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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th February 2012, 10:45 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 888
Posted By salegurus
Re: Can I Get this money back from a Warrior?

Colleen, we've all been duped at one time or another :D
Just remember even if the person joined the WF 10 years ago, has 10000 posts etc means nothing when it comes to trusting people you meet...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th February 2012, 08:36 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 1,819
Re: Seven... thousand? Srsly? WTF

This is one of the best posts I've ever read here on the WarriorForum, and I couldn't agree with you more.

If you think all your business does is market on the internet, then ooooh boy, you're in...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th January 2012, 04:21 PM
Replies: 173
Views: 5,470
Posted By MikeLantz
Re: WSO Sellers: Increase Your Conversions with this SIMPLE Tip

Good suggestion, EBR.

In fact, I like it so much, I just made it the default behavior on WarriorPlus for all links (including for affiliates).

While, as Will said, I am not sure if it will make...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th January 2012, 08:55 PM
Replies: 173
Views: 5,470
Posted By E. Brian Rose
WSO Sellers: Increase Your Conversions with this SIMPLE Tip

Simple Tip to Increase WSO Conversions

This is a very simple tip (almost too simple) that will increase conversions on your WSO sales pages.

Your eyes are trained to look for a headline at the...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 13th August 2011, 03:44 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,238
Posted By AustinDigital
Re: Google News Submitted, not heard back in 17 days - what would you do

We have tons of sites and businesses. This is purely one site whose sole purposes is google news (and the other news feeds as well). So please, don't act like this is our only revenue stream come out...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th August 2011, 06:04 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 734
Posted By tpw
Re: "Borrowing Traffic"

Article marketing will work if you approach it correctly.

If you create good quality content that large publishers believe gives value to their readers, then you can generate a butt-load of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th August 2011, 01:35 PM
Replies: 101
Views: 5,159
Posted By Bill Farnham
Re: CHECK OUT my Frozen Yogurt Biz Idea!

Needless to say, I like your idea. A friend of mine bought the original Stone Cold Creamery franchises in the NOVA area when they first became available. He opened the first one in January 2001 and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd February 2011, 07:57 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 378
Posted By IdeaLady
Re: What is the best way to setup a quick affiliate program for a "non ebook"?

I think e-junkie would do this. You can sign up for a free trial and test it.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th October 2010, 04:32 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,453
Posted By Michael Atma
Re: Looking to hire monetization consultant!

Have you thought about using a coach? There are some awesome warriors here who offer their services from time to time in the WSO section.

I'd look there and then do some research on them to make...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2010, 02:52 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By Ross Bowring
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

Izzy...

It's intervention time.

You posted a similar site a while back. And the consensus then, as now, is that you need the services of a pro copywriter. So bite that bullet and hire one. I...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2010, 02:41 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By Johnny Danes
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

Immediately, I clicked away.

Your sales page has "no life"......it doesn't pop at all.

No headings, nothing.

I cannot spend one minute trying to read it.

Also, if you assume selling is...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2010, 02:31 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By jukeboxhero
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

I like that...

Anyway take a look from the start... Keep in mind I'm kind of brash but I mean well... And by golly that's gotta count for something.

Headline

"Give me 30 minutes and I'll...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2010, 10:13 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By Mr. Subtle
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

Lots of Hasidic Jews in NYC and probably very few in your neck of the woods.

http://i26.tinypic.com/i589vl.jpg


Looking at the Amish in my neck of the woods the first time was a...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2010, 09:52 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By travlinguy
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

The copy is non-specific. It rambles and meanders all over the place. It needs focus. Get to the point, already. The picture is awful (no offense). Get a professionally done picture of you with a...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2010, 07:00 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By BOWarrior
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

This may sound trite, but I agree with all the previous responses. A lot of good feedback. Start with the major adjustments.
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2010, 05:59 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

Izzy,

Putting aside the writing... here's something to think about.

You're charging $179 per half hour. That's a lot of money, and something that only serious business owners will spend.

As...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2010, 05:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By David Maschke
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

I'll tell it to you like it is.

I have a question. I have ten questions. I have a hundred questions. Now write to me, and convince me, that you can answer them.

(hint: showing me your...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2010, 04:41 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By Scott Murdaugh
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

Izzy,

Not good.

First of all, the text hits you like a brick wall. I see you're breaking away from any headings whatsoever, and this is a good example of why we need to break text up.

