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Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2009, 02:58 AM
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Posted By gareth
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2009, 02:44 AM
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Posted By maximus242
Re: Sales Copy Review For My Product - Please - All Help Appreciated!

Your sales copy is just bad. Its all about you, your product, who you are, your company, why your doing this. What about the prospect!!!!

Okay first off, if I dont know much about the internet or...
Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2009, 03:59 PM
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Views: 636
Posted By BrianMcLeod
Re: Sales Copy Review For My Product - Please - All Help Appreciated!

The header doesn't help you much here so I would test without it.

I'm not suggesting this as a headline (it's really not very good), but rather as a quick example of a different TYPE of headline...
Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2009, 03:13 PM
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Posted By Collette
Re: Sales Copy Review For My Product - Please - All Help Appreciated!

It's not rubbish. But it is rather dull.

The page design looks like something I've seen many times before (maybe the header?), and the copy just doesn't make much of a promise.

What's the...
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