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Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2011, 11:57 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Thank you for your feedback!

If you expect that page to sell a $250 product, you're dreaming.

There's no meat there. It's not well-written. You have no credibility. I don't even really know exactly how your product will help....
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2011, 02:02 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By lometogo
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James,

Found a few typo/grammar errors I'd suggest correcting:

Capitalize "I" in interenet marketing? --- I'd make it lower case
Do nothing 'different'? --- I'd choose differently
Special...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2011, 12:40 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By tk226
Re: Thank you for your feedback!

Please test the following for correction.

then got more customers than ever...

Order
now to find out....

I think, Hi, is not needed

most people pay a lot for internet marketing
Forum: Copywriting 11th June 2011, 07:52 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By MRMagMark
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I'd change the subhead "I Know What You Need" to something that is more focused on the reader and uses some type of emotional trigger. Such as "You'll Be Holding The Keys To Incredible Marketing...
Forum: Reciprocal Links 10th June 2011, 08:18 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 477
Posted By Fallen_Angel
Connect on LinkedIn - Lets connect

Anyone looking to build there LinkedIn connections?

I am an open networker and accept all connection requests.

My LinkedIn Profile chad peterson - Canada | LinkedIn...
Forum: Copywriting 10th June 2011, 05:58 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By andrewkar
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Hi

I'm not an expert but I can see a lot of "I" everywhere around.

For example:

"I have invested tens of thousands of dollars to learn what I'm going to teach you in this DVD. I invested...
Forum: Copywriting 10th June 2011, 04:30 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 742
Posted By MatthewNeer
Re: Thank you for your feedback!

You should throw in a sexy graphic of the product in there man. That will seriously help ya out.

You can build your own here: eBook Cover Creator - eCover Design Online Free | MyEcoverMaker.com...
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