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Forum: Copywriting 16th August 2010, 02:04 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 985
Posted By jukeboxhero
Re: Which Sales Page is Better?

Why waste such valuable space (the stuff above the fold) with that all that garble that really tells me nothing and leaves me with that feeling that I better start typing one handed because I'll need...
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2010, 02:27 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 985
Posted By cainsproducts
Re: Which Sales Page is Better?

I prefer the 2nd one also, I will also co-sign that the 1st page pop up ads are a little annoying
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2010, 02:09 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 985
Posted By RentItNow
Re: Which Sales Page is Better?

You headline does not tell me why your product is any different than the thousand other "facebook will save you" products out there, so I would not even read beyond that if I where a customer.

"I...
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2010, 08:35 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 985
Posted By casius
Re: Which Sales Page is Better?

Second page is better because in the first page pops advertisement which is very annoying.
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2010, 07:56 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 985
Posted By davemiz
Re: Which Sales Page is Better?

sorry.... i know you're trying to get feedback and improve your site, but honestly, these threads are such a waste...

To hell with a review... or peoples opinions... they don't mean JACK in direct...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2010, 04:30 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 985
Posted By FuNwiThChRiS
Re: Which Sales Page is Better?

I agree, the second one is better. Just work on your formatting (that seems to be the most common issue among sales letters, that goes for me as well!) and you will have a decent page here. Good luck!
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2010, 07:21 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 827
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: What Will Make You Not To Buy My Product?

The design is a lot better. On Firefox there's a lot of empty space around the video. Otherwise, there's nothing distracting like your earlier version. It looks much more professional.

It's not...
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2010, 01:35 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 827
Re: What Will Make You Not To Buy My Product?

Why not ask her for advice if you don't want ours?
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2010, 01:10 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 827
Posted By travlinguy
Re: What Will Make You Not To Buy My Product?

I didn't watch your video. I almost never watch videos online except for stuff I seek on Youtube. There's absolutely NO offer I need so bad as to watch a video. If there's no print describing the...
Forum: Copywriting 7th March 2010, 10:57 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 1,238
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: This Should Be The Best Sales Page I Guess!

The picture/design is up to you! It has to be part of your own creativity for the site.

By modern web 2.0 look I meant look at Google, Yahoo, Facebook, Wikipedia, Blogger, Twitter, etc. The...
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