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Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 15th September 2014, 02:59 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,048
Posted By DWaters
Re: Do you list your products on Amazon?

There are some good things about having your own store such as the amount of control over certain things. However I would much rather have the HUGE amount of buyer traffic that Amazon has.

The...
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 15th September 2014, 02:48 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,048
Posted By Solid Commerce
Re: Do you list your products on Amazon?

I actually don't think there's a real situation in which one of those options is better than the others.

That'll have a LOT to do with what kind of capital you've got access to as you're starting...
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 15th September 2014, 08:36 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,048
Posted By AnthonyCapetola
Re: Do you list your products on Amazon?

Having your own store is an investment early on. Having your own store also gives you freedom of expression, makes you look more professional and with the right platform you'll have inventory...
Forum: Copywriting 1st July 2014, 10:39 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By mattchambers
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

1. Headline needs to be more compelling. Make it speak to the reader in mind, "Parents, discover the artistic side of your child"

2. Open up your letter with 1 or 2 sentences giving the readers...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2014, 12:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By RickDuris
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

Strategically flawed. No one buys a live art class by mail.

That said, I could encourage you to get people to talk with Jill.

In other words, develop a letter which generates leads for Jill to...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2014, 12:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By angiecolee
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

Mark's got good advice. Chalk this up as a first draft done (many people don't even get that far) and another step closer.

That conversational aspect with your friend - that's the key to capturing...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2014, 11:02 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

It's boring and academic. And it's way too long... because reading the copy is like trudging through sludge.

You've got some good ideas in there. The problem is, they're buried underneath a...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2014, 10:45 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By keithb89
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

I'd suggest opening your letter by asking the parent to visualize their child growing up to be self-confident, independent, etc. I think this would help to convey positive imagery up front and...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2014, 08:33 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By angiecolee
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

1. Headlines and subheads are not compelling.

2. The whole letter is super wordy. Get to the point and avoid unnecessary fillers like the rhetorical questions you've added on the back end of some...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2014, 07:12 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 814
Posted By RogozRazvan
Re: Critique Request: Direct Marketing Letter

From my experience with a private kindergarten, parents are doing this more because they are busy (job, etc) than for the experience itself. So yes, most of what you've wrote there is good (at least...
Forum: Copywriting 15th June 2014, 09:46 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 650
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: Would a direct marketing sales letter easily outperform flyers?

I've done plenty of both. Best results come from combos.

1) A one page flyer (aka lift letter) with a a compact message.
2) A detailed letter for the people who want to know more

Mail them...
Forum: Copywriting 7th June 2014, 07:02 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,547
Posted By Declan O Flaherty
Re: Headline Critique Needed Please

Here's one that's sure to get attention...

"How A Retarded Kid From Ohio With No Arms Finally Learned How To Play Guitar Like A Pro"

ahahahahahahahahahah
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st October 2012, 01:33 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 357
Posted By charidemos
Re: A quick question...

try Traffic Geyser and go through their quick start guide. It only cost a $1 I think for the first 21 days and there is a lot of training material if you want to educate yourself
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st October 2012, 01:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 357
Posted By intergen
Re: A quick question...

Traffic Geyser is great as well - it does cost money.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st October 2012, 01:14 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 357
Posted By talfighel
Re: A quick question...

There is one that I can think of.

It is called:

TubeMogul | Video Advertising Built for Branding (http://www.tubemogul.com)
Forum: Offline Marketing 3rd July 2012, 02:48 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 558
Posted By Kevin AKA Hubcap
Re: How Would You Market This To Offline Businesses?

I don't know what type of business you're working with but jimbo13 has given you very valuable information.



jimbo--do you know the level of personalization that entails and how is it...
Forum: Offline Marketing 2nd July 2012, 09:57 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 558
Posted By jimbo13
Re: How Would You Market This To Offline Businesses?

Well I don't think Dentist is a great example.

Brush teeth, floss, check-up every 6 months. Everyone knows that so what else would you put in a newsletter and who wants one from a dentist.

You...
Forum: Offline Marketing 2nd July 2012, 09:45 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 558
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: How Would You Market This To Offline Businesses?

Traffic and conversion are your factors here.

If they have no articles, they get no traffic, right?

If the articles are good, they'll turn readers into customers.

Get your prospect to tell...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st June 2012, 12:40 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 476
Posted By Paul Myers
Re: Any of you screwheads know ELO?

Tell you what. Take a little break from it, since it's such a dirty business, and you're so disgusted with all us boneheads.


