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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st March 2014, 12:08 PM
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Posted By dunkinbbb
Re: Feedback on Commercial Please!

I'd ditch the "online registration"

Offer the discount for calling

Have her tell people to call now

Have the phone number along the bottom third the whole time

HTH,
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st March 2014, 11:53 AM
Replies: 12
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Posted By LXR
Re: Feedback on Commercial Please!

I should also mention that having looked at your "tinting service" contact form that you are asking people to pay up front for services.

In the past 30 yrs I have ran a commercial construction...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st March 2014, 11:39 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 522
Posted By LXR
Re: Feedback on Commercial Please!

I might mention how dirt and grease get tracked into the home causing damage to flooring. Not to mention how "dangerous " it is for others to slip and fall on your driveway because of the buildup of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st March 2014, 11:36 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 522
Posted By Sarah Operman
Re: Feedback on Commercial Please!

I found the woman you used in the voice over to have a whinny voice.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st March 2014, 11:31 AM
Replies: 12
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Posted By Tony M
Re: Feedback on Commercial Please!

I doubt it's the length. Is there a specific reason why your target market is women? I don't see women sitting on the couch and seeing this commercial after an episode of "Young & The Restless" and...
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