traffic, and got 10 sales in a day. (4000...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th January 2012, 07:23 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 939 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th December 2011, 08:56 PM
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Replies: 387
Views: 30,943 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
26th May 2011, 07:44 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,675 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
26th May 2011, 07:23 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,675 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
25th February 2011, 12:59 AM
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Replies: 83
Views: 3,857 Re: My First $100 Day on Clickbank!
A massive hi 5 to you kayden the figures say it all. You are doing well because you you are taking ACTION Consistently (2000 subscribers in 3 months=consistent action). Most people fail with internet...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th February 2011, 09:04 PM
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Replies: 83
Views: 5,148 |
Forum: Programming
20th February 2011, 06:28 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,164 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th February 2011, 10:27 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 689 Re: Video Sales Letter Critique
I would try getting to the point much, much, much faster. You don't want to have a single slide that's not necessary. It could be a lot tighter.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
3rd February 2011, 09:30 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 2,640 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
2nd February 2011, 11:11 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,747 |
Forum: Copywriting
18th January 2011, 05:55 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 946 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th January 2011, 07:51 AM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,660 |
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings
11th January 2011, 08:07 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 864 Re: Dragon Speaking Naturally 11
It is MUCH more responsive. Faster too. Couple it with Blue's Yeti microphone (http://www.bluemic.com/yeti) and you can't lose.
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd January 2011, 05:49 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,722 Re: 4 Unbreakable Copy Rules
You forgot the Cardinal Rule of Copywriting:
Use the magic 3-letter word every chance you get: Y-O-U.
Not I. Not We. Not They. Not She or He.
Y-O-U.
Dot
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st December 2010, 07:32 PM
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Replies: 178
Views: 5,907 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
1st November 2010, 10:18 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 670 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th October 2010, 05:42 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 2,079 My $100 a day Theory and why it works for me
For a long time I did what most people do...I read and learned about marketing online. I would come up with awesome ideas, but somewhere during the process of brainstorming out those ideas, I either...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
31st August 2010, 07:40 AM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,032 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
31st August 2010, 07:31 AM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,032 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
30th August 2010, 09:43 PM
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Replies: 39
Views: 1,032 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
30th August 2010, 02:58 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 751 My Way to organize
Hello Warriors,
For a long time I've been trying to find ways to organize my self so I know the task and to accomplish them.
Internet marketing sure is about marketing in perhaps creating a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd August 2010, 10:19 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 512 Re: Site Flipping
Here's the WF All in One Thread on Site Flipping
http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/122174-all-one-all-about-flipping-web-sites.html
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th August 2010, 01:10 AM
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Replies: 89
Views: 3,582 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
6th August 2010, 12:51 AM
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Replies: 89
Views: 3,582 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
17th July 2010, 09:09 PM
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Replies: 111
Views: 15,102 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
8th July 2010, 09:27 AM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,877 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th July 2010, 04:36 PM
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Replies: 65
Views: 2,963 Internet Marketing is a Joke!
Internet Marketing is a joke! At least, that' s how a lot of people coming online treat it. They come online totally unprepared, no money and no clue. Many of them treat forums like some kind of...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th July 2010, 02:15 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 566 Re: First Product launch Advice
To have an effective launch is more than simply saying: "Ok here's my link everyone go buy my stuff."
Observe how Apple launches their new products. If you notice the people at Apple aren't the...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th May 2010, 05:02 PM
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Replies: 253
Views: 41,882 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th May 2010, 12:19 PM
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Replies: 253
Views: 41,882 |