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Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2010, 07:27 PM
Replies: 14
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Posted By Steve Wells
Want To Write Persuasive Sales Copy?

I recently came across one the best books I've read about how to sell with words using psychology. My wife purchased it at Barnes & Noble I believe.

It breaks everything down into easy to...
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2010, 01:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 714
Posted By patsfanxxx
Forum: Copywriting 12th November 2010, 07:13 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 714
Posted By K.Callwood
Re: Squeeze Page or Sales Letter... (or a combination?)

I just want to echo the comment about the benefits being clearly stated. Try to make them sensory (look, listen, feel, taste, smell) because people really respond well to that approach.

I like...
Forum: Copywriting 12th November 2010, 04:50 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 714
Posted By Danielle Lynn
Re: Squeeze Page or Sales Letter... (or a combination?)

Hi Brian,

It's getting better :) I laughed a bit at the "spews" money headline. A product so effective that money is thrown-up all over my face was a fun image!

Here's what I think will make...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2010, 06:27 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 714
Posted By Danielle Lynn
Re: Squeeze Page or Sales Letter... (or a combination?)

Hey there :) Danielle here

Here's some thoughts -

Although it is visually dramatic, there's been a lot of discussion about white text on black backgrounds, and how at least in paper copy (like...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2010, 06:16 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 714
Posted By WarriorCoach
Re: Squeeze Page or Sales Letter... (or a combination?)

You need to make more appealing titles and subtitles.

Add more bullets, hire somebody to review your copy and ask for a qoute for potential changes. It will be a cheap investment with great...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2010, 04:41 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 714
Posted By HotDamnShortSales
Re: Squeeze Page or Sales Letter... (or a combination?)

im certainly not anything close to a copywriter, but i am close to a consumer, and I like it. love the colors, the video, the happy couple and testimonials. give it a run see what happens.
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2010, 12:51 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 921
Posted By docsulo
Re: Me again!! Different approach now...

I'm still on the headline and if I didn't change the premise (except for removing the "dietitian" part which I don't think will help the way it is) - I'd go with something like this...


Want to...
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