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Forum: Warrior Special Offers 20th June 2012, 06:21 PM
Replies: 1,687
Views: 95,272
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: DOMINATE GOOGLE TODAY! FULL LINK DIVERSITY SEO SYSTEM ONLY $25 - RAVE REVIEWS! - PENGUIN FRIENDL

Hello Hogan,

Back again! Ready for my second round. Let's take this one straight to the top!

Ordered one campaign for my main site.

Thanks,
Shanen
Forum: Local Meetups, Mastermind Groups and Warrior Events 10th June 2012, 11:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 939
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Offline Marketing Mastermind via Skype

Hi Paul,

Great idea. I'd definitely love to join something like this and will add you to my Skype, so look for a request from shanensmith.

I'm not sure how you intended to proceed, but I...
Forum: Warrior Special Offers 6th June 2012, 09:13 PM
Replies: 1,687
Views: 95,272
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: DOMINATE GOOGLE TODAY! FULL LINK DIVERSITY SEO SYSTEM ONLY $25 - RAVE REVIEWS! - PENGUIN FRIENDL

Hi Hogan,

Just wanted to update you on the success of the campaign. I'm a bit hesitant to post this review, lest a competitor find out that I'm using your service to mop the floor with them!
...
Forum: Warrior Special Offers 29th May 2012, 11:23 AM
Replies: 1,687
Views: 95,272
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: DOMINATE GOOGLE TODAY! FULL LINK DIVERSITY SEO SYSTEM ONLY $25 - RAVE REVIEWS! - PENGUIN FRIENDL

Hello Hogan,

Placed an order for 2 campaigns. Sent you an email with all the details. My PayPal transaction no. is 4U601470VC5196511.

Here's to excellent results!
Shanen
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 06:44 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,049
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Back Again - Need another sales letter critique!!!

Thanks, momtraders. I get where you're coming from, but although I definitely know that some folks want the convenience of having a service to create autoresponders, many have earnestly tried and...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 05:30 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,049
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Back Again - Need another sales letter critique!!!

Thanks Joe and Mark,

If it sucks, then it sucks, but I find that conversation a lot more useful than 'why are you asking for feedback'.

Alright. So it's back to the drawing board...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 03:49 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,049
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Back Again - Need another sales letter critique!!!

Thanks, Joe. I couldn't have said it any better myself.

@roley:

Let me understand this. You are responding to a request for a critique and not actually critiquing the copy?

If you haven't...
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 02:29 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,049
Posted By SMSWriter
Back Again - Need another sales letter critique!!!

Request cancelled. Thank you for your feedback.
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2012, 01:52 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 893
Posted By SMSWriter
Forum: Warriors For Hire 25th April 2012, 12:04 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 687
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: SEO Press Releases - Skyrocket Your Website Traffic Fast!

Hi Sylonious,

Thank you for letting me know! Turns out my site was hacked by a code injection hack. All my hard work down the drain...:(

I've since taken it down, so it should no longer be a...
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 598
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Be careful, www.pushbuttonpublishing.com has been hacked

You need some security plugins, bro!

I use Better WP plugin. It's in the directory. The other stuff, like Wordpress Firewall, doesn't work.

Shanen
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:53 AM
Replies: 115
Views: 5,154
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: How do you boost your energy midday?

Taking naps and daydreaming work for me. Although too much daydreaming means I end up not working on my projects.

Shanen
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:52 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,053
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: What Was Your First Experience Of Making Money Online

My first online dollar came from my resume writing business. I got one customer for $129! Woo hoo!
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:50 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 690
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Why should we be doing IM and make it a source of passive income!

I don't believe that.

The CEO can easily live on less in order to retire. What the hell does he want to do with $50,000 per month as an old, enfeebled, invalid? Spend it on hookers and Viagra?
...
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:45 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 2,369
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: What Are You Reading At The Moment?

