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Forum: Copywriting 24th October 2012, 11:40 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,831
Posted By BrandonLee
Re: Self Defense - Brazilian Jiu Jitsu

Thanks for all of the links and feedback guys. It has given me a few good bits to work with.

Lloyd seems to be the big dog in the marketing department of that world to be sure. The guy I'm...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd October 2012, 08:00 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,831
Posted By Raydal
Re: Self Defense - Brazilian Jiu Jitsu

Google "Lloyd Irvin". He is one of Dan Kennedy's inner
circle members and about the biggest and most successful
marketer in that field.

-Ray Edwards
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2011, 12:57 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By max5ty
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Guess this gives new meaning to the phrase "12 ounce curls".

We might start seeing gyms in bars, or bars in gyms.

You could have "Misty" doing a pole dance on stage -- Larry and Bob doing bench...
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2011, 05:51 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Ansar Pasha
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

I was going to defend the GC... but... it's true more often than not :D

Ansar
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 07:36 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By EricMN
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

How about every single college student? Not sure how much anyone remembers college life or is still experiencing it, but it's teeming with young adults that teem both the pubs and the gym.

Hint...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 03:41 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By RUSHYYZ
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

HI Reflection, If you could kindly PM me any copies of your "Killer Sales" work, I would gladly send you a copy of my ebook. Thanks, looking forward to your insights.
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 03:03 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

There is a market here.

The reason I asked to read the ebook was to decide if there was any genuine value here.

Trust me though, there are plenty of beer drinkers who'd love to have a cut...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 02:35 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Leaders in this industry have their own code of ethics. We won't promote or help to promote just about anything which comes to the market. No matter how much money is on the table. It just won't...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 01:37 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By writeandreview
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

I understand what you're saying, but in the interest of helping n00bs like me everywhere ...

Let's say he's already saddled this horse and has to get to the town barn dance before his betrothed...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 12:53 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Thanks Jake, but it won't help. On this forum, I'm hopelessly in the minus column. LOL

I have a 1.7 thanks to post ratio, so I guess that's something. :-)

Alex
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 12:36 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

You may be barking up the wrong tree. I don't think direct response is your best approach.

You'd make out a lot better using publicity instead. Get yourself on TV talk shows. Talk show hosts...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 12:03 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Ricky Allen
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Well I think a weight loss, fitness arena is a potential winner.

There is already.

Beer Diet Book & Beerobics Shirt (http://www.thebeerdiet.com/)

And yes there are many sites at the moment...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 12:02 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By JakeDaly
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

+1!!!!!!!!!

(I would have preferred to only say a casual "+1!" but there is a 10 character minimum per post.)
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 11:12 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

If that's the "big idea" of your pitch, good luck. Beer drinkers aren't the least bit interested in working out. So scratch that mass market off your target group.

Now you're down to work-out...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 10:58 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By RUSHYYZ
Re: From a different viewpoint.

GJABIZ, you are wise beyond your years, a TRUE scholar, and I thank you immensely for your wisdom and insight. You are RIGHT ON TRACK with my intended approach.

THIS is the type of input,...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 10:20 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By gjabiz
From a different viewpoint.

Rushyyz,

I don't think there is anything glaringly wrong with your ad. Except for the fact it isn't working...

that is, not working to pull in affiliates...and correct me if I'm wrong, but...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 09:28 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Not really.

My most successful clients understand good copy is like an amplifier.

If you have something people want... it'll sell well regardless if you get the right eyeballs in front of it......
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 09:15 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Harlan
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 09:03 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By RUSHYYZ
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

HARLAN - can you contact me directly, I think you will like what I have to say! cheers. Mike
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 09:03 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By RUSHYYZ
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

To all - Thanks again, and the "real truth" is that yes, it has sold copies direct, just no affiliate sales (for reasons too lengthy too discuss here). I have just left the station and it will be...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 08:34 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By John_S
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Sigh. Something is screwy here.

If it were not, the pitch would succeed in spite of itself. Might be low response. Not no respose.
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 08:28 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Harlan
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Sigh...

some of you guys need to go back to the Dan Kennedy / Gary Halbert / John Carlton basic lessons.

