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Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2015, 06:53 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,305
Posted By splitTest
Re: If you've got the time - I'd love your opinions on my copy - Image in thread!

Yep. All those systems that don't work have the same sort of pitch as your very own...

Also -- who are all these people trying system after system after system? :eek: Are they really out there?...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2015, 12:02 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,305
Posted By The Pines
Re: If you've got the time - I'd love your opinions on my copy - Image in thread!

The headline is pretty poor, and generic - these 'make money on eBay' courses have been around since about 15 minutes after eBay started. Mostly they're a load of bollocks, and your reader knows it....
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2015, 10:12 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,305
Posted By ThePromotionalGuy
Re: If you've got the time - I'd love your opinions on my copy - Image in thread!

Easy,

1. When writing a headline, you must always be specific, never vague. Vagueness draws in the unqualified. It also increases your refund requests.

Here's your vague preheadline:

"Sick...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2015, 08:23 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,305
Posted By Chriswrighto
Re: If you've got the time - I'd love your opinions on my copy - Image in thread!

Easy,

I got stopped at the headline...

"Sick of trying systems that just don't work?" - Okay...

"Then I'll show you how to make quick, easy money from home!!" - Oh, another one of them...
...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2015, 07:38 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,305
Posted By dddougal
Re: If you've got the time - I'd love your opinions on my copy - Image in thread!

Hi,
I liked most of the copy, up to the crochet patterns...Then the flow just seemed to change. Just a few things I would change initially.

1. I would split the top half of the text up with...
Forum: Copywriting 11th September 2014, 02:18 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

Here's where I believe your biggest mistake is right now...read what you wrote again...

(Pay attention to the words "I," "my" and "want")



Writing great copy isn't about saying what you want...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2014, 11:51 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By Robert_Rand
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

No problem - I know my feedback was a little brash.

If you come away from this thread with anything, understand this: regardless of how legit your system is... you still need to SELL it. You need...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2014, 10:31 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By JonMills
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

Nothing is hype if it delivers on it's promise.

If it can't deliver and you are saying it's amazing, it's hype.

Simple. Don't make claims you can't deliver on. This way you will avoid hyped...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2014, 06:07 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By JohnRussell
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

Fair enough...

I really don't know anything about gambling so maybe I was oversimplifying it.

Maybe the OP can segment his market like that:

If you'll have patience, if you'll do exactly...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2014, 05:43 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By Tim R
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

There's a lot of these types of systems on the market, it's not really going to alter anything. It's also more complicated than just placing a bet and a lot of people don't stick to it long term as...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2014, 05:06 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By JohnRussell
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

If his system really provides 10-15% returns per trade, 95% of the time it could have a big impact. If it's really that simple, predictable and reliable.

Of course the other alternative is that...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2014, 04:59 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By Tim R
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

He's not missing the point. You're confusing football trading with regular betting through bookies.

It's not a completely new system of betting that he's selling, it's a particular method to take...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 03:21 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By Lance K
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

I think that's the issue. If you can prove your claims, they aren't hype. And if your systems are tested and proven, then by all means go make big, bold claims...pile on the proof...and prosper.
...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 01:55 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By Lance K
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

Not really.

He asked a question so as to help and your answer seemed like more theory.

I think what John was getting at is...what are your specific results using this system over X time period....
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 01:18 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By quadagon
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

Its old advice but still gold:


Tape yourself selling the system to someone
Transcribe the conversation
Cut out all the ums and ares
Play with the format


and you have the base of your...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 11:45 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

You're forgetting...or just don't know...he's a Brit - I presume (said something about "Liverpool) - and the Brits don't respond to hype like the American market. Same with us Aussies. I think what...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 11:34 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By Robert_Rand
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

It appears as though the purpose of your post isn't to ask for feedback, whether you realize it or not. It's to defend your beliefs, voice your frustration with reality, and to justify your...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 11:29 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By ThePromotionalGuy
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

Hello Easy,

Go to Bob Bly's website and look in his Products section.

Here is the link (Not an Affiliate Link): Products - Bob Bly: Copywriter (http://www.bly.com/newsite/Pages/ebook.php)
...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 10:48 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By JohnRussell
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

What is the truth?

What kind of results does your system get?

Why is your system different than those guys?

If you were writing a letter to a friend explaining why he should get your videos,...
Forum: Copywriting 9th September 2014, 10:46 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,276
Posted By KreativCopy
Re: My Reputation Is More Important Than Hype - Can You Help?

To be perfectly honest, I think you have just written it (well...part of it)! 'Bookies chasing you with pitch forks' made me laugh out loud. You were being honest, great...people love that!

I...
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2014, 09:55 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,064
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: Printed Direct Mail Sales Letter or Postcard?

Wrong. If you do it correctly the print and postage will cost you nothing.

A long form sales letter allows you to interact with your prospect. If you write it correctly you will be answering all...
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2014, 07:31 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,064
Posted By AmericanMuscleTA
Re: Printed Direct Mail Sales Letter or Postcard?

Hi Easy,

What type of business is the direct mail for??

Postcards and sales letters can both work, you just need the right list and to test. Send postcards to half of your list and...
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2014, 11:57 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,064
Posted By gemm24
Re: Printed Direct Mail Sales Letter or Postcard?

Just my .02, but I very rarely even open an envelope if I think it contains a sales letter (though I'm speaking as a consumer,not sure who your audience is.) Direct mail is the way to go but, as...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2014, 06:38 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,064
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: Printed Direct Mail Sales Letter or Postcard?

I agree Postcards do wonders at directing people to an interweb page

Far cheaper than a 29 page printed epic, it's solus advertising which is not clammering for attention with a clutter of other...
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