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Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2013, 03:30 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 399
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How to add "value" when asking for something?

Since you're hoping to get people to join a group relevant to their interests, that in itself is adding value. However, your script lacks personality and doesn't describe what your group offers...
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 14th August 2013, 06:11 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 748
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How come no conversions

After checking out your creative I have to agree with surreal and restate that I think a landing page could do wonders for you. The way you're pre-selling makes it seem like there's going to be live...
Forum: Copywriting 8th August 2013, 05:14 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,656
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Young man seeks your advice

I'm 23 and work at an ad agency. I progressed from a ~3 month internship during college and got hired afterwards. I actually quit school to work since it wasn't doing me any good. You really just...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd May 2013, 04:51 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,662
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Best books on PERSUASION (not copywriting per se)

Not a book, but lots of marketing gold and interviews with psychologists on Social Triggers (http://socialtriggers.com/).

Also check out the 50 Best Social Psychology Books...
Forum: Copywriting 9th May 2013, 01:29 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,666
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

Bingo. Your headline is amusing, sure, but I didn't want to read anything beyond it. Why? Because there were no benefits promised. I didn't even see anything that aroused my curiosity.

Also, who...
Forum: Copywriting 21st March 2013, 12:32 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 698
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Nature -vs- Nurture

It's definitely something anyone can learn. Just like sales, you can be incredibly shy at the start of training, then learn how to connect with people and create rapport problem-free.

Copywriting...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th March 2013, 01:22 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 608
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Dealing with Bad Reviews

I have, but not regarding anything to do with internet marketing. The issue wasn't even (wholly) my fault, but I compensated the "injured" party at my own expense and not only were they thankful, but...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th February 2013, 01:54 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 4,170
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Top Fitness forums to do research at?

Thirding bodybuilding.com (http://www.bodybuilding.com)forums.

You also might want to look at the comments posted on some fitness sites. A lot of people following trainers' routines will ask...
Forum: Copywriting 28th February 2013, 01:43 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 624
Posted By Shazadi
Re: What do you do when your reader has been lied to?

Definitely. Especially in popular niches like weight loss and fitness, people have had the world promised to them and often end up with nothing but empty pockets.

I tend to look at what the...
Forum: Offline Marketing 15th February 2013, 07:18 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 3,195
Posted By Shazadi
Re: $20,000.00 In 30 Days...

That's awesome, thanks for sharing. Did you cater your booklets toward the audience you imagined at each outlet (i.e. healthy living for grocery store)? And what about order fulfillment - did you...
Forum: Copywriting 15th February 2013, 03:08 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,655
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Would YOU do this if someone didn't pay...?

I like it. The client pulled their FB account to hide in shame. Also, if they're so in the right, why not show the original invoice and their timely check?

Any prospect that wouldn't want to work...
Forum: Copywriting 8th February 2013, 12:45 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 740
Posted By Shazadi
Re: heeeelp :(

Yes, it's possible to get 10% conversions or higher every month. It will help immensely if your review page is the 1st result on search engines (PPC advertising helps, though you can also do this...
Forum: Copywriting 6th February 2013, 04:10 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,194
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Why are images more effective than words when it comes to marketing?

Images are not more effective at marketing than words. The quiz's own reasoning was:

"A single image can transmit a number of emotions if used correctly. Images also can reach people of...
Forum: Copywriting 31st January 2013, 03:14 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,103
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Looking for competitor comparison charts

This article has a lot of comparison and pricing chart examples once you scroll past the intro (primarily for hosting companies, though I'm sure they could be applied to anything):

Conversion XL...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd January 2013, 03:43 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,307
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Do Classy Sales Pages Perform?

Another Halbert-ism for the day: Hype is used when the writer doesn't have enough substance to create meaningful copy. I.e. "Use this super cool amazing secret to get shredded, ripped and SLAIN in...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd January 2013, 03:35 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 952
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How TO WRITE sales copy when you don't NEED to?

Gary Halbert said that after putting out tons of free information through his newsletter for years, he'd actually get people emailing him asking to buy something. It was a cross between wanting more...
Forum: Copywriting 10th January 2013, 02:29 PM
Replies: 184
Views: 14,426
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Is NLP Utter Hogwash?

