Forum: Copywriting
2nd January 2016, 08:42 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
17th November 2015, 12:29 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
14th November 2015, 09:19 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
14th October 2015, 05:28 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
15th September 2015, 03:41 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,807 Re: Donald Trump Surge Thanks To Copywriting?
If you enjoy listening to Donald Trump (political views aside) then you would love the book "Words That Work" by Frank Luntz.
Great read for anyone interested in the power of individual words,...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th August 2015, 01:25 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
15th August 2015, 06:28 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,837 Re: I wonder....
When I first looked at your idea, I had to step back a little bit.
Why hasn't anyone thought of this before?
I think it has something to do with two things that Jay Abraham, Dan Pena, and all...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd August 2015, 08:38 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 2,139 |
Forum: Copywriting
18th July 2015, 08:03 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 2,262 Re: My Sales Page
I admire your persistence and how quickly you try to use the advice here.
That being said, I think you need to re-do the whole page... IF there is even a market for this, like sir copy nazi said....
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Forum: Copywriting
15th July 2015, 03:59 PM
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Replies: 30
Views: 2,262 Re: My Sales Page
I'm curious...
Is this a book on fixing an already made cake? Or on "How To Bake The Perfect Cake"?
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Forum: Copywriting
20th June 2015, 07:37 PM
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Replies: 86
Views: 6,071 Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?
The more I think about WHY someone would want to get rid of ALL mosquitos versus using other, cheaper do it yourself methods, the more I want to change my answer to #4.
Postcard 4 gave a new,...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th June 2015, 06:36 PM
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Replies: 86
Views: 6,071 Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?
What's on my mind is if #4 did do the best, did it also do the best in terms of people calling for another treatment?
Considering it created a need that seems to be short-term and in the...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th June 2015, 05:16 PM
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Replies: 86
Views: 6,071 Re: 4 postcards mailed, which was the winner?
I would say #1 for a couple of reasons...
1. The company contact information on the top right is really easy to spot, and makes it possible to reply right when convinced and not hunt for the...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th April 2015, 02:07 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
14th April 2015, 01:58 PM
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Views: 1,613 Re: Beginners email your views please
He does offer the solution after the question. Is it clear enough? I believe so.
Free and no obligation aren't the same thing. You can pay for something with no obligation i.e. no contract....
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Forum: Copywriting
27th March 2015, 07:56 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,899 Re: My First Sales Letter - Does it Pass?
Looking past the great points Ewen and Angie made...
A big hole in the actual copy is the headline sets up a "retired widow" story yet there's nothing about her mentioned in the body.
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Forum: Copywriting
18th March 2015, 11:08 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 1,904 Re: Question To All Copywriting Warriors!!
You should take a look at Gary Halbert's 30 day guide to becoming a copywriter.
You can find it here. (http://www.thegaryhalbertletter.com/newsletters/zfkj_hands_on_experience.htm)
P.S. The...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th March 2015, 08:00 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,242 Re: Psychology/sales books on words?
If you're looking for getting the most impact out of your writing, The Elements of Style by William Strunk and On Writing Well by William Zinsser are great reads.
As for persuasion, I recommend...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd February 2015, 01:42 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,789 Re: Brutalize my landing page
Here's a couple things I believe will help you:
You're focusing too much on "I". I will do this. I can do that. I'm different than this. You can easily switch these sentences into what they will...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th February 2015, 01:08 PM
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Views: 1,189 |
Forum: Copywriting
30th January 2015, 10:21 PM
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Views: 2,737 |
Forum: Copywriting
30th June 2014, 08:53 AM
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Replies: 33
Views: 2,275 Re: Copyediting Tips Please
Some great advice here, I'll add a little something I learned from Gary Halbert:
People overuse "that"... go through, find "that's", delete them, and rephrase the sentence. It flows better.
And...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th June 2014, 07:28 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,674 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th June 2014, 08:52 PM
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Replies: 61
Views: 3,565 |
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization
16th June 2014, 08:03 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 3,278 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
7th June 2014, 04:49 PM
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Replies: 94
Views: 4,375 Re: what a waste of time
I'm not a war room member (though I'm debating it) and I'm not an expert in anything internet marketing, yet.
That being said, I have found this forum invaluable.
There's great information if...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th May 2014, 11:07 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 669 Re: High Traffic Low Conversion Help Needed
The vocabulary is way too high for this type of market.
The headlines don't cut it. A lot of people skim the copy, looking for interesting headlines and ready the copy under it. For example anyone...
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