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Forum: Copywriting 5th July 2009, 01:50 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 805
Posted By Mark McClure
Re: Need honest Opinions on my Letter... Get the Lead or Sell?

Joshua,

This is a long post :-)

Some thoughts - all 11 of them:

1- The start's missing a headline that clearly suggests the (potential) performance benefits and (possible, if very uncertain)...
Forum: Copywriting 4th July 2009, 11:37 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 805
Posted By Robert_Rand
Re: Need honest Opinions on my Letter... Get the Lead or Sell?

1) What is your headline?

These people probably get a lot of "school related junk mail" so you need to capture their attention immediately and sell the ultimate benefit while simultaneously...
Forum: Copywriting 4th July 2009, 07:53 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 805
Posted By MikeHumphreys
Re: HELP! Anyone Experienced with Direct Mail!

Depends on the product. If it's a desirable product being marketed to the right list and you make a great offer with strong sales copy than you can make a lot of sales. That was the combination...
Forum: Copywriting 4th April 2009, 06:48 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,119
Posted By Chris Ramsey
How I Practically FORCE My Visitors To Read My Website

Headlines are hands-down the most important piece of your website.

You can have a fantastic design, but without words that capture attention... you've got nothing but a design.

Words sell, not...
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2009, 11:25 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By jonb
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Josh,

I like "Speak with a trainer who really cares" better than what was there before. One more suggestion -- change the button copy from "Contact Me ASAP" (which is kind of intimidating) to...
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2009, 08:31 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By DavidJohnson
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Josh,

This is would require a totally different site all together and I know first hand how many times you changed this thing but I was thinking about the site I just made and what it may do for...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 08:28 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By Phalanx
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

I once bought a product that basically included two main parts. The guy who marketed it focused about two thirds of his pitch on the second part, and only one third on the first part. When I made my...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 10:57 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By AnneE
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Well.... aside from your website, since you are also just concerned with paying bills. I don't know if you are located where this would work, but I talked to a personal trainer who said that when he...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 05:08 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By AnneE
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

I looked at your website from the point of view of a potential customer in Orlando and asked whether I would hire you and I wasn't sure. Here were some of the reasons I hesitated.

1) You talk a...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 12:18 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By Adaptive
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Hi Joshua,

What I wonder is whether you could add additional streams of income. For example, could you sell training videos for people who want some advice, but at a lower cost than using a...
Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 11:44 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By jiht76
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

I hardly suggest you trying hover ads with a squeeze form... a BIG squeeze form

With hover ads I always have over 10% of responses.

You should also use a bigger squeeze form in your home and...
Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 11:34 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Mate, it's a pretty site but it looks too commercial to me. Too slick. You need to put Your head shot at top left. Then you need to tell us about yourself and then your credentials. Then I want to...
Forum: Copywriting 29th March 2009, 07:54 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,189
Posted By jonb
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Josh,

Some initial thoughts on your very attractive site:

* I wonder if including the prices is part of your problem. A prospect sees those and thinks "too expensive" and moves on. Maybe it's...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 04:35 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,032
Posted By Cherilyn Woodhouse
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

There is some truth to what Justin is saying, but can I make a suggestion?

Move your sidebar. Put the links across the top if you can, the content on the left, and your opt-in form above the fold...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 04:29 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,032
Posted By J. Barry Mandel
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

Just my opinion, but you sound desperate giving away all that FREE stuff especially if your target market is "affluent, professionals business owners, execs, sales managers and the like who are very...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 03:17 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,032
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

I think you should look at adding a walk-on spokesmodel
or, check this out, Welcome to Bubble Guru (http://bubbleguru.com)

A person's face looking out at you can be a real stopper.

Other...
Forum: Copywriting 12th February 2009, 03:12 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,032
Posted By Raydal
Re: Need some Experienced Advice!

