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Forum: Email Marketing 3rd March 2017, 02:48 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 277
Posted By quadagon
Re: 1500 subscribers, 0 sales...

I'm going to assume that the books on Amazon authored by Raza Imam are your books. If so you have a massive disconnect between your books and your offer.

Look at the book titles and ask yourself...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 9th November 2015, 12:12 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 644
Posted By yukon
Re: How Can I Tell If My Site Is Damaged (and should I quit SEO)?

You have 2 versions of the Home page (http + https), the https is the problem page (owned) on the site: search.

Reindex the page to update the SERP title/description, there's also no Google cache.
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2015, 02:36 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By RickDuris
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

I recently did a fitness offer. 8% conversion to her list. 3% to FB traffic.

There was nothing new in the offer. No testimonials. No befores and afters.

Just glam shots of her and the power of...
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2015, 08:30 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By leilani
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

I admire you. You have done a lot of work that I am only now aspiring to learn and do.

And I like your tenacity to not give up, too!

I am not able to offer any advice except to offer moral...
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2015, 08:02 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By Brock Poling
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

I've done a fair amount of work in this space (online fitness coaching / info products) and I generally agree with most of the feedback you've got.

- No main hook
- Heard it all before
-...
Forum: Copywriting 20th August 2015, 03:18 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By Tim R
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

What's the big idea of your sales message? The thing that sets you apart from everyone else?

I scanned through the copy and couldn't find it. It seems the 3 secrets you have are:

1)Compound...
Forum: Copywriting 20th August 2015, 02:57 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By The Cypher
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

Price may be a bit high, but you can honestly sell air for more online so...

I read through your entire sales page copy and I can tell you two big takeaways:

1. Your 'Pre-Sell' pages don't...
Forum: Copywriting 20th August 2015, 12:55 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By ReneMadmanGlasow
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

Just scanned your copy. To me the headline is a little too long. I would stop after "...and energy systems" and put the following into a sub headline.

Then in the first line of copy, you are...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2015, 06:22 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By Kevin Strong
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

I didn't look too far into it but I think your headline could use some work.

I actually like the title of your book and think that could work better.

Also, are you tracking clicks to the order...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2015, 12:45 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By ajwalton99
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

450 clicks isn't nearly enough.

Also your sales letter needs work, it's
not terrible, but what you have to realize
is there are 1000's of fitness programs on
the net.

And your letter looks...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2015, 11:25 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By colmodwyer
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

When you say 450 clicks... if you're talking ad clicks, then you might have 100 promo views from that?

Thus, your data can hardly be conclusive.

That said, the copy generally seems pretty...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2015, 11:01 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By Raydal
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

You are in a very competitive market with some big hitters. I found
your quiz a little too personal. The first question asks me what I'm
struggling with. I would be hesitant to admit the answer...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2015, 10:55 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,481
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: 450 Clicks, 0 Sales - What Gives? (and I think my funnel is pretty good)

So, you were hoping for sales to be climbing steadily into double figures? (in a hyper competitive marketplace you may need a dramatic increase in clicks).

But understandably you want an...
Forum: Programming 29th June 2015, 12:23 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,769
Posted By ClicProject
Re: Why Am I Getting a 500 Internal Server Error

The first place to look when you get an error is the error log, it will tell you what is causing the error. I would look there first before going something drastic like reinstalling your site. If...
Forum: Programming 29th June 2015, 11:07 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,769
Posted By mhowe91
Re: Why Am I Getting a 500 Internal Server Error

It is an issue with your .htaccess file. If you are using wordpress, a quick solution to this would be to delete the current .htaccess file, then from the wordpress dashboard go to Settings >...
Forum: Programming 27th June 2015, 05:35 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,769
Posted By tzman
Re: Why Am I Getting a 500 Internal Server Error

Check if there is another .htaccess into Thrive Content Builder files and post its content here
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th June 2015, 10:50 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 513
Posted By Tom Addams
Re: Authority Blog or Squeeze Page Business Model?

In this market? I wouldn't recommend an authority blog. You'll never compete.

1. Squeeze.
2. Public blog on the back end.
3. Subscriber blog.

Feed content from both blogs to your list. ...
Forum: Copywriting 18th February 2015, 09:07 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,418
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Is This Salespage Good Enough for Cold Traffic?

People have paid $1,000 plus to listen to Ryan Deiss, Perry Belcher
speak at Traffic And Conversion Summit.

One of the 3 big trends in the keynote speech was splintering product
offers.

Which...
Forum: Copywriting 18th February 2015, 08:58 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,418
Posted By savidge4
Re: Is This Salespage Good Enough for Cold Traffic?

I agree with Ewen. I am not even going to say "In this case" because more often than not I always agree with him.

Cut the lead time in, and offer one of those "bonus" reports to get them buying,...
Forum: Copywriting 17th February 2015, 02:34 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,418
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Is This Salespage Good Enough for Cold Traffic?

Raza, the sales page looks good enough.

Since it's cold traffic and they don't know you
can't trust you yet, here's how you can make cold traffic work...

