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Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 07:11 PM
Replies: 15
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Posted By KevinW
Re: Help With Landing Page

I don't like that Chat With Us popup coming up immediately. I can't even read the header and that thing is there. Delay the pop up more.
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 04:15 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 962
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Help With Landing Page

Horror-show. Too much going on. My eyes were bugging out. This page needs to be a lot cleaner than this. All it needs is a short paragraph of copy in the middle of the page (above the fold) and an...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 03:33 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 962
Posted By Bruce Wedding
Re: Help With Landing Page

1. I was confused the instant I landed. What am I supposed to read? My eyes were bouncing all over the page. I should see a headline when I land. Remember this rule: When you emphasize everything,...
Forum: Copywriting 9th March 2012, 11:00 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 962
Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: Help With Landing Page

This is better in layout and content than many attempts that appear on this forum.

I'd change the "Easy on the Pockets" to "Easy on the Pocketbook"...unless people actually say "Pockets" where...
Forum: Copywriting 9th March 2012, 01:21 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 962
Posted By JerryKuzma
Re: Help With Landing Page

I agree that the landing page is good, in that it is clear, informative and clean.

The one BIG thing that needs changed is the design of the first four items.....if you move these into different...
Forum: Copywriting 9th March 2012, 08:54 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 962
Posted By angiecolee
Re: Help With Landing Page

It's clean and neat looking, which is already leagues ahead of a lot of other landing pages out there. The title is a bit wordy for my tastes, but I prefer short, snappy language to the typical sales...
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