Paul
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th June 2012, 03:56 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,693
Posted By Nick Pearson
Re: [Warning, no wusses allowed] How real businesses make millions - One. Simple. Strategy.

I feel what your saying - in simple terms don't follow the crowd. Offer something new to help distinguish you from the rest. Controversy is a good start but I feel some people could routine there...
Forum: Copywriting 11th June 2012, 04:46 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 881
Posted By Joseph Robinson
Re: Be Honest...

If I had to choose between the two, I would go with "Getting Families Fit & Healthy" personally. As far as the slogan being recognized as "cool" to children, I think that both fall short.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th June 2012, 03:00 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 5,101
Posted By Joseph Robinson
Re: How to be a successful drug dealer (Uses Paypal) lol

Exactly. My hitman service that I run online follows all of the FTC's rules and regulations. I won't be getting shut down or sued for any of that.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th June 2012, 09:50 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 891
Posted By Brian Tayler
Re: A question for Allen, Paul or any other mods

Personally I've always hated having to navigate forums with different sub categories. I also feel (based on my experience) it leaves some "categories" with little to no audience and thus some threads...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th June 2012, 08:58 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 891
Posted By danr62
Re: A question for Allen, Paul or any other mods

You can do it yourself without needing to have any more subforums there. Simply scroll to the bottom where it says "Display Options", select the box marked "Prefix", and choose which category you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th June 2012, 08:54 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 891
Posted By Paul Myers
Re: A question for Allen, Paul or any other mods

Prashant,I don't recall it having been suggested before. That said, I doubt it would be considered a great idea. I suspect most of the people looking for something specific will either find it via a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th June 2012, 02:52 PM
Replies: 87
Views: 3,092
Posted By getty
Re: 10,000 Posts And I Got Nothin...

reading this in morgan freeman's voice.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th June 2012, 04:38 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 1,058
Posted By Chris Worner
Forum: Off Topic Forum 4th June 2012, 10:28 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 2,045
Posted By Joseph Robinson
Re: I fought the bear, and the bear won.

That's the beautiful thing about art. We can interpret it as an afro. Doesn't help my situation though, because now it seems that I am facing a bear version of Jules Winnfield.
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st June 2012, 09:28 PM
Replies: 106
Views: 4,846
Posted By Tsnyder
Re: OMFG! R u serious? I knew it! Now confirmed!

Grow up... stop whining... nothing you or anyone
else wrote is that important or profound. Get over
yourself.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2012, 12:17 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 770
Posted By AnniePot
Re: ARTICLE POSTING STRATEGY

Yes, definitely. In the beginning, populate your blog with a lot of good, informative, readable content. You need to establish some authority at the start.

In fact, I wouldn't advise that you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2012, 09:59 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,699
Posted By Joseph Robinson
Re: Copying And Pasting Other People's Articles On Sites

From the Urban Dictionary

Circle Talk: A conversation that never ends. Yes it goes on and on my friends. Some people started discussing it not knowing what it was, and they'll continue...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2012, 09:52 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 770
Posted By Joseph Robinson
Re: ARTICLE POSTING STRATEGY

Whenever I start a new site, I put 5 posts up to start with. I'm not trying to create an illusion of being active (what is the point of that? They still know it is a new blog, and if your content is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2012, 04:12 AM
Replies: 54
Views: 3,728
Posted By sbucciarel
Re: $1000+/m - ARE YOU MAKING THAT MUCH? INVITED!

Yes ... Click This

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2012, 02:52 AM
Replies: 54
Views: 3,728
Posted By Cool Hand Luke
Re: $1000+/m - ARE YOU MAKING THAT MUCH? INVITED!

http://i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/000/554/facepalm.jpg
Forum: Copywriting 23rd May 2012, 08:39 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 4,367
Posted By RickDuris
NLP copywriting power words

Interesting new study on NLP power words:

Persuade with Silky Smooth Copy | Neuromarketing (http://www.neurosciencemarketing.com/blog/articles/metaphor-marketing.htm)

- Rick Duris
Forum: Copywriting 14th May 2012, 01:21 PM
Replies: 67
Views: 5,994
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: How to Find More Clients

Really? You know what the breakdown is? The first three are getting most of the action. The rest hardly count.

#1 on Google gets around 42% of the traffic. #2 12% , #3 8.5% and then it falls...
Forum: Copywriting 11th May 2012, 09:50 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 735
Posted By Wytnyt
Re: How to make outsourcing sexy?