If you're a beer drinker and your over weight, this hook is amazing.

Add a little...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 05:56 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Raises an eyebrow and looks at Harlan quizzically over the top of his spectacles.
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2011, 12:04 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,750
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Disaster Piece to "Masterpiece" for $500? Any TOP Pitchman Up For The Challenge?

Hysterical. Major credibility problem. Wild claims - even wilder photos of "cut" bodies holding beer and lifting 6-packs. As for your testimonials - very much on the nose. "Joseph, Australia" says...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd November 2010, 10:37 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,559
Posted By AidanKay
Re: $50 Contest for Headlines...

Here's my go..


Can't make it home this Thanksgiving?.. Send your love!
Orangegiftbaskets.net


Won't make it home this thanksgiving? Want to show you care?.. It's in the bag!...
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2010, 10:29 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,559
Posted By ewenmack
Re: $50 Contest for Headlines...

Max,

You've got a lot of headlines here.

Are you going to just pick one that you like...or test a bunch
of them and let the market decide the best performer?

All the best,
Ewen
Forum: Copywriting 29th October 2010, 10:51 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,559
Posted By David Babineau
Re: $50 Contest for Headlines...

Melt Mom’s Heart This Thanksgiving…
“Mom, Sorry I Can’t Make It… Here’s a Piece of Fruit.”
Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2010, 01:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 5,054
Posted By Ross Bowring
Re: Nested Loops - Stories Within a Story

"Buying Trances" by Joe Vitale has a whole chapter on nestled loops, including a nestled loops sales letter written by Harlan, and a letter by Vitale too. Worth the purchase.

Amazon.com: Buying...
Forum: Copywriting 15th May 2010, 03:08 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 5,054
Posted By Daniel Sanchez
Re: Nested Loops - Stories Within a Story

Great Share!

Kilstein...

Great NLP in copy.

One of the only teachers I have ever come across that actually knows how to apply to copy.

Paul Hancox is pretty good at too.
Forum: Copywriting 15th May 2010, 01:31 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 5,054
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Tip Nested Loops - Stories Within a Story

http://www.yourinternets.com/storage/thumbnails/3156278-6938434-thumbnail.jpgI nicked this from Harlan Kilstein's book "Steal This Book" (the title of which he nicked from yippie Abbie Hoffman's...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th May 2010, 09:10 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 907
Posted By Gary King
Re: MAN I'm having a good day!

One day at a time. You can force that to accelerate if you try. :D



Sometimes has to be done. Yesterday was icky contract negotiations for me but necessary. Plow through what you have to do...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th May 2010, 08:41 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 907
Posted By jordan08
Re: MAN I'm having a good day!

Hi Gary!

Ur post just brightened up my day! What a welcome ray of sunshine during a day that didn't start that bright! :)

Thanks!

Ayesha
Forum: Mind Warriors 10th May 2010, 03:13 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 815
Posted By TradingExpert
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2010, 01:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,994
Posted By The Copy Nazi
The Dark Fields & MDT-48

http://images.askmen.com/women/celeb_profiles_actress_60/65_abbie_cornish.jpg

Abbie Cornish


The Dark Fields - movie being shot in NYC and Philly at the moment with Robert de Niro, Bradley...
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2010, 08:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,480
Posted By RickDuris
Re: How I write copy (i.e. the Secret Life of a Copywriter.)

Hi all,

Thanks to everyone for reading and commenting. It's very encouraging, gratifying and inspiring.

I wish I could share more, but lack of time and tremendous respect for the privacy...
Forum: Copywriting 25th March 2010, 08:32 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,307
Posted By Raydal
Tip 21 Ways To Keep Readers Glued To Your Sales Letter

Boredom is probably the greatest threat to any sales letter. It
is often said that a letter can never be too long, just too
boring. So in this post I want to look at 21 ways you can cut
boredom...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 22nd February 2010, 06:18 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 500
Posted By daniel.s
Re: Network Marketing Orgs in Australia

Hey Nick,

You can go to the "The Online Resource for Home Business Professionals" npros com. There are a lot of companies and some of them are in Australia.

