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Forum: Copywriting 14th July 2010, 02:27 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 769
Posted By AustinLadyTam
Re: Im about to DEPLOY (to afghanistan), need help with my sales page FAST!

Oh, man...I'd like to be able to help you, I really would, and I applaud your willingness to serve our country.

But I'd be doing you a disservice if I didn't level with you, so here goes...
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Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2010, 03:50 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 846
Posted By AustinLadyTam
Re: Rip My Copy To Shreds

I'd swap your current headline out for the subhead that begins with "You can now EXPLODE..." THAT should be the headline, leading with the biggest benefits.

+1 on what RickDuris said about your...
Forum: Copywriting 11th May 2010, 01:49 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 4,739
Posted By AustinLadyTam
Re: When was last time you received a classic long format sales letter in the post?

I still remember Ken Robert's memorable long copy sales letter I receive for his product, "The World's Most Powerful Money Manual." It was about commodities investing, and the sales letter was so...
Forum: Copywriting 5th May 2010, 07:17 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 939
Posted By AustinLadyTam
Re: Identifying with your audience?

I think you should weave your story into the sales copy if you've got a compelling story that pertains to your product, or a compelling angle. People LOVE reading stories! Story-based copy sells. ...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2010, 01:10 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 691
Posted By AustinLadyTam
Re: Critique Please

The headline is a little too indirect for me--I'd like to see more of an obvious benefit, such as being able to talk close to someone without them pulling away. Don't assume the reader will make the...
Forum: Copywriting 5th March 2010, 12:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,691
Posted By AustinLadyTam
Re: Stripped Naked Sales Letters...

Thanks, Ross, I love some of your grabby prose, such as the death-dropping elevator!
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