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Forum: Copywriting 13th December 2017, 08:27 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 391
Posted By AnneE
Re: Looking for feedback

There are a couple problems with "I beat the crap out of unemployment" -- The first problem is: I didn't. I didn't beat the crap out of unemployment, so I can't be convincing and secondly...
Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2017, 08:17 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 391
Posted By AnneE
Re: Looking for feedback

A GIANT THANK YOU to all who gave me feedback here and a few who commented in the other thread or sent me a private message. I am cutting and pasting the best of the advice, to have it all together,...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2017, 04:33 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 281
Posted By AnneE
Re: Quick Question on Getting Copywriting Feedback

Marcia, I do appreciate the advice I've received. I'm not sure if you meant that I hadn't commented on my other thread. I was offline for a few days there for surgery. Perhaps my timing of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 5th March 2014, 12:36 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 562
Posted By AnneE
Re: Advice Please - Would You Pay $1 For A Proven Site That Makes Money ?

You say in your post would people pay a buck a day, but your title just asks would you pay $1 for a site that earns money. You need to clarify first that you are asking people to pay a buck A DAY...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th February 2014, 12:23 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 649
Posted By AnneE
Re: Which of these names is best for my business?

I liked Media. It sounds trendier and more modern. Just my two cents.
Forum: Offline Marketing 15th August 2013, 01:34 PM
Replies: 102
Views: 4,777
Posted By AnneE
Re: I'm unemployed. I have the time now... Need advice

Mark, I'm in a similar situation. I'm not unemployed YET, but soon will be and I have 6 months instead of 2, but really I only have about 2 months to try and prove I can earn money independently. ...
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2013, 04:07 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,107
Posted By AnneE
Re: My Website Gift For Wife - Copy Advice - Thanks In Advance

A couple thoughts:

1) Google 'cleaning service' any_city -- and look at the results that are smaller businesses, see if there are any phrases or visuals on those other websites that would appeal...
Forum: Mind Warriors 14th August 2013, 03:29 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,305
Posted By AnneE
Re: How do you live your life? Create your own life quote!

Ha ha, made me smile with that one.

I often think, "Cast yourself as a hero, rather than a victim. Heroes have much more fun!"
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th July 2013, 04:35 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 5,105
Posted By AnneE
Re: What can I do to sell more children's books?

I thought I would chime in, since I do write children's books. I have six Kindle children's books. The sales of each range from just one or two per month up to Dogs, dogs, Dogs eBook...
Forum: Mind Warriors 26th July 2013, 06:57 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 945
Posted By AnneE
Re: How To Stop Reading/Collecting So Many Self-Help Books, And Start Using Them

I had a problem with your video link, but managed to edit it to go to:

Tony Robbins, Frank Kern and John Reese on the Most Important Skill of Achievers. - YouTube

which did make me think about...
Forum: Mind Warriors 24th March 2013, 05:20 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 817
Posted By AnneE
Re: Music Inspires Me

I listen to music the most when I need to change my mood, either because I'm discouraged by a lack of success or because I've just had a really negative interaction with someone. Sometimes I'll...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd March 2013, 10:47 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 2,772
Posted By AnneE
Re: WARNING: The Kindle Magic Bullet...

I would agree that Kindle as a money-making platform is over-hyped, just like most "make money online" options are overhyped. Yes, you can make money with Kindle and I think the percent of people...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 17th January 2013, 05:40 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 916
Posted By AnneE
Re: Outsourcing Taken To Extremes - lol

I'm a programmer and a few of us have joked about doing this. The part that wouldn't work at our jobs is there is a fair amount of communication required -- attending meetings, documenting what you...
Forum: Mind Warriors 4th January 2013, 12:14 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 459
Posted By AnneE
Re: 365 New Beginnings in 2013

Just your title made me smile. I'm glad, because today has not been so great for me, thanks for the reminder that tomorrow is a new beginning.
Forum: Copywriting 28th August 2012, 11:15 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 597
Posted By AnneE
Re: I just completed my first paid gig... here's the result

I must confess, I wasn't sure is a "Mortgage Buyer's Handbook" geared for the person buying a house and trying to get a mortgage? Or is it for a financial dude who wants to buy existing mortgages...
Forum: Mind Warriors 5th March 2012, 11:53 AM
Replies: 3,690
Views: 126,210
Posted By AnneE
Re: Inspirational Quotes ... Post Yours!