Daniel
Forum: Mind Warriors 6th January 2010, 11:37 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,036
Posted By Sam Mlambo
Re: 3 Questions You Should Ask Yourselves About Your Friends

Good post!

Something I learned from Mark Victor Hansen is... Surround yourself with a peer group that will motivate you, excite you, and challenge you to become better.

If your current peer...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 8th November 2009, 07:23 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 500
Posted By Ron Kerr
Re: Network Marketing Orgs in Australia

I'm not aware of any Australian network marketing orgies but I will certainly look out for them.

It's not something I even would have thought of!

Oh, damn! I just put my glasses on and...
Forum: Copywriting 19th August 2009, 10:00 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 43,697
Posted By Chris Ramsey
Use This Checklist Before Asking For A Critique

If you've been on the copywriting forum for a while, you've seen a LOT
of critique requests. I like that business owners are looking to improve
their copy, but most of the time we end up giving...
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2009, 03:12 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 823
Posted By Kevin Lam
Re: tear my squeeze a new s-hole...

I would simply say this:



===========



I'd say:
Forum: Website Design 26th June 2009, 06:36 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,300
Posted By coondog1y
WEBSITE for FREE

Hello I'm a up and becoming website designer. Trying to get my name out and around the web. This is a listing for 5 FREE WEBSITES for 5 different people. All I ask is for testimonials on the job I...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st June 2009, 07:16 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 803
Posted By TheGodfather
My Generous gift to the WF members

Just because this forum is SO helpful towards me, I want to give back to the community for all the help that they have provided, although I still haven't made a single $ in profit. As a way to say...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 18th June 2009, 05:03 AM
Replies: 1,398
Views: 77,571
Posted By Andy Fletcher
Re: The Angela Experiment

There's no minimum subscription you can cancel at any time.

Cheers,

Andy
Forum: Copywriting 17th June 2009, 01:18 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 812
Posted By creativeblogger
Lightbulb How to avoid mistakes people make when writing sales copy

It's not unusual for people to write their own sales copy whether it be for a website or a paper flyer. Some strike lucky and get the mood just right and others bomb out despite having great literary...
Forum: Local Meetups, Mastermind Groups and Warrior Events 14th June 2009, 11:49 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 4,843
Posted By NewbiesDiary
Re: Gold Coast Warrior Bash (18th October 2008)

yep! Coming up in August I believe - send Mike Sylvester a PM and i'm sure he'll update you

Stef
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th June 2009, 08:42 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 790
Posted By seriousmny
Re: Hey guys, I'm new here.

Welcome to the forum Nick. There are so many ways to make money in here. Get in where you fit in (what works best for you) and go for it. There is money to me made and who better than you to get...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th June 2009, 07:24 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 790
Posted By findtips
Re: Hey guys, I'm new here.

Welcome Nick! You've just discovered a gold mine. Jump in and start panning!
Just remember that among all this gold are giant lumps of coal. Are you smart enough to figure out which is witch? ;) You...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th June 2009, 06:51 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 790
Posted By Robin E. Anderson
Re: Hey guys, I'm new here.

Hi Nick,

I'm new here, as well, and I find no matter how puzzling many of the posts are (puzzling because I don't yet grasp all the lingo) I force myself to stumble through them. Who knows when...
Forum: Copywriting 24th May 2009, 07:28 AM
Replies: 132
Views: 8,334
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Why Not to Charge $197 for your sales copy... Or pay it, either.

John,

Thanks for clarifying. I wasn't really aware of the whole "gold star" issue... now I understand.

Whilst I understand (finally, LOL) your position, and respect it, I think there are other...
Forum: Mind Warriors 18th April 2009, 06:25 PM
Replies: 368
Views: 13,636
Posted By keithaul
Re: Motivational Quote Of The Day

"What great thing would you attempt if you knew you could not fail?"
— Robert H. Schuller...
Forum: Mind Warriors 10th April 2009, 09:49 AM
Replies: 368
Views: 13,636
Posted By cookies
Re: Motivational Quote Of The Day

"I fear not the man who has practiced 10,000 kicks once, but I fear the man who has practiced one kick 10,000 times." - Bruce Lee
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