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Forum: Copywriting 5th January 2011, 02:14 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 866
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: How Bad Does This Headline Suck

Go with what Bruce said and ignore everything else.
Forum: Copywriting 27th December 2010, 11:48 PM
Replies: 51
Views: 1,851
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: You Have To Give Just One Copywriting Tip?

Don't try to work your entire sales pitch into the headline.
Forum: Copywriting 27th December 2010, 11:39 PM
Replies: 76
Views: 3,271
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Kick my Gonad's

I have to admit, this goon is cracking me up. Shamelessly stealing someone's copy and bragging about it on a public forum. What a piece of work!

But you know what's even funnier? How easy it would...
Forum: Copywriting 24th December 2010, 11:42 PM
Replies: 76
Views: 3,271
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Kick my Gonad's

Ah yes, Conversion Prophet. Directly from the sales page...

By tracking the length of time visitors stayed on the page, I could get a good idea about which part of the AIDA formula was ...
Forum: Copywriting 24th December 2010, 05:29 PM
Replies: 76
Views: 3,271
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Kick my Gonad's

[You copy writing guys here have a major ego problem.]

Actually, let me amend my ad hominem response.

Here's my problem with you and it ain't an ego one.

You come here and almost sneeringly...
Forum: Copywriting 20th December 2010, 08:52 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 962
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: My First Product/Sales Letter

$5,000 in a week?

That's better than $250,000 a year. Maybe you should just hire a good copywriter with that avalanche of money you've got falling on your head every day.

Unless...

Nah.
Forum: Copywriting 19th December 2010, 10:27 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 798
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Please help critque my new copy!

I'm not going to spend too much time on this because, well, it's a free critique, but I'd start with your headline.

“The Revolutionary 3-Step System

You Can Use Today to

Help Lower Blood...
Forum: Copywriting 19th December 2010, 09:56 PM
Replies: 55
Views: 2,661
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Critique This Bad Boy... Already converting like crazy

If the headline tweak increased conversions, then why are you still running the old one?
Forum: Copywriting 9th July 2009, 10:18 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,177
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Okay, I'm nervous as hell, but...

I also think that dwelling too much on the low-cost providers is a mistake. Mention that kind of writing and dismiss it. The main focus should be on the value YOU bring to the READER.

Just...
Forum: Copywriting 9th July 2009, 09:43 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 566
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Implimented Your Advice, need adittional critique

I don't get this...

At first it seemed absurd. Why would I want to attract a car
accident or debt? That was one of the reasons a lot of people
didn’t believe it. Thank God, I wasn’t one of them!...
Forum: Copywriting 9th July 2009, 09:28 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,177
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Okay, I'm nervous as hell, but...

I don't think that headline works. It's too general (you're not marketing to business owners ... you're marketing to business owners in the IM niche who need content) and it's trying a little too...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th March 2009, 08:24 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 765
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: The "Un" Method to Instant Online Success

I'd take this a step further and note why a particular marketer turned you off. Make a list of reasons why you stayed subsribed to some marketers and not others. Might be a good reference for when...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th March 2009, 07:22 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,276
Posted By MonsterZero
Re: Let's Have A Little Experiment Here...

I'm with the other guys. I didn't like the pop up. I stuck through it, but found the headline and pitch to be less than credible.

Not sure why you've put all your headlines in quotes ...
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