Break-out part of your core training...
Forum: Copywriting 1st February 2015, 05:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,156
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Please critique my sales page

Exactly.

I never expanded on what to do with cold traffic,
however I still believe his best investment in time
and money is getting the most out of everybody
on his list while growing it.
...
Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM) 22nd November 2014, 11:50 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,059
Posted By solarwarrior
Re: Terrible Results Using Bing Ads

Say ShoeNickel,

Did you even bothered to take a look around this section?

If none of it converts, it is your problem, not mine or warriorforum.

8% is not amazing, it is mediocre....
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 15th July 2014, 02:25 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 867
Posted By Tim R
Re: What Can I Improve On My Sales Page?

Who is your target customer? It feels too broad and you're not speaking to anyone specifically. If you're going after guys that already working out 5-6 hours a week, good luck. You look really skinny...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2014, 12:22 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,274
Posted By copyassassin
How to quickly and easily nail your hook, message, and offer in an afternoon.

If you want to "hit the easy button" on creating a winning campaign consider this guru method. I call it the "tyd76" method (for why I do, pm me)

Before saying how to do this method, I need to...
Forum: Copywriting 5th May 2014, 09:26 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,368
Posted By XponentSYS
Easy Steps to Writing Sales Copy That CONVERTS

Here is an easy to follow outline to help you write sales copy that converts.


STEP ONE: Develope your avatar. That is, define who you're writing to.

STEP TWO: Write a short story about how...
Forum: Copywriting 24th April 2014, 05:55 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,714
Posted By Marketing Strategist
Re: Busting My Chops to Convert Cold Traffic...

I'm fairly new to online marketing as well, but I have a suggestion. Try thinking of the traffic you're getting to your sites as people, first. Rather than trying to convert traffic into sales, try...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd April 2014, 05:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 547
Posted By Alessandro Zamboni
Re: Is It Worth It To Offer a Product on Clickbank?

Hi Raza, Clickbank is definitely a good affiliate market to aim for high ticket product launches, and if you are good enough you can make many sales. I used it for only two launches, and they all...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd April 2014, 04:25 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 547
Posted By James 0
Re: Is It Worth It To Offer a Product on Clickbank?

Hi, if you think your Clickbank product will convert well, then do it. You will receive many affiliates which will bring you more money than what it costed.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd April 2014, 04:24 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 547
Posted By Steve King
Re: Is It Worth It To Offer a Product on Clickbank?

Hi Raza
I was both a vendor & an affiliate on CB for around three years but found it a bit frustrating to
1) get my products approved
2) pay a separate listing fee for each product that I wanted...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2014, 01:06 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,714
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: Busting My Chops to Convert Cold Traffic...

Yes, yes, yes.

I've worked with four people who make ridiculous money online in this niche. Every one of them is either losing or breaking even on the front end.

This is a niche where you...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2014, 07:09 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,714
Posted By davemiz
Re: Busting My Chops to Convert Cold Traffic...

hate to break the news to ya... if you dont have a backend, you're not going to be doing ppc for too long...

you wont be able to spend enough $$ for the traffic and customers.

you have no...
Forum: Copywriting 8th January 2014, 12:42 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,768
Posted By yukon
Re: My Opt In Rate Sucks, Pls Critique My squeeze Page

Why would anyone believe IM sales hype over their doctor?
Why do you have a single squeeze page instead of split testing?
Why is the optin form below the fold?
Why do you need a name on the...
Forum: Copywriting 15th December 2013, 01:49 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,839
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

In this case, quoting any period of time in any format is counter productive.

If the OP can't promise instant results, touching an emotion is better.

"Impress the other guys on your team" is...
Forum: Copywriting 15th December 2013, 03:58 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,839
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

Maks, putting a time frame on the wanted outcome
can lead to problems.

There's the believability if too short a time.

If too long, it kills desire.

A way around it is by saying X times...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2013, 02:36 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,839
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Go From Nothing To Dunking In 12 Weeks!

Maks, now you will get the biggest gains
from creating a whole funnel.

Here's a brief overview how it will look like.

The reader gets a free offer in exchange for his email.

On the thank...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th November 2013, 05:59 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 2,999
Posted By shujew95
Personal Opinion : Solo Ads SUCKS - Let me tell you how I built my List

First let me clear a misunderstanding before you read my post. According to me, solo ads are very effective but are very over-priced.

To start off, I bought solo ads from about 10 "good" providers...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th October 2013, 02:09 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 439
Posted By mrgoe
Re: Does Email Marketing REALLY Work?

what I`d advise you to do is place the ones that buy into another list. That will be your buyers list, the ones that are able to shop online. Most of the people browsing the internet are simply...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2013, 02:54 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 991
Posted By ewenmack
Re: I'm Angry. I'm Stubborn. And I Hate "Free" Traffic

Raza, to get closer to your holy grail,
test these buyer trigger points...

