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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 03:01 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By T.I.M.
Re: Optin video too overboard?

Dude the vid was well done and the Sandler/Swardson vid is one of my favorites so I love the soundtrack. I'm far from the moral police but marketing sexual stuff to underagers is DUMB on so many...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 01:07 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By Jared Alberghini
Re: Optin video too overboard?

Just some brainstorming ideas... If I were you JD, I would submit your videos to:

CollegeHumor - Funny Pictures, Funny Videos, Funny Links! (http://www.collegehumor.com)
&
Break.com - Free...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 12:55 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By Jeremy Kelsall
Re: Optin video too overboard?

JD - hit the 18 - 25 year old virgin dorks and this could be a hit lol

I was on Skype and sent the link to 3 people I was talking too...If I did, I'm sure other people will too :)
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 12:32 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By Alan Petersen
Re: Optin video too overboard?

I couldn't sit through the whole thing. I had to fast forward. Way over the top and I didn't find it very funny. But hey I'm not your target audience I'm 40. :D

I do agree with Jared that sex...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 12:29 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By tjmiller
Re: Optin video too overboard?

I thought it was really bad, but especially so if you are targeting kids. I think any sort of sexual advice or information that is for young people needs to have a more sensitive spirit, even if...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 12:20 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By Jeremy Kelsall
Re: Optin video too overboard?

lmao - I thought it was funny.

Maybe I just have a weird sense of humor?

I guess it really depends on the market you are trying to hit. If you are going for the younger market, it could be...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th March 2009, 12:10 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 561
Posted By Jared Alberghini
Re: Optin video too overboard?

JD,

I wouldn't watch that video again if you paid me, so please forgive me if I miss some details.

What the hell are you thinking? Sure it was over the top (but not funny) even for an...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd February 2009, 04:59 PM
Replies: 162
Views: 8,255
Posted By tremayne
Re: Killer Offline Strategy No One is talking about (sneaky)

Hi Chris:

***In reply to your request for speaking experiences***

I am virtually certain that not a single Warrior is shyer than I was. It has taken a lifetime of accepting personal challenges...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd February 2009, 12:21 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By FreelanceSally
Re: Critique my headline please : )

Consumers react to concision. If it's too long, no one will hang in there long enough to read the entire message.

Try....

The Secret to "Natural" Beauty? Innovative Organic Makeup

The...
Forum: Copywriting 21st February 2009, 11:00 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By Prashant_W
Re: Critique my headline please : )

how about this...

When Beauticians “Feel Ugly”This Is What They Do.

hope this helps you :)
Forum: Copywriting 20th February 2009, 10:31 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By ARSuarez
Re: Critique my headline please : )

I was thinking something simple, such as "The Secret to Your Natural Beauty" or

"They Smiled When I Was Natural... But Not When I Became a Beauty!" Jason mentioned the amazing Caples... I could...
Forum: Copywriting 20th February 2009, 12:37 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By Rus Sells
Re: Critique my headline please : )

Organic Makeup So Pure, No Removal Needed Before Bed Time so Start Looking Beautiful Naturally

maybe???
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th February 2009, 10:31 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,193
Posted By Roy Carter
Frank Kern Left Money On The Table With His Launch!

Hi Guys

OK, so let's face it, after making over $4 milion dollars or whatever from his recent launch Frank could probably care less, BUT he DID leave money on the table and here's why...

I see...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th February 2009, 08:22 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By Paul Myers
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

JD,

Okay. Now that the noise has died down...

This is almost exactly the model I used on my very first commercial web page. Seriously. I set up a deal with a long distance company that gave out...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th February 2009, 10:58 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By Clark
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

The business model is similar to Shoe`s... where you might pick up a few more details:

Making Money Online With Local Affiliate Programs - ShoeMoney®...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th February 2009, 05:59 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By ExRat
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

Hi jdmitchell,



Not fired up, or too emo.

Just had a misguided loyalty problem and a desire to help to stop the deluge of trash posting that has descended on my favourite forum, due to the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th February 2009, 03:09 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By jrailsback
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th February 2009, 11:47 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 807
Posted By Jared Alberghini
Do You Need Serious Motivation?

Send me your physical address and I will fly to your destination and kick your ass... Hard.

Seriously, I will fly to any parts of the world and kick your ass in person if you have a problem with...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th February 2009, 07:17 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By sevenish
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

I expected only for the OP to describe a business "model". The subject line was just a bit tongue-in-cheek. I certainly didn't expect for the theme of kittens to be addressed more in depth. I mean,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th February 2009, 06:52 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By Paul Myers
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

JD,This is going to sound silly to some, but you made a promise you didn't deliver on. In this case, some saw a promise of humor, others of some charitable process. That creates a disconnect for some...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th February 2009, 01:05 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By Andy Money
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

I just drowned an entire litter of kittens just to spite this thread.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th February 2009, 12:40 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,243
Posted By Neil Morgan
Re: Your opinion on this business model will save kittens from dying

Advertising to local businesses isn't really my field but I have an opinion that may or may not be relevant to your situation.