It's funny, this got posted over 2 years ago, but I chuckled about it today. I'd never heard it before.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st January 2012, 05:39 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,335
Posted By AnneE
Re: URL shorteners - Is one any better than the other?

Shucks.... you guys just gave me one more to-do. Actually 2 more to-do's, decide what domain name is both short and i'll have around forever and put a script out there.

Sigh....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th January 2012, 06:43 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,177
Posted By AnneE
Re: question about Squidoo lenses

Alexa -- I definitely agree, all things being equal, I'd rather be getting traffic on websites that I own. But my experience has been that all things are not equal, that just a little amount of...
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2011, 05:51 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 4,803
Posted By AnneE
Re: Tagline Ideas for Local Animal Rescue Campaign

Okay -- I think this is a bit lame, but I'll toss it out there. Maybe it will inspire a real copywriter to one-up me and you'll get something decent.

Businesses profiled in this flyer have...
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2011, 01:11 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 4,803
Posted By AnneE
Re: Tagline Ideas for Local Animal Rescue Campaign

Were you looking for lines that would help sell particular merchandise or taglines to motivate people to buy so that they the shelter will benefit from the sale?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th October 2011, 07:05 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,187
Posted By AnneE
What I've Learned about Outsourcing

I wanted to pass on a quick summary of what I've learned about Outsourcing, because I think it has been key to my growing success and could be key to other Warriors:

1) One bad apple don't spoil...
Forum: Mind Warriors 9th September 2011, 06:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 596
Posted By AnneE
Re: The Courage To Succeed

I love Ruben's book. What's interesting to me is that what I latched onto the most is slightly different than what you did. What I remember from the book was the absurdity of his dream, becoming...
Forum: Warrior Special Offers 23rd August 2011, 07:52 AM
Replies: 185
Views: 20,956
Posted By AnneE
Re: Want to tap into mainstream media for you or your offline clients?

DON'T LISTEN TO THEM!!!

Seriously Rachel, I saw the email last night that I hadn't gotten a review copy and after I indulged in a 30 second pity-party "Gosh.. why didn't Rachel like my post. ...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd April 2011, 11:51 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,016
Posted By AnneE
Re: ? Ethical to scam the spam - forum profiles

Well I'm encouraged to see that I am not the only Warrior who no longer wants to participate in littering up the internet highway with links to our websites. A few months ago I came up with a new...
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2011, 08:46 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 700
Posted By AnneE
Re: A little help with my sales page

Danielle is right, that this is exactly what I was thinking. Your WSO didn't paint a picture that I could relate to... it didn't promise to solve a specific problem that I have, such as providing...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th March 2011, 06:42 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 1,859
Posted By AnneE
Re: Is Anyone Out There... Getting Rich Slowly?

Hi, I've heard of 365 Days of Startups -- hadn't checked out "Everything" yet (to anyone else reading - the link is in Poster's signature)

To go back to your question though, YES. While I...
Forum: Mind Warriors 7th March 2011, 06:42 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 29,986
Posted By AnneE
Re: Anyone attended T Harv Eker Free 3-Day Millionaire Mind Intensive?

Yes, if anyone is looking for free tickets, I would go to his website and get on the mailing list and I'm pretty sure you'll get some options to go to a live event for free.
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2011, 10:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,071
Posted By AnneE
Re: First Clickbank Sales Page/Letter - Critiques appreciated

I liked the first little bit of the video, but then it became repetitive in terms of watching the patterns -- too much style and not enough substance.