2 things he hates
2 things he loves
1 thing that he has never found the answer to
Emphasis on moving away from a hate...
Forum: Copywriting 18th September 2013, 07:39 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 991
Posted By cjp214
Re: I'm Angry. I'm Stubborn. And I Hate "Free" Traffic

Still learning about this myself, but two particularly good resources that stand out are the blog "ConversionXL" and "Unbounce."

Lots of well-researched, actionable articles you can implement...
Forum: Copywriting 17th September 2013, 08:57 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,663
Posted By ewenmack
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

"Turns Short White Boyz Into Slam Dunkers...If You've Got 15 Minutes A Day"

Added what fhe reader has to do to get it
to add believability.

Best,
Ewen
Forum: Copywriting 16th September 2013, 02:22 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,663
Posted By d3communications
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

Does the crossed out $47 and the not-crossed-out $17 price imply that there's a $30 discount? If you haven't sold the product for $47 in the past, then you may run afoul of FTC rules:

FTC GUIDES...
Forum: Copywriting 16th September 2013, 01:59 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,663
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

Check out Jacob Hiller's site, it was doing 1 million a year a few years ago and probably a lot more than that now.

Mark featured him in "Get Rich Click"... but again,smart dude in this niche.
...
Forum: Copywriting 15th September 2013, 05:09 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,663
Posted By ewenmack
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

Maks, the headline and opening is very weak.

It seems to me the big benefit hasn't been nailed yet.

I suggest testing benefit themes first to see which
is the biggest hot button to your...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2013, 01:17 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,663
Posted By davemiz
Re: ANYONE Can Dunk A Basketball! Please critique my sales page

sales page sucks.

the video was interesting.

dig the product idea.

the angle is interesting.... combining training...

i'd work on that sales letter/offer page.
Forum: Copywriting 12th September 2013, 11:31 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,265
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: Best Salesletter I've Ever Read...

Ummm.... in all fairness, coming on this board with 4 posts and shitting all over the work of a guy who makes millions with Turbulence training... I don't see the logic?

As with copywriting......
Forum: Copywriting 12th September 2013, 06:35 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,265
Posted By Ross Bowring
Re: Best Salesletter I've Ever Read...

Yeah, I'm being diplomatic. Proudly so, 100%.

I don't know how it's performing. You don't either. Is the best way to judge its potency to test and assess the results? Or is the best way to judge...
Forum: Copywriting 11th September 2013, 11:42 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,265
Posted By Rod Cortez
Re: Best Salesletter I've Ever Read...

Love the headline! (As i bite into a triple-patty cheeseburger, with grilled onions and triple the cheese!).

RoD
Forum: Copywriting 11th September 2013, 01:44 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,265
Posted By Cool Hand Luke
Re: Best Salesletter I've Ever Read...

Good eye Raza, I noticed the new copy for T.T. yesterday too and it's solid. Considering it more than doubled the product's gravity within a matter of days, it's got to be doing pretty well for them.
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2013, 11:53 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,506
Posted By Sean Fry
Re: Is Copy for Cold Traffic Different Than Warm Traffic?

This is the essence of everything written about, slaved over and discussed to death about in copyrighting. With the exception of copy done for product launches (and some affiliate traffic), nobody...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2013, 11:28 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,506
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Is Copy for Cold Traffic Different Than Warm Traffic?

If they didn't know they have a problem in the first place,
then you make it more an impulse buy
which requires very little decision making.

Going that route can be a costly learning experience....
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2013, 10:46 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,506
Posted By Steve Hill
Re: Is Copy for Cold Traffic Different Than Warm Traffic?

If you haven't read Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz, you'll find it useful for the type of questions you're asking.

In addition to the warm/cold question, sophistication of the...
Forum: Copywriting 10th September 2013, 08:12 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,506
Posted By BrianMcLeod
Re: Is Copy for Cold Traffic Different Than Warm Traffic?

Cold traffic requires you to capture attention, warm traffic already has it to lose.

Cold traffic needs qualification, warm traffic is presumably the result of it.

Cold traffic is like tumbling...
Forum: Copywriting 7th September 2013, 07:15 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,286
Posted By RichBeck
Lightbulb Re: Does Just Being Helpful Sell?

rimam,

In my experience, "being helpful" by giving away "solutions" doesn't help you sell your own products... It trains people to expect "solutions"... for free.

As Make Money Ninja stated,...
Forum: Copywriting 6th September 2013, 01:51 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,286
Posted By Steve Hill
Re: Does Just Being Helpful Sell?

That's one approach, and as Andrew said, you'll attract tire-kickers and free-loaders who not only won't buy, but will complain about you even trying to sell to them.

But another approach is to...
Forum: Copywriting 6th September 2013, 12:05 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,286
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: Does Just Being Helpful Sell?

Thanks to social media the good people expect the interweb and all that is in it...

To be FREE.

Ok, they "get" that they do have to buy at amazon and the big sites.

But everything else...
Forum: Copywriting 6th September 2013, 10:03 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,286
Posted By Clix
Re: Does Just Being Helpful Sell?

It all depends on the traffic source really. I find you'll have better luck with flashy pressure type copy with paid traffic and better luck with quality, low pressure copy with organic traffic.
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