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Forum: Copywriting 25th February 2012, 03:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 661
Posted By Anthony707
Re: Please tear into me.

Hey,


Good start! We all started out with little or no copywriting experience and asking others for help is putting yourself out there in front of others which takes courage.

I would suggest ...
Forum: Copywriting 24th February 2012, 07:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 661
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Please tear into me.

http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting-forum/115546-use-checklist-before-asking-critique.html

Critique wise... it's bloody awful your sales copy. Hand it off to a professional copywriter who...
Forum: Copywriting 24th February 2012, 01:51 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 661
Posted By Matt Ausin
Re: Please tear into me, knock like a step child, abuse me.

First, that letter bores me to tears. I just can't force myself to read the whole thing to give a complete critique so the few points below will have to do. However what I really recommend is that...
Forum: Copywriting 24th February 2012, 12:44 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 661
Posted By ahew
Re: Please tear into me, knock like a step child, abuse me.

Also try to draw the eye to some key phrases by using bold and italics in some places. Check the WSO threads or other sales pages to see how other people do it. For example, don't bold

If you...
Forum: Copywriting 24th February 2012, 03:44 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 661
Posted By rambo9600
Re: Please tear into me, knock like a step child, abuse me.

It's about a 5 of 10.

Fonts are too small.

I would lighten the background from a dark blue to a light blue.

Can you add some credibility in your header?

As seen on TV, Google, etc...?
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 28th January 2012, 12:12 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 869
Posted By Joseph Denali
Re: How can I change these meta tags effectively

Wow, that's pretty terrible. Keep the title tag under 70 characters with your top targeted KW first. Include KWs in the meta description but keep it persuasive so that you get a decent click thru...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 27th January 2012, 12:45 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 869
Posted By retsek
Re: How can I change these meta tags effectively

My suggestion, assuming Tri-Fitness is the name of the site. Edit as needed to fit character limits.

<title>Chicago Personal Trainer - Ron Munvez - Tri-Fitness</title>
<meta name="description"...
Forum: Offline Marketing 14th January 2012, 09:50 PM
Replies: 314
Views: 27,691
Posted By RickDuris
Re: Now you can offer small business owners FREE unlimited text/SMS campaigns

You're going to love this little story.

Seems I stepped on a couple of toes sharing the information above.

I'm ok with opinions. But then sh*t hit the fan. I was threatened. Not once, but...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 1st January 2012, 04:37 PM
Replies: 359
Views: 40,206
Re: If Mobile Sites Are So Hot, Why Is It That Nobody Wants One?

Hi guys,

I have a few suggestions.

I sold two mobile websites for $1750 plus $500 worth of food vouchers at the restaurant.

First I go through Google Places typing in the keyword phrase to...
Forum: Offline Marketing 9th December 2011, 06:30 AM
Replies: 71
Views: 7,475
Posted By StrategicCheetah
Wow, Reputation Management must be the easiest sell ever?! MASSIVE LUCRATIVE MARKET !!!

Hey guys,

Just closed my first ever "Reputation Management" sale :D The best bit is, the client was practically begging for my help! I didn't have to sell anything!

As soon as the boss lady...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 1st November 2011, 09:33 AM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By Estrelita
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Ryan,

Thank you for sharing so much information and inspiration.
May your business thrive.

Estrelita
Forum: Mobile Marketing 29th October 2011, 11:37 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By Jacko
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Hey, Ryan,

really inspiring post
and really good vision of your check :)

thanks for sharing your success!
Forum: Mobile Marketing 27th October 2011, 05:30 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By colzinfobiz
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

I have found when approaching business owners with the mobile website offer you need to make it clear that your sites are different because....
1. They can be created to look and feel very close to...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 24th October 2011, 03:16 AM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By trumpador
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Ok,am now on iPad so it should be better. Hopefully autocorrect becomes my friend.

Re. Partnering, niac7 touched on it a little. Some of the larger guys can and will only take on projects that...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 21st October 2011, 06:43 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By niac7
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Hey Ryan,

Very exciting thread you have here.

A few tips that I'd like to offer.

1. Niche your services

You will find this advice in many places at WF. People pay more for a Specialist. ...
Forum: Offline Marketing 10th October 2011, 09:10 PM
Replies: 195
Views: 12,378
Posted By promo_guy
Wordpress Theme for Offliners - Want a Free Copy?

Hey offliners,

I'm in the process of creating an "offline friendly" wordpress theme. In the past, I've mostly done "online" marketing type themes.

Here's the thing, those of you who offer...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 6th October 2011, 12:13 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By bobbie1
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

I am so glad to hear that people are really succeeding in this kind of business. You are such an inspiration to me!

Thanks,
Bobbie
Forum: Mobile Marketing 6th October 2011, 11:35 AM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By Nathan Alexander
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Ryan, I'll say this: good for you. On so many levels. One, to keep everyone posted as I know many appreciate and read it even if they don't comment.

And two, you've found the not-so-secret...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 6th October 2011, 10:34 AM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By Stephanie Henry
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

I noticed that you said when you leave them a message you mention that you are a small business owner, and the check they gave you is made out to you personally. Do you find when you tell people that...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 5th October 2011, 04:43 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By Joshua Morris
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

very true and great advice... Its all about being persistent and never giving up.

I agree with you that the first few clients are the most important.. but that's why I think you SHOULD outsource...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 5th October 2011, 03:28 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By WillR
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Ryan,

Nice work. Persistence really does pay off. Your first clients are your most important so I would not outsource the work if you are able to do it yourself. You want to provide these first...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 5th October 2011, 11:31 AM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By 512 Designs
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Hey Ryan,

That's awesome. Congrats.

It's amazing how one day you can question yourself and your abilities, and the next day you're walking away with a check. Life's a real roller coaster,...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 5th October 2011, 10:18 AM
Replies: 150
Views: 11,690
Posted By JToneyUK
Re: I just got two meetings in 30 minutes

Ryan, excellent news mate!! This will no doubt spur you on bigtime to continue getting out there and scheduling meetings. I guess like many others have said, the mobile website is a foot in the door...
Forum: Mobile Marketing 20th September 2011, 02:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,197
Posted By 512 Designs
First two appointments happened today

Ok. I had two appointments set up for today.

One was a coffee shop and the other was a small cafe. I arrived at the coffee shop right on time, but the owner said she just got in and was swamped...
Forum: Offline Marketing 12th March 2010, 11:07 AM
Replies: 53
Views: 9,776
Posted By petelta
Generate a FULL TIME income from offline clients within 20 days.

Hey everyone.

For the past 3 weeks, I have dove into offline clients. To be quite honest with you, I had no idea what to do for an offline client 20 days ago. I never even thought about what...
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