I would need to understand how what you are...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2011, 03:45 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 792
Posted By AnneE
Re: Be brutally honest - What do you think of this resource box?

I would agree with what folks said above. Create two resource boxes and have each one entice the reader to your website with a promise of SOMETHING... "learn six secrets that have made big-name...
Forum: Mind Warriors 19th January 2011, 04:41 PM
Replies: 191
Views: 10,864
Posted By AnneE
Re: The Single Quote That Changed Your Life Forever

The man who says he can and the man who says he can't. Both are right.

and

You have to be able to imagine and believe that something can happen before you can make it happen.
Forum: Finished Contests & Challenges 15th December 2010, 05:39 AM
Replies: 177
Views: 10,632
Posted By AnneE
Re: [37 More To Go]*Lend A Hand* Challenge - Let's Help Each Other!

Kory, I told you above (I think) that DeAnna and I had helped each other with a motivation exchange, right? Actually it's funny because we also have a good overlap of interests where we can offer a...
Forum: Mind Warriors 27th November 2010, 02:51 PM
Replies: 73
Views: 3,096
Posted By AnneE
Re: My One-Horse, One-Month 30-Day Challenge, Will You Join Me?

That's great, Stephanie!

Three more days left to the month. Today I received an email that sounded like a good idea. And I even followed the link and started to get the information. But then...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 23rd November 2010, 03:40 PM
Replies: 109
Views: 22,636
Posted By AnneE
Re: Auto Traffic Monopoly by Andrew Wallace

I watched a part of the video. He (Andrew Wallace) really comes across as sincere. If his income claims were slightly less inflated, I might have believed it. But a system that could overnight...
Forum: Mind Warriors 7th November 2010, 11:11 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 1,017
Posted By AnneE
Re: Starting the Day with a Choice

I chose Good Day. They are MUCH more fun!
Forum: Mind Warriors 1st November 2010, 08:33 AM
Replies: 73
Views: 3,096
Posted By AnneE
Re: My One-Horse, One-Month 30-Day Challenge, Will You Join Me?

Great. Welcome to the challenge.

This morning just before I posted this challenge, I came very close to purchasing a WSO. It was by someone who I've purchased from before (and I really liked...
Forum: Mind Warriors 1st November 2010, 06:12 AM
Replies: 73
Views: 3,096
Posted By AnneE
My One-Horse, One-Month 30-Day Challenge, Will You Join Me?

I saw a post about a Tony Robbins 30-day challenge and decided to create one of my own.

I challenge you to spend the next 30 days, the month of November to focusing entirely on projects that you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th September 2010, 06:50 AM
Replies: 85
Views: 2,500
Posted By AnneE
Re: Just Can't Make It Work!

So did you change your website from when you started this thread until now? Early posts were talking about you selling an ebook, but now the website does highlight creams and other cellulite...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th July 2010, 12:02 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 1,364
Posted By AnneE
Why I Hate Video -- Am I the Only One?

I just received an email offering me some great information for free.

Hey, cool.

"Just click this link to watch the video."

Am I the only one who doesn't have time to watch a half-hour...
Forum: Website Design 15th July 2010, 09:01 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 506
Posted By AnneE
Re: Need site feedback.

More typos, on page http://www.austinbarton.me/freebook.html:

You say This E-book here here to

and

Just fill our the form to your right and instantly receive this benifical free gift...
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2010, 11:18 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 2,330
Posted By AnneE
Re: Staying motivated after being rejected.

I watch my favorite "Don't Quit" video:

YouTube - Inspirational Video - The Don't Quit Poem

In terms of my kids, I can usually get back on good terms by finding something we both always like --...
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2010, 11:03 AM
Replies: 275
Views: 61,944
Posted By AnneE
Re: The Secret in Think and Grow Rich?

