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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th December 2009, 06:47 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 536
Posted By Jared Alberghini
Re: Anyone know of Online Convention/Summit Events Database?

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th December 2009, 06:42 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 536
Posted By HeySal
Re: Anyone know of Online Convention/Summit Events Database?

How bout this one? Direct Marketing Training, Conference, Trade Show, Education, Seminars, Webinars, Convention, Meetings, Association Events (http://www.directmarketingevents.com/)

Know how I...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd November 2009, 07:04 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By ghyphena
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

I like these titles, especially the first two. Gary Bencivenga suggests in his material that you incorporate a benefit into the product name itself... so easy, simple etc. coupled with "Debt...
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2009, 05:40 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By J. Barry Mandel
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

It seems like you got some really good advice and I did not go through all of the posts (and perhaps this was mentioned) but maybe you should research and see if the "For Idiots". Phrase is a...
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2009, 05:07 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By Susan Stones
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

I haven't had time to read the text fully, and since others have done that already I won't at this stage.

Visually not much stands out to me. The header and next lines are OK, but from the About...
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2009, 04:28 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By David Babineau
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

Hi Craig,

A lot of great points have been made already, especially by Gil-Ad.

Again, you have way, way too much highlighting!

Besides that, a few minor things...

- The first quotation...
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2009, 10:25 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By 1960Texan
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

Read Gil-Ad's post again, it's like a free college course in sales copy.
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 09:18 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By Mtkent
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

The 1st thing I noticed is there seems to be 2 different fonts used. it seems to change right after "You could pay thousands of dollars" Im not sure what font you used in the letter prior to that but...
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 03:45 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By Ronak Shah
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

Well, I'd rather target folks who would be always ready to buy a product like your's rather than target those who would keep researching on whether they must buy your product.

I have worked for JP...
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 03:18 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By Ronak Shah
Arrow Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

Yes, I do. Certainly.

It's about self-esteem. I think you must get a great domain name that people feel attracted to.

Have a domain name that explains what you offer distinctively. It's an...
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 01:55 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By lionpuncher
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

I have nothing constructive to add but found ghyphena's critique extremely helpful.
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 07:16 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By ghyphena
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

Hi Craig,

There are a couple of issues here, some cosmetic and some more related to the copy itself.

I'll start with the cosmetic and strategy-related ones:

1. Like edmltw said, why did you...
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 07:14 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By Alphonso Jones
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

I see a whole lot of question marks in diamonds. I don't know what that means, but that will definitely steal a bit of your credibility in the eyes of your customers.

js
Forum: Copywriting 31st October 2009, 05:45 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 814
Posted By edmltw
Re: Please Critique My Sales Page

Why did you highlight everything? It hurts my eyes, and hence it will hurt others too.

There seem to be a problem somewhere.. I can't really locate it with my present level of copy writing..
...
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