What's the issue on everyone's minds when it comes to outsourcing? Tackle that.
Forum: Copywriting 10th May 2012, 07:42 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 5,105
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: A Gary Halbert Tip

Hey Prashant,

Have a look here:

For Copywriters | Ryan McGrath (http://theryanmcgrath.com/for-copywriters/)
Forum: Copywriting 7th May 2012, 07:23 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 614
Posted By videolover7
Re: How does one write a killer "warriors for hire" subject line?

Think for a moment how you've positioned yourself. Articles go for $4 each all the way up to $200 each... and even higher.

So at $10 each, you're pretty close to the bottom rung but not close...
Forum: Copywriting 7th May 2012, 05:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 614
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: How does one write a killer "warriors for hire" subject line?

For reference, your current subject line is:

I Write Better Than Anyone Else. Period. Don't Believe Me? Free Review Copies Available

To start with, drop the free review copies, you've got...
Forum: Copywriting 7th May 2012, 09:49 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

I think Harlan's referring to this:

http://makepeacetotalpackage.com.s3.amazonaws.com/forum_swipes/RosengartenInsert.pdf
Forum: Copywriting 7th May 2012, 09:29 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Posted By Harlan
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

The best copy ever for a food product was written by a copywriter who's trademarked his name so I can't mention it.

He wrote (and later denied) writing a sales letter for a ham.

Perhaps someone...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th May 2012, 02:50 AM
Replies: 86
Views: 3,568
Posted By drmani
Re: Would You Pay Me $0.04 Per word per article?

Wrong question.

Wrong audience.

The 'right' question is: "How much do you currently make from top quality
articles you have had written for you by article writers you've hired in the
past?"...
Forum: Copywriting 5th May 2012, 07:56 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Posted By videolover7
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Double your money back if not satisfied. I'll bet nobody else in your niche is making that guarantee.

A guarantee like that could easily increase sales by 30%. Sure, you'll get a few low-lifes...
Forum: Copywriting 5th May 2012, 09:35 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,064
Re: Back Again - Need another sales letter critique!!!

Top Secret – Special Message to Shanen For Her Eyes Only.

Whispers to Shanen… reading some of the threads...


Did anyone ever tell you that being a copywriter means you’re prone to...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 06:54 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Posted By videolover7
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Check out the online J. Peterman catalog. They've had great success selling every-day items (in this case clothes) by telling a little story about each.

Here's an example...

Dresses > Women |...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 01:55 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Prash,

Yes, if you need any help pm or post any questions.

And as the others said - no matter how delicious they are - cupcakes still need some good copy.


Steve
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 11:17 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

As Marketeer said,

sales copy IS needed. Most people think 'cos it's long, it's boring. I used to think the same. Now it seems I've drunk from the copywriting fountain, and my beliefs have all...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 10:48 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Posted By The Marketeer
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Do some more research on cupcake/cake websites.

The copy they use on these types of sites is more subtle than for e.g. IM Products. Although they could use some stronger calls to action.

The...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 09:38 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Posted By The Marketeer
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Sales copy of some form IS needed. It doesn't have to be long. A short targeted one will do along with compelling desciptions.

Besides the pictures, words are the only other "stimulant" that will...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 04:31 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Hi Prash,

Here's a UK site which might help with a few ideas.

Ella (http://www.ellasbakehouse.co.uk/)


Steve
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 04:18 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 988
Re: Anyone written ads in the F&B industry?

Prash,

found this: http://www.wordfeeder.com/SeasonsTreatings.pdf

Might be worth looking at. Look at how they entice the customers with vivid details, describing their shortbread. Not only...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 03:33 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,353
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Critique for my first sales page. Thanks from a Newbie

First off Ian, your business model.

You know as well as I do here in the UK this industry isn't exactly looked upon in the most favourable light. It's almost on a par with loan sharks.
...
Forum: Copywriting 5th March 2012, 06:06 PM
Replies: 173
Views: 14,960
Posted By Raydal
Re: $10,000 Prize To Beat This Control

Don't you want character as well? Give me the $10,000 and
this will build your generosity.

-Ray Edwards
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd February 2012, 12:40 PM
Replies: 59
Views: 2,539
Posted By Gene Pimentel
Re: $8 investment cashed out $1888 in 43 days

Because they didn't think of it.
Forum: Copywriting 27th October 2010, 07:56 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 881
Posted By RickDuris
Re: Need Help with Name of Service

You are making a mistake with SniperLeads.com.

Just because "the name is available" is just the silliest reason I have heard to name your company.

Get in the head of your potential Client.
...
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