For me "the secret" is that he (or she) who wants things most (what others have called 'burning desire') will get what they want. I think the story early in the book about the girl asking for a...
Forum: Mind Warriors 8th April 2010, 08:58 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 704
Posted By AnneE
Here's Some Good Brain Food

If your looking for something to inspire, feed your brain, educate and entertain you at the same time, there is a huge collection of videos at

TED | Talks | List (http://www.ted.com/talks)

One...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd December 2009, 06:53 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 863
Posted By AnneE
Re: Help!! Need a sales page critique please!

I was surprised your product was so cheap $7 and that you didn't have any testimonials. You could address both of these by saying that you know these techniques have worked for you, but since the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd December 2009, 05:35 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,083
Posted By AnneE
Re: writing an ebook

I also wrote an outline for my ebook. After I had the outline I set a goal for when I wanted the ebook to be done and figured out how many sections I had to write each week to reach that goal. I...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th November 2009, 08:08 AM
Replies: 191
Views: 7,206
Posted By AnneE
Re: An urgent plea from a family on the brink...

Essence ... battle on. And to all who offered him guidance along the way. Thanks.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 3rd November 2009, 01:48 PM
Replies: 191
Views: 7,206
Posted By AnneE
Re: An urgent plea from a family on the brink...

I'm not going to be scared to voice my opinion either, which is that your (lazavas) opinion stinks. You say you would never post here if you were in this situation. Fine. Bully for you. You say,...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2009, 05:03 AM
Replies: 3
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Views: 614
Posted By AnneE
Re: We

The standard advice is that people buy from someone they like, which also means from someone they feel like they know. The idea is to give them a sense of who the person is that they are buying from...
Forum: Mind Warriors 21st July 2009, 11:11 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,030
Posted By AnneE
Re: My Horrible Month

Impressed by both your attitude and your wonderful writing, I clicked on your signature about your article writing services. Are there any particular topics that you either specialize in or...
Forum: Mind Warriors 9th June 2009, 04:04 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,643
Posted By AnneE
Re: I have a Hard time staying Focused. Can you Help Me?

My own suggestion is to find an accountability buddy. At my day job, I have a friend and neither of us is that into the work, but we know that if we don't put in some effort and give it some focus...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th May 2009, 05:20 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,107
Posted By AnneE
Re: Please dont laugh at me

I also am assuming you are talking about the blog in your signature. Your target audience is folks a lot like you (nice advantage), so what products might you want to purchase?

Do you use a GPS?...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd May 2009, 10:06 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 889
Posted By AnneE
Re: Please critique my sales page and copy

You need some COLOR.... both literally on the page... a simple background color even, something other than white. But you also need color and life in your writing. You say....

I conquered my low...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 13th May 2009, 03:54 AM
Replies: 80
Views: 2,685
Posted By AnneE
Re: Where have all the real names and real avatars gone from the forum?

pjCheviot ... you do look like someone that I wouldn't want to have ticked off! Surely you must have a friendly picture than that! course you will probably reply... surely you must have a more...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 11th May 2009, 09:15 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 638
Posted By AnneE
Re: Backlinks Tangible Information & Question Please

To answer this question for you based on my personal experience. I purchased Angela's monthly package of 30 links in Feb. I have currently used Feb, March and most of April. I don't do all 30...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2009, 08:58 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 921
Posted By AnneE
Re: Plenty of traffic... hardly any sales

Ooh.... this is EASY... as a potential customer

I come to your website sitting on my saggy, baggy derriere. I want a hot body. You start talking about me eating the wrong foods and doing the...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 11:37 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 889
Posted By AnneE
Re: My first Sales Page ever: A trainwreck?

Now first I have to admit, I am NOT your target audience.... But.... I do think some of my observations might still be worth considering.

1) I felt you talked too much about yourself and not...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2009, 10:57 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,103
Posted By AnneE
Re: Your help would be greatly Appriciated in More ways Than i can explain

Well.... aside from your website, since you are also just concerned with paying bills. I don't know if you are located where this would work, but I talked to a personal trainer who said that when he...
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