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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 04:46 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By Malcolm Thomas
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

Focus on the sales copy for the product you are promoting and finding out if it converts or not.

Then focus on testing and tweaking and keeping what is working and discarding what is not working.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 03:13 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By James Clark
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

That is not a benefit. What are the benefits of working with a trainer? I'm not in that niche but I can think of 15 right off the top of my head. I'm not going to do that.

Here are a couple...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 02:09 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By Derek Kosh
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

Yes... change the background image to some body sculpture models...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 08:22 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By muffty
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

Being a bit finicky - I'd change the wording on the Sign Up Form thus: -

Instead of saying ----- "without sweating!"

I'd say ---------- "No Sweat!" (Makes it a bit edgier, I think!)

As...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 03:22 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By ReferralCandy
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

Hey Wes,

I landed on your page, but didn't feel compelled to put my email down. I'd need more context. Who's this expert trainer? What authority do they have? Who's used this stuff before? Does it...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 01:10 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By fin
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

Listen to these: Email Marketing Podcast | Drop Dead Copy | Drop Dead Copy (http://www.dropdeadcopy.com/category/podcast/)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2013, 12:31 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,117
Posted By AlexanderBeloev
Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!

What traffic do you use? This is the key element of conversion. Imagine if your traffic is not interested in your topic. Or they are freebie seekers. The more targeted the traffic is, the more sales...
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 04:43 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By hhhusted
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

That's why I recommended a re-write. Maybe he'll go that route to help himself.
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 04:42 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By hhhusted
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

Hi Sue,

Nice to meet someone from "Aussieland." How's it there? I have a friend that lives in your area. I do work for him once in a while.

Anyway, I looked at the e-book again, and am...
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 04:23 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By laurencewins
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

Exactly my point. I am also a ghost writer/proofreader and that is why I pointed out those aspects. Your book doesn't give anybody confidence in you at all, sad to say.
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 04:22 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By Sue McDonald
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

I had a look at the ebook and I found the whole set up very ugly. I got as far as the testimonials and found far too many that it started to look spammy.
In my opinion this book needs a rewrite...
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 04:20 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By hhhusted
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

I concur. I actually took a minute or two to skim through the e-book. I noticed a number of errors. The formatting is wrong, etc.

The best way to get this book shaped up to sell, is to have a...
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 04:10 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By laurencewins
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

I find the photo very off putting to begin with and then the numerous errors throughout. Your book is very vague which is why you're not getting sales.
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 03:57 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By hhhusted
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

I'm not sure what you are asking either. Your use of English makes it hard to comprehend what you are saying.

By the way, I do write for the fitness and weight loss industry.
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2012, 03:19 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By Onyemere
Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

Hey I am a professional weight loss and fitness writer. I am working in this industry for 5 years. If you want to know more about me you could post a question.
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2012, 06:57 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By Corey Geer
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

Did you make that header banner in Geocities?

Well, I actually did read through a couple of pages. Did you write this yourself? It's pretty hard to read and it's not something you want to...
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2012, 03:02 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

It's a PDF eBook not a piece of sales copy.

We don't provide free critiques for eBooks here in the Copywriting Forum.


Mark Andrews
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2012, 01:33 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

How many times do we have to put up with you spamming this forum with constant links to your product?

What is this, the 5th time now in as many weeks?


Mark Andrews
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2012, 01:07 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By Dan Curtis
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you are asking.



What is your product?

What do you mean when you say it is "working very well online"?

What exactly are you trying to sell, and...
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2012, 12:54 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,182
Posted By angiecolee
Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers

Are you actually asking a specialist copywriter to help you create a sales funnel free of charge? That's a way different thing to ask for than a critique.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th December 2012, 08:30 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,715
Posted By bluecoyotemedia
Re: 10,000/Month starting from 2013?

Please don't take this the wrong way. but your a little bit delusional in thinking people that work their ass off are just going to take you by the hand and spoon feed you success.

I often wonder...
Forum: Copywriting 10th December 2012, 05:32 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Squeeze Page Code - Here's Your Push-Button Easy Money Secret! (http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/332422-heres-your-push-button-easy-money-secret.html)

Download...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 04:33 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By nawshale
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

hi wes. your site is good. you dont need a sales page. all you have to do since you have your squeeze page now is to build your list as fast as you could. :)

good luck wes!
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2012, 09:35 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 592
Posted By copyassassin
Re: My First Copywrite! Need Help

Change title to:

Burn that "grandma bathing suit" and slip into a sexy binkini. Ann reveals her story inside...


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Use your features and weave them into a story...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2012, 12:31 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 592
Posted By Shazadi
Re: My First Copywrite! Need Help

Wes, to be blunt, people have heard this all before. Oh, blah blah, full access, burn fat, track progress. I don't care how much it is because I'm not buying it whether it's $1 or $1,000.

You're...
Forum: Website Design 28th November 2012, 12:03 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 646
Posted By nawshale
Re: Review my site WF Friends

Hi there! I think your site's layout is okay. . however by the way I noticed there are quite many white spaces especially on the bottom part.

also, 24Hr may consider changing to 24 Hour :)
and...
Forum: Website Design 27th November 2012, 10:34 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 646
Posted By Anthony Fesalbon
Re: Review my site WF Friends

You have a very beautiful website Wesley. Nice color scheme and combination.

Some suggestions...
1. Add more social media buttons (twitter & pinterest) for more exposure.
2. Make the teaser...
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2012, 03:00 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By misterme
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

The first thing I see is the price. Nice and big. $47.

Do I see what's in it for me, nice and big? Nope.
Any reason to go further? Nope.
Forum: Copywriting 27th November 2012, 08:22 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By max5ty
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Couple quick thoughts about your site.

1. What's up with you holding the basketball? My first thought was it may be the idea behind your exercise program.

2. I didn't get any clear USP. ...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 08:02 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Well, it's a legitimate source of calorie burning, right? I'm sure someone out there has a program built around that concept...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 04:34 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By angiecolee
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Am I the only one who took this in the completely wrong context? Especially considering the site address?
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 12:02 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Hey Wesley,

First, check out Kyle Leon, I work with him and he gets freakin' amazing results with this niche.

Second, what kind of mentor are you looking for? Cause if you can help me get...
Forum: Copywriting 26th November 2012, 08:36 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By eugenedm
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

I would first get a copywriter. Tell him your best techniques or the benefits you can provide to your customer. I'm sure he can push a few psychological buttons and make it convert for you better.
...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 09:12 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Hey 7day. To follow-up, here's my take on your video-focused theme page.

There are a couple big issues that are going to keep it from performing well.

First, your messaging is off. Making...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 08:54 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By JRVogt
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

The overall layout works fine. Easy visual appeal and all, but instead of seeing a "holy cow, gotta learn more about this" hook or title of any sort, my eye is immediately drawn to $47 for Lifetime...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 08:39 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By 7day
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Thanks!

Ok that what I was thinking so I created this squeeze page.. www.hellonabs.com (http://www.hellonabs.com)

Your thoughts?
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 08:22 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

No. It's a clean page but guess what? I have no idea what you're selling. Lifetime access maybe gives me a clue but people don't buy on clues. You need to explain exactly what you've got.

Maybe...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 08:01 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By Irvan Mhd
Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Hi, nice website. I suggest you to get a squeeze page to start build your list.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2012, 07:48 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,498
Posted By 7day
Lightbulb Do I need a sales page? Mentor???

Hi there,

Here is my landing page for my fitness service. www.wesleyvirgin.com (http://www.wesleyvirgin.com)

Is this enough to convert someone to buy?

What do you think of my home workout...
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