You may find the advice given here helpful:

Internet Business Blog, Internet Marketing Advice Blog Archive Conversion secrets for 2009 revealed…...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2009, 01:48 PM
Replies: 63
Views: 4,294
Posted By ndcole78
Sales Letter Trick: 100% proven way to intrigue visitors to your site in less than 10 seconds

Ok, as you all know, I’m a copywriter, so I’ll go ahead and give you guys 1 of my little tricks that I use to increase conversions for clients—or you can do this for yourself if you’re a copywriter...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st January 2009, 11:19 AM
Replies: 185
Views: 9,250
Posted By Bakai
Re: An Open Letter To Allen & The Moderators

I do not, but after being forced to view certain threads (by admin) before the one I intended to view, It occurs to me that the recession may be prompting certain alterations.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st January 2009, 10:32 AM
Replies: 185
Views: 9,250
Posted By Steven Wagenheim
Re: An Open Letter To Allen & The Moderators

You know, there are so many ironies in this thread that I'm just sitting here
shaking my head at the whole thing.

For starters, while John makes very good points, the thread itself is still a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st January 2009, 04:56 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 668
Posted By Eric Lorence
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

You should probably add a disclaimer page and TOS.

In the personal training field, you are bound to have some that don't like the results, especially in weight loss.

The guarantee does not have...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st January 2009, 12:58 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 668
Posted By Nathan Denton
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

Guys,

Josh has a service based website providing information on his personal training services and an optin box to generate leads and appointments. To suit this purpose i think your site looks...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st January 2009, 12:10 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 668
Posted By Lance K
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

I don't know about your market and how your prospects think, but...

Would it work if you implemented a "and bring a friend" element to your free personal training session offer?

If people are...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st December 2008, 11:34 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 668
Posted By Clark
Re: We've almost made it, but we need your help!

Your USP is all over the place... literally, scattered all over the website.

Seems like you are marketing to the masses instead of tightly focussing on the wants/needs of a particular market...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 5th November 2008, 02:06 PM
Replies: 282
Views: 6,593
Posted By Steven Wagenheim
Re: Obama Won!

Right now, there are those who believe we're better off with Obama and
those who feel otherwise.

Ultimately, history will be its own judge.

Personally, I've seen enough of how bad things ARE...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 5th November 2008, 01:33 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 980
Posted By darrinmcl
Re: You've Got to Respect President Bush, He Did Something No Other Major Leader Has Ever Done...

Uh... Ok... I'll take the bait.
The Economy 101
It was Bill Clinton and the Dems who, 10 years ago, put pressure on Fannie Mae and Freddie Mac to issue higher risk loans to those who could not...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 5th November 2008, 10:33 AM
Replies: 48
Views: 980
Posted By pcalvert
Re: You've Got to Respect President Bush, He Did Something No Other Major Leader Has Ever Done...

Steve,

That statement shows that you have a serious lack of understanding of the many factors that affect the economy. Although President Bush contributed to current conditions, he is not the...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 5th November 2008, 06:17 AM
Replies: 282
Views: 6,593
Posted By Barry Davis
Re: Obama Won!

Why does everyone feel so free to tell me what I should think/do because I am a man of faith? Most men of faith oppose Obama because most men of faith are against aborting babies in the womb. I can't...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th October 2008, 12:01 PM
Replies: 285
Views: 43,696
Posted By Daniel Molano
Article Marketing 101 - Everything You Need To Know About Article Marketing In One Place!

Hello my friends and fellow warriors,

I reached 500 posts yesterday so I wanted to post something worthwhile and give back to the community.

Article Marketing is now more popular than ever,...
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2008, 06:17 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 817
Posted By zapseo
Re: Could anyone thrown me some headline suggestions?

And "free" would seem to work against "exclusivity"...

If it's "free" then anyone can get it...
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2008, 06:15 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 817
Posted By zapseo
Re: Could anyone thrown me some headline suggestions?

Us old codgers ALL want to look & feel younger -- especially feel younger.

Hmmm....definitely gives me some intereseting ideas, but I don't know enough about your situation.

oooohhh..... Got...
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2008, 06:09 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 817
Posted By zapseo
Re: Could anyone thrown me some headline suggestions?

makes sense...ANY personal service is, by it's nature, going to be "exclusive".

"Only 100 Women Have The Opportunity To Be Transformed In Just 12 Easy Weeks"

(weak, but the general idea...100...
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