In the past, when local businesses have asked me about having an...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 11:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 882
Posted By procopywriter
Re: Does my direct mail piece need revisions?

Good points all around. Loren particularly was hitting the nail on the head when he implied you use postal mail rather than email to initiate contact.

People are very touchy about email these...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 08:01 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By jasondinner
Re: Critique my headline please : )

how bout this one:

"A New Organic Makeup So Pure You Can Sleep In It"

Just get right to the point and is more like an announcement style headline.

John Caples spoke highly of them in his...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 06:30 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 882
Posted By Kyle Tully
Re: Does my direct mail piece need revisions?

And... you've lost them.

If you can't go to the trouble of finding out the name of the person you want to speak to then why on earth would anyone else go to the trouble of doing it for you?
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 06:18 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 882
Posted By J. Barry Mandel
Re: Does my direct mail piece need revisions?

Unfortunately while you may or may not have natural writing ability that does not necessarily mean that it will contribute to writing a successful email that gets results.

Judging by this IMHO you...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 04:19 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 882
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Does my direct mail piece need revisions?

To my eye the "voice" is off. You don't speak to the
reader's self-interest quickly or emphatically enough...
and you start off planting the idea that it IS JUNK MAIL.

Anyway, direct mail is...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 02:37 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By procopywriter
Re: Critique my headline please : )

It's a bit wordy. First, "Beautifully Natural" give me pause because it's awkward. It's not a common use of the word. "Beautifully" is an adverb. As such, it modifies a verb. For example, you can...
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 01:22 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By nata_sha
Re: Critique my headline please : )

Make it more concise, like

"Look Beautifully Natural using our New Organic Makeup - So Pure You Can Sleep In It"
Forum: Copywriting 10th February 2009, 12:21 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By SuperSammi
Re: Critique my headline please : )

How about... "Pure Organic Makeup for Natural Beauty!" "Mineral Makeup Beautifies, Even As You Sleep" or "Pure Organic Makeup With Beautifying Minerals- Wear To Bed For A Nighttime Facial!"...
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2009, 11:12 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By John Rowe
Re: Critique my headline please : )

What does your customer base want most? Beauty, organic/natural makeup, the ability to sleep in their makeup, or something else like clear skin, healthy skin, less wrinkles, etc.

If you narrow it...
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2009, 11:12 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By FitJerk
Re: Critique my headline please : )

"A New Organic Makeup So Pure You Can Look Beautiful Even While You Sleep In It"


How's that? I think it says everything it needs to without being too long. You may want to put a subhead with the...
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2009, 11:02 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By jaijav29
Re: Critique my headline please : )

For me, not an expert too, but consider revising it. or make it short but attracting! Hope I helped. :)
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2009, 11:00 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By Ross Dalangin
Re: Critique my headline please : )

How about:

"Discover The Secret To Looking Beautifully Natural And So Pure That You Can Sleep In It!"
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2009, 10:37 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By Alida Caprucean
Re: Critique my headline please : )

I'm not an expert but you may want to use a shorter version as a headline.

Organic makeup for your natural beauty.

Or something like that. Just play with your words. :)
Forum: Copywriting 9th February 2009, 09:11 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 857
Posted By rubberleg
Re: Critique my headline please : )

Wordy. Do something like.
The secret to natural beauty is a new organic compound so pure you can sleep with it.

Or
The secret to natural beauty is sleeping with nature.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th February 2009, 03:51 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,035
Posted By Amitywill
Re: The Super Supreme Way Of List Building

Having a "limited to a select few" is nothing new.

I saw something fantastic a couple of months on some site as a tactic to create urgency to join a list...

The website had the opt in form and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th January 2009, 09:45 PM
Replies: 225
Views: 15,204
Posted By AndrewCavanagh
Re: Cash Cow Gone Wild!

In reality it's not too difficult to get a business owner to call you by using some form of direct mail or even email.

Most people will drop the ball in the way they talk to the business owners...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th January 2009, 07:59 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,460
Posted By John Rowe
Re: How Would You Answer This Question...Seriously

You're right. I was wrong. I should never have told you to think for yourself before you buy something. Thinking is not for everybody. And it sounds like you would rather avoid it.

I...
Forum: Copywriting 25th January 2009, 02:04 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,101
Posted By BrianMcLeod
Re: NEW Opt-In Page Copy... What Are Your Thoughts?

"Reason why" for an opt-in is not quite the same as "reason why" for a full sales presentation.

People inherently understand why you're collecting emails.... To follow up later and sell them on...
Forum: Copywriting 25th January 2009, 11:58 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,101
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: NEW Opt-In Page Copy... What Are Your Thoughts?

