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Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2013, 10:11 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,208
Posted By elviira
Re: I want YOUR opinion !

In general I like it, but I simply had to skip that massive wall of text where you told your story. Sorry.

What I would do is to shorten the text radically and make the text area narrower. You...
Forum: Copywriting 8th December 2013, 04:58 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,208
Posted By Chris Pottle
Re: I want YOUR opinion !

I viewed this page today on an ipad and found that althought the text was easily readable in landscape mode, when I turned to portrait mode the last letter on the right side was either very close to...
Forum: Copywriting 8th December 2013, 12:38 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,208
Posted By Enfusia
Re: I want YOUR opinion !

Just the things I noticed in the headline:

1. The pre-headine says nearly the same thing as the headline and so is repetitive and makes the headline boring.

2. The headline says the word "site"...
Forum: Copywriting 21st November 2013, 04:55 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,208
Posted By svedski
Re: I want YOUR opinion !

Get to the point faster. You're repeating yourself several times in the copy. "Like I said, my name is Ohad". Don't use lines like "Like I said". And use more subheads.
Forum: Copywriting 20th November 2013, 10:58 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,208
Posted By DaniWright
Re: I want YOUR opinion !

T-shirts are a lot more expensive than $6.98. I'm lucky if I can find one for $15, but more than likely I'm looking at $20 and more. But more importantly, why is that your example?

Who is your...
Forum: Copywriting 20th November 2013, 09:39 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,208
Posted By BrianMcLeod
Re: I want YOUR opinion !

Know what?

I don't like criticizing without offering a resolution - let' improve the readability of the layout because without that, it doesn't matter what the copy's like. It ain't gettin' read....
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2013, 08:04 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 701
Posted By Bob Teller
Re: Name for my product

Doesn't matter in the slightest. As long as the chosen name is not in the same industry.

Case in point: If you set up a computer supply business and called yourself Apple Computer Supplies you...
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Replies: 8
Views: 591
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