The majority of the copywriters I've seen that trumpet their use of NLP are proven con artists and hacks. I understand that some well meaning types may explore it and discover a few useful tips (Such...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th January 2013, 06:33 PM
Replies: 39
Views: 1,481
Posted By Shazadi
Re: What can I market to Asian American Girls ages 16-24?

Good response. "Asian" is such a huge category. Are we talking Japanese, Chinese, Vietnamese, Korean, Thai, Pakistani, Indian, Cambodian, etc...?

That being said, while their heritage and likely...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th January 2013, 06:05 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 585
Posted By Shazadi
Re: I can't decide if i should concetrate on traffic now or content.

Yep, content first. Even if you miraculously got a ton of traffic to your site without any decent information, what's the point? You'd be wasting all those views as people clicked away, bored with...
Forum: Copywriting 4th January 2013, 01:47 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 740
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Back for more abuse :)

I used to play classical guitar. Seeing your site makes me want to find the time to pick it up again. :)

Brian already hit on some good points, so I'd like to add this: Where's the emotion on...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2013, 05:56 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 867
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Ideas for a great email subject line

I agree with this. In numerous split tests it's often been found that email titles need elements of both curiosity and benefits to get people interested. Especially when you're going in cold, try to...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2013, 04:29 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 854
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Shockingly Sexist Ads...

And? There are so many ways to gain exposure aside from causing outrage and harming people. How about doing some good? What a terrible world it would be if all marketers thought like this. Let's use...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 3rd January 2013, 01:50 PM
Replies: 112
Views: 4,495
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Been Doing IM For 2 Years and Made $0, what should I do?

Michael, I'm primarily a copywriter who's just getting into the IM field, but even I can see your problem. You haven't really devoted yourself to any of these projects.

You bought fake followers....
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2013, 01:22 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,663
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Copywriting - An obvious sales letter? or disguise it as an article?

Here's something to consider: Why do all the biggest publishers and best copywriters often sell products in the form of a "magalog"? They offer a lot of useful, free information while enticing...
Forum: Copywriting 13th December 2012, 02:36 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,833
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How do you become the best?

I actually subscribe to Doug D'Anna's list and got an email that's perfect for this thread. Thought you might appreciate it, Ben. To sum up, too many copywriters are married to their swipe files....
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2012, 12:29 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,833
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How do you become the best?

So really, you're asking about how to be famous instead of skilled. Edison was a complete jerk, and that's putting it nicely. He stole Tesla's ideas, mocked him for the inventions he eventually...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2012, 04:12 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 763
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Copywriting in real life?

Angie got at the heart of the problem. This is a copywriting forum, and no, learning how to create sales copy is unlikely to help you make friends. You need to get out in the world and practice....
Forum: Copywriting 11th December 2012, 10:38 AM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,736
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Copywriting Contest

Wow, very exciting! Thank you Harlan and to everyone who thought my letter had a decent approach. Congrats to Tony and Jason as well.

*edit*
As luck would have it a client contacted me today...
Forum: Copywriting 10th December 2012, 02:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,504
Posted By Shazadi
Re: "tested sentences that sell" now in public domain?

By Elmer Wheeler?

It certainly looks to be public domain, since you can get the full PDF here...
Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2012, 10:48 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,289
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How do I get my hands on controls

This is from Gene Schwartz... old but still useful: Catalytic Health Vitalizers (https://s3.amazonaws.com/copyswipes/legends/Gene-Schwartz-Aches-and-Pains-Disappear-1981.pdf) (try saying that three...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 03:47 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 919
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

Have you seen this sales page? (NSFW AT ALL): Secrets of Erotic Hypnosis (http://www.masterful-lover.com/erotichypnosis/)

I would take some pointers from whoever wrote that. Things to use:

-...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 03:34 PM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,736
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Copywriting Contest

Aah, I got you Steve - get the senses involved in the best ways possible. Great illustration!
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 02:49 PM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,736
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Copywriting Contest

Thanks Steve, that's a good way to put it. I'm surprised you like using open-ended questions though, as I would think those would allow the prospect to waffle around. In the example, who's going to...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 02:33 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 752
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Branding IS Positioning

Well said. I do a lot of "branding" at the agency I work at, and people in the direct mail/internet marketing niche tend to scoff at that until I explain. It's not about being creative for the hell...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th December 2012, 04:08 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 433
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How to Find Blogging Clients

Sites that constantly publish content. This is one of the easiest jobs to find, because it's pretty simple to come up with a list of successful blogs. They always need more people to write...
Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2012, 04:17 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 972
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Which five words would you choose?