It's...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2010, 04:31 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 973
Posted By Thomas Michal
Re: non slick non-selling salespage- please critique!

just one question why 30 minutes? that seems like a long commitment and might push people away, web users have short attention spans so if they think they need to sit around for a half hour they...
Forum: Copywriting 4th June 2010, 02:56 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 4,104
Posted By cjp231
Best Testimonials Page I've Seen

I don't know if this website is the best use of testimonials but is has to be darn close.

sportsbettingchampDOTcom

*I am in no way associated with this site and I don't suggest that you...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2010, 10:55 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,094
Posted By Paul Hooper-Kelly
Re: blunkin a foofin moozle? shoots!

Hi RevenueRabbi,

Great! You obviously understand the value of a curiosity” headline.

But your "real" headline doesn’t really hook the reader in.

Try …
Forum: Copywriting 12th March 2010, 09:05 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By ChrisChoiSEO
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

That salesletter is talking too much about yourself rather than focusing on the prospect. It doesn't engage the prospects needs and wants but goes straight into your credibility. Try engaging them...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 11:02 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

Your user name here is clever, easy to remember and spell. The .com version of it is already taken, but how about some other clever, fun play on words like salescommandments.com, incometablets.com,...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2010, 09:49 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 964
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Alright - My Turn to Ask for Review -

No need to download Firefox just use:

https://browsershots.org/

I understand fat loss is a health issue. It just seems to come out of the blue in your sales page, weight loss is normally its...
Forum: Copywriting 8th March 2010, 11:10 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By Harlan
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

But when you are the Revenue Rabbi, you can do anything - even write copy.

Hmmm. Where have I heard this suggestion before?

Izzy, hire a copywriter.

The guys here are being polite.

Not...
Forum: Copywriting 8th March 2010, 06:58 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By J. Barry Mandel
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

Rabbi,


You get an "A" for trying, but the headline and subheadline is a looser...

Even if your target market is orthodox/hasidic Jews the copy is way, way off.

Your page formatting also...
Forum: Copywriting 8th March 2010, 02:16 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

In a word - disastrous. Corny headline, confusing copy, lousy layout and if you're going to use a headshot at least have the good rabbi looking straight at us. Do yourself a favor and hire a decent...
Forum: Copywriting 8th March 2010, 02:08 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By Ross Bowring
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

First off, I'd lose the whole "third person" thing.

You need some empathy in this letter. Right now I don't see much, if any.

Weave the testimonials into the letter.

Show them you truly...
Forum: Copywriting 7th March 2010, 04:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: go and do your favorite thing!

Your headline doesn't make sense to me, I don't get the blood, magazine and success link. And there's no deck copy to expand on it and explain it. And, having read through the rest of it now, it...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th February 2010, 01:52 AM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By Dexx
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Wow AP, as always you are too much for words to even describe!

Thank you for the great resource links and the clarification on the service, as always you've made it a "no-brainer" and I will...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th February 2010, 06:39 AM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By Russ Reynolds
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Regarding CRM solutions...

Here's a great set-up if you are just starting out.

Use Mail Chimp (http://mailchimp.com) as your autoresponder to capture leads.

>It is a list management tool...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th February 2010, 06:33 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By AP
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

That's a very important statement Dexx.

For those that are learning this concept it's called "Reverse Engineering your Income."

Let's say you want to make $10,000 month or $120,000 year.
...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 05:30 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Scott Murdaugh
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

Man this place is getting harsh...

Criticizing the copy is one thing. But Izzy specifically said he gave a new guy a chance, it's not like there's no hope at all for this guy.

Ideas for...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 04:39 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Steven Wagenheim
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

You shouldn't fire your copywriter.

You should shoot him so he can't write for anybody else.
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 03:24 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Intrepreneur
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

I thought the top part was good but it should have been followed by some social evidence. Though I do truly believe this could be done a much better way than it is now i.e a blog that urges people to...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 01:00 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Oxbloom
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

The deeper I look, the more I don't see. I agree with the guy above who said the biggest glaring hole is that there's absolutely no benefit.

The only bit that intrigued me even a little bit was,...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 12:03 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Jesse Bass
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

The benefit to me would be that I could call myself “a published author.” The benefit to you would be free content. Altruism is appealing, but as a sales pitch, it’s not working for me.

This...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 11:20 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By simdog
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

You've already gotten a few comments basically saying you have a lot to work on.