I'm reading the Adweek Copywriting Handbook by Joe Sugarman and Psycho-Cybernetics by Maxwell Maltz.

I wish that I read these books 10 years ago! They would have spared me a lot of grief!

Shanen
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:42 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 759
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Stop trying to get money and contribute instead

You're pretty profound for a young guy!!

What a sagacious and wise post! I believe that the reason people are so unhappy in this world is the constant focus on the self, which emanates from an...
Forum: Mind Warriors 25th April 2012, 10:36 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 931
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Reasons To Never Give Up Ever

Great quote, Ryan. I believe that wholeheartedly.
Forum: Copywriting 25th April 2012, 10:33 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,553
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Are You Comfortable Using FEAR to Sell Your SOLUTION?

Speaking as a reader (of a multitude of sales copy), I find fear to be a powerful motivator to push that Buy Now button. If a writer doesn't expose my fear or soothe my pain (as mentioned above), the...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd April 2012, 12:55 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 1,623
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Copywriters Are To Blame for the Ignorance Taking Over the Planet!

Agreed. SMH.

And furthermore, Mark. COPYWRITERS ARE NOT responsible, as a collective unit, for destroying the planet. I'm a vegan too, but I know Big Ag / Dairy are chiefly responsible for the...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd April 2012, 12:47 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 3,773
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: How a $29 investment brought me to 1.8 mil /year

Great success story. I totally understand that it would be unethical to 'spill the beans' on the exact products or niche, but I have a question about drop shipping.

Do you believe that if you had...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd April 2012, 12:30 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,710
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Two fears that prevent you from achieving your goals...

Both these fears have plagued me for many years. I was afraid of success because I did not want to stand out and be recognized. I was afraid of people's reaction to my success.

I was also afraid...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd April 2012, 12:18 PM
Replies: 113
Views: 4,368
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Here Is My WHY To Achieve Financial Freedom. Post Yours!

Why do I want to achieve financial freedom?

Well, I'm a modest gal. I don't want much...

1. I want to own a Maserati Gran Turismo (Black).
2. I want to build a custom home on 2 acres. (No more...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd April 2012, 12:03 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,015
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Please Tell Me, How Did You Stay Focused?

I will pass on to you a suggestion that a WF member named Raydal, passed on to me.

If your coach hasn't instructed you to yet, read and religiously apply the instructions in the book...
Forum: Mind Warriors 23rd April 2012, 11:55 AM
Replies: 67
Views: 2,142
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Did you quit your job?

Yes. I quit. My job was a horrible, low-paying nightmare.

I jumped in with both feet.

This is much better than a long commute, office politics, and long work hours.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2012, 09:31 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,150
Posted By SMSWriter
Forum: Copywriting 22nd April 2012, 07:55 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,150
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Sales page critique needed?

Hi Beats,

Yes. Regardless of the direction you take, it's undeniable that you NEED copy written. None of us dispute that.

IMHO, the size of the ebook doesn't matter if you're giving them a...
Forum: Copywriting 21st April 2012, 08:57 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,593
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Frank Kern's closing sequences

I concur. The secret is in the results.

He could show up and say, "Blah, blah. I just made $200K with my last email. Learn how with my new $50,000 program. Blah." And it would sell out in 59...
Forum: Copywriting 21st April 2012, 08:49 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,551
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Outrageous Direct Response Ads

I'm sorry that Kindle hijacked your thread, Mark.

Here's my headline pick:

HOT

A new consumer concept lets you buy stolen merchandise if you're willing to take a risk.
Forum: Copywriting 21st April 2012, 08:13 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,150
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Sales page critique needed?

Hello Beats,

My ex was a DJ, so that's all I heard about. Your program would have been perfect for him!

I have to agree with videolover7 on this one. It sounds like you're giving away the...
Forum: Warriors For Hire 20th April 2012, 06:52 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 687
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: SEO Press Releases - Skyrocket Your Website Traffic Fast!

This offer was for the press release writing only. I do not offer distribution at this time.