You
Better
If
Results
Discover
Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2012, 03:30 PM
Replies: 144
Views: 7,736
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Copywriting Contest

I'll bite and critique as well, but to whoever wrote this, no disrespect and I know we were all under a timeline. :)

Having read/heard the entire letter, what I'm not feeling is the disconnect...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2012, 12:31 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 613
Posted By Shazadi
Re: My First Copywrite! Need Help

Wes, to be blunt, people have heard this all before. Oh, blah blah, full access, burn fat, track progress. I don't care how much it is because I'm not buying it whether it's $1 or $1,000.

You're...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2012, 12:21 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,986
Posted By Shazadi
Re: how to format a guest blog post?

I'm assuming this is for a Wordpress site, since formatting is different depending on what platform you're using.

For HTML Using Wordpress: How to Format and Submit Guest Posts in HTML...
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2012, 09:52 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,578
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Sales Bullets Suddenly Get Better With These 4 U's

You rock! Clayton is my biggest inspiration - reading "The Total Package" has taught me more about copy than any thousand dollar course.

Also, Todd, you have some great advice yourself. Thanks...
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2012, 09:26 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 785
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Looking for advice on looking for sales letter clients (almost newbie)

Abby, have your clients tracked specific results from these letters? I.e. how much money they made, new customers attracted? Information like that is a very powerful tool for getting new clients and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2012, 01:48 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,065
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How to monetize our site - PR5, 25K unique visits, site is 16 y/o

Since you're already set up with Amazon why not really dig into that and create some review pages? Use those top 10 pages to figure out what people are curious about/interested in and pick a high-end...
Forum: Copywriting 29th November 2012, 04:39 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,410
Posted By Shazadi
Re: What skills should a copywriter have?

Others have hit the nail on the head: You need to know how to market, especially yourself. I know a lot of copywriters that are great at writing and have the "book smarts" regarding structure, tone,...
Forum: Copywriting 1st August 2012, 02:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 817
Posted By Shazadi
Re: 10 Companies That Totally Nail Copywriting

Some of these I like, but a few just seem... too "clever"? I feel the copywriters are so caught up in being cute that they forget about the product itself. Looks like I'm not alone either.

In the...
Forum: Copywriting 14th July 2012, 08:56 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 903
Posted By Shazadi
Re: You Are Feeling The Urge To...

Hmm. I would think it was clever if they were marketing a NLP or hypnotic copywriting course, since that would obviously link back (at least tangentially) to the products they were selling.
...
Forum: Copywriting 13th July 2012, 12:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,808
Posted By Shazadi
Re: The Best Salesletter Ever Written?

Totally going rip off Olga's prospecting email - she must get so many clients, especially among the illiterate. :(
Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2012, 12:43 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,619
Posted By Shazadi
Re: How did you get your first few clients, and break into this industry. (Age old question, I know.

Hi Sonny,

Just like advertising any service, the best way to find clients that will pay a respectable fee is to hang out around those that already know your worth. Since your friend is a...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2012, 09:20 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,513
Posted By Shazadi
Re: An Insight Into Why Copywriting Prospects Skimp on Their Budget

This is a good topic to bring up. I think mentioning that the client needed to believe she could produce a high quality of work is what really hit the mark. Believe it or not, even with a rock solid...
Forum: Copywriting 15th June 2012, 04:15 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 908
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Life story in sales copy!?

This is important to build credibility, as others have said, but be careful of becoming overly focused on yourself. Remember that every single word you put down needs to relate to your audience and...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2012, 02:49 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,682
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Do Top Ad Agencies Really Create The Best Ads?

I was just thinking this over during the morning myself. Their branding in terms of "creative" is a total mash-up, but they are consistent with the same benefits based savings that are useful to...
Forum: Copywriting 12th June 2012, 09:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 593
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Can I ask for a Critique?

As Thomas mentioned, I'd definitely be wary of using another company's copyrighted material. I'm quite direct when critiquing so no insult intended in the following notes:

- The layout feels...
Forum: Copywriting 12th June 2012, 04:14 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,682
Posted By Shazadi
Re: Do Top Ad Agencies Really Create The Best Ads?

You'd be surprised!

It's a bit ironic to talk on this subject considering I work at an agency, so let me frame this by saying that yes, some agencies - with proven experience, intelligence and...
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