Here's what I see...

What's In It For Me?

Forget super cool headlines and ninja persuasion skills. I don't...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 11:17 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Scott Ames
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

Here is Your Change To Be part of a Global Collaboration on a Scale Never Seen Before...

What does that mean?


FYI: I think you were trying to say "Chance" instead of "Change"
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2010, 10:34 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,328
Posted By Oxbloom
Re: Rip this sales letter apart- don't feel sorry for the writer!

I've seen it said many times, by many brilliant copywriters, that you want to join the conversation already going on in the prospect's head.

How many people do you think are sitting there...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 10:15 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By dremora
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Great post Dexx.I am actually working on my free report to send to a few prospects.

I picked up the phone and called some cosmetic surgeons in town today.
Guess what? Not even one was answered by...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 07:02 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By Dexx
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Send him a free report (printed off and placed in a nice folder addressed to him) that shows the massive financial damage to profits that a poor website can cause (not collecting leads, spending more...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 02:40 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By MADULALI
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Dexx,

Thanks. Point well said.

Once, I spent a week studying the operations of a company that was doing 3 million dollars in sales.

At the end of that time, I gave them some strategies...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 12:48 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By AP
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Funny when I read that. My first Free Report (9) pages has that statement and others page 1.

Probing questions are a MUST. Prospect needs to believe YOU really care about his succcess. All...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 12:02 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By AP
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Whatever I want it to. :)

In all seriousness, my research and development cost to Position my clients properly.

Detailed analysis of their site to give to their web guy. Researching their...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 12:02 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By sb
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Positioning yourself for credibility:

Quote authoritative sources. "It's an economic Pearl Harbor. The recession will be longer and deeper than most people think. This will not be short and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th January 2010, 11:42 AM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 164,946
Posted By AP
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

I can honestly tell you it has Shaved off years. It takes years of Trial & Error, paying gurus like Dan Kennedy, Perry Marshall, Jay Abraham, etc...to learn and implement this. Even if you read...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th December 2009, 08:50 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 685
Posted By Jesus Perez
Re: Membership site software- which one?

Nanacast is absolutely crushing it. Dripfed membership content, secure download links & movie streaming with AmazonS3, integration with Authorize.net/Powerpay for 1 Click Upsells. If you're looking...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th December 2009, 08:41 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 685
Posted By pjCheviot
Re: Membership site software- which one?

Don't know if you have already seen this "All In One"

http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/123228-all-one-all-about-membership-sites.html
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th December 2009, 07:27 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 685
Posted By Kim Standerline
Re: Membership site software- which one?

Definitely www.easymemberpro.com (http://www.easymemberpro.com) (And though I used to own it I don't now so no affiliate status)

Anthony the new owner has made some awesome changes to it and it's...
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2009, 03:55 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 3,460
Posted By Scott Murdaugh
My Interview With Craig Garber...

If you're into copywriting or marketing, it's definitely worth checking out what Craig has to say... He worked with Gary Halbert, he makes a TON of money selling his own products, and he's a great...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 5th October 2009, 05:57 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,969
Posted By George Wright
Re: Recommend a Paypal alternative that doesn't allow customers to cancel rebill on their own?

I agree, he has strong reason. He gave it.

He wants to be able to stand in the way of me being able to cancel. :) That's not a good thing.

There is nothing more frustrating in the CC buying...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 5th October 2009, 01:15 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,969
Posted By Chris Drinkwater
Re: Recommend a Paypal alternative that doesn't allow customers to cancel rebill on their own?

IMO you have to make it easy for your customers to cancel if they want to. I know it's a pain but its the best policy in the long run. You never know if they will sign up again or for another...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th September 2009, 09:09 PM
Replies: 175
Views: 40,070
Posted By Shannon Herod
Re: All-In-One: All About Membership Sites

When it comes to membership sites the first piece of acvice I give is... Keep It Simple!

We automatically try to muck everything up and make it over complicated. Focus on getting the site to...
Forum: Warrior Forum News 31st August 2009, 06:44 PM
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Views: 1,788,880
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th August 2009, 06:40 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,400
Posted By Harlan
Those *******s Emailing Me Every Day - Wait Wrong *******s

How dare they email me every day.

They don't even provide any content.

Day after day they try to sell me something.

It's freaken outrageous.

I have half a mind to tell off those people at...
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