Remember that guy on TV who has the 1/2 hour infomercials?
He is there with no shirt and nice abs and all.

The best way, IMO, to prove you are for real is to emulate
what he does. Make a video...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th January 2009, 09:30 AM
Replies: 225
Views: 15,204
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: Cash Cow Gone Wild!

Maybe my mind is a little more devious than some others (Way back in school I belonged to a group that spent out time trying to devise the 'perfect crime'), but this kind of risk reversal seems...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd January 2009, 07:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,025
Posted By gai001
"Offline" Client Acquisition Strategy

Hello Fellow Offline Warriors,

I know many out there are having trouble acquiring clients so I just wanted to share a "stupidly simple" method that is working for me.

I am starting a small...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st January 2009, 06:39 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,590
Posted By Benjamin Eddy
The Simple Cash Cow Thread, cut down to the golden nuggets. In a PDF for you.

I'm sorry Warriors, I guess this was copyright infringement for me to
post this pdf file.

I did not have the permission of the warriors who posted the content
and I should have given it more...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th January 2009, 09:04 AM
Replies: 47
Views: 1,828
Posted By Kevin Riley
Re: How could these people afford the Altitude seminars ?

Hmmm? What always makes me laugh here is the false economy penny pinching I often see. It's obvious that many Warriors have never run a business in the offline world.

I would consider it a good...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 15th January 2009, 01:01 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,464
Posted By GoGetta
Re: The Ultimate Action Offline Challenge! I Will Make Sales! Guaranteed!

Hi People,

Ok Update 3 Below,

Just to let you know, I over shot with the converting to dollars yesterday but I have rectified the final amount as you will see below. I was going off conversion...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th December 2008, 06:58 AM
Replies: 491
Views: 17,774
Posted By John Taylor
Re: I don't care what you say... Article Marketing Sucks

I never listen to people who tell me what I should
and shouldn't do; and I advise everyone else who
reads this thread to think for themselves.

Pitting article marketing against pay per click is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th December 2008, 12:20 AM
Replies: 63
Views: 3,522
Posted By BigRedNotebook
Re: Tyler Durden Method - A Quick Interactive 24 Hour Case Study

p.s. Think about the end of Fight Club. When Ed Norton finally realizes just how much damage his Durden alter-ego can do, he sucks on the barrel of a gun and pulls the trigger.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th December 2008, 12:18 AM
Replies: 63
Views: 3,522
Posted By BigRedNotebook
Re: Tyler Durden Method - A Quick Interactive 24 Hour Case Study

I congratulate you on taking action.
You deserve kudos for going from zero to "complete" in 24 hours.

Beyond that, Jenn & Donald are RIGHT ON.

It's not a game. And you're lying. Straight up....
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th December 2008, 11:29 PM
Replies: 63
Views: 3,522
Posted By zerofill
Re: Tyler Durden Method - A Quick Interactive 24 Hour Case Study

And Jenn speaks the truth there....
This is exactly the type of thing that makes IM such a joke to 90% of the world...This is what causes stereotypical crap for us all to have to fight harder to...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th December 2008, 11:15 PM
Replies: 63
Views: 3,522
Posted By thatgirlJ
Re: Tyler Durden Method - A Quick Interactive 24 Hour Case Study

Ok...I really appreciate the effort and think the sales letter looks nice. However, this is really what gives IM a bad name. Falsifying results and giving people hope for something that is a lie is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st December 2008, 12:57 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,171
Posted By Steven Wagenheim
Your Loss...Not Mine

Just so you know, this is not a rant. This is a pep talk to those of you
trying to build lists and feeling a bit frustrated by the process.

If that's not you, then you can just close this thread...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 20th December 2008, 09:00 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 565
Posted By Christie Love
Re: How much do you spend on makeup?

Well, I grew up believing that a woman should never go out the house without proper make up. However, I also believe that makeup should enhance your features, not make new ones.

I only use all...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 20th December 2008, 04:56 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 565
Posted By acreativetouch
Re: How much do you spend on makeup?

I use all natural products that I purchase from the health food store. I don't use commercial products because of the additives that cause skin cancer and other health problems.

Dorothy
Forum: Off Topic Forum 20th December 2008, 12:22 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 565
Posted By Joanne Greco
Re: How much do you spend on makeup?

I moved from NYC to Florida a few years ago and wear very little make up now, simply because it's just to hot and we also spend a lot of time in our pool.

When I do buy makeup, it's usually Cover...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 19th December 2008, 11:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 565
Posted By Patrician
Re: How much do you spend on makeup?

I rarely wear makeup anymore, just a little lipstick.

I spend a ton of money on beauty maintenance products however and have day creams, night creams, exfoliants, scrubs, masks, etc. You name it....
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