Thanks!
Shanen
Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2012, 07:05 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,025
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: YOU Are a Major Factor in Whether or Not Your Copy Converts

I don't necessarily agree with / subscribe to the Law of Attraction school of thought either, but you can't deny the power of positive thinking.
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 10:09 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,161
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Keep calm and make the logo bigger

This video is also a barometer for how effective an advertising campaign these corporations are producing. It struck me how clearly the brand messages of some of these companies had penetrated the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:44 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,644
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Match a Copywriter to Their Racing Car

Maserati Gran Turismo

Quietly exudes stealth and sex appeal. All the richness of the rarest woods, the softness of the finest leather. Raw power under the hood.

Vroom. Vroom. Baby. ;)

...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:35 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,025
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: YOU Are a Major Factor in Whether or Not Your Copy Converts

...which was determined by their approach...which was ultimately determined by their mindset.

Sorry. I drank the Kool-Aid. Burp.

Shanen
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:25 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,078
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Copywriting: a "recession-proof" business?

I agree with you on the economy being a factor for more people becoming copywriters.

But I do not believe that this poses an issue for proven copywriters who are experienced in their craft,...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 724
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: I came to learn from the best....

Welcome! I was a long-time lurker too, but I found the forum to be one of the most supportive I've ever belonged to.

Some of the 'older' members might give you some tough love about your work, but...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 09:08 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,332
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Critique for my first sales page. Thanks from a Newbie

Wow, Mark. That was the most eloquent evisceration I've ever witnessed on a forum.

Makes me want to tighten up my own game. Spot on, mate.
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 08:39 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,025
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: YOU Are a Major Factor in Whether or Not Your Copy Converts

I absolutely agree.

Writing really is about confidence.
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2012, 08:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 618
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Facts, schmacks

That begs the question, "How factual are his 'facts'?"

There are NO political candidates out there who don't have a decent amount of dirt on them. NONE.

All such mudslinging is hypocritical and...
Forum: Warriors For Hire 18th April 2012, 08:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 687
Posted By SMSWriter
Arrow [CLOSED] SEO Press Releases - Skyrocket Your Website Traffic Fast!

Premium Quality SEO Press Releases That Deliver High Authority Links, Laser Targeted Traffic, And Massive Exposure To Your Website, Product Or Service

Know you should be doing press...
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2012, 12:06 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Thanks Jennie. You rock!

Great information in that post! Thank you!

Shanen :D
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2012, 11:56 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 916
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Interesting And Unique Hook

Oh goodness, I absolutely cried reading that sales letter.
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It couldn't be easier! Here's all you need to rake in millions:


A computer
A snorkel
Toilet paper
A can of Pringles...
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2012, 10:03 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Excuse my naivete, but do internet marketing copywriters collect royalties for their copy as is the case sometimes in direct mail?

I love internet marketing, but would like to develop in the most...
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2012, 09:57 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2012, 06:43 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Gotcha, Mal. I'm working on 'banging it out right now. Hopefully, the next version will be less 'crappy'.

Honestly, I didn't submit my post for a standing ovation. I know it needs work and I...
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2012, 12:52 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Thanks Mark! That was such a helpful post. I've checked out your blog too. I couldn't wrap my head around all of it, but I do like your overall message about getting rid of limiting beliefs.

P.S....
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2012, 09:49 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

It's okay, Mark. He kinda reminds me of my mother...hey, waitaminute! Mom?! Why the hell are you using that guy's profile to post on my thread!

;)
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2012, 08:51 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,501
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: How to lose a sale in 3 seconds

Not at all, Sabina. Thanks for sharing! I'm new too and your post does illustrate a potent lesson on sales, which most copy is designed to do. It's ABC -- Always Be Closing.

He didn't close the...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 09:09 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

You guys are awesome. Thank you, Mark. This is spot on. I think I'm ready to go write an award-winning control!! (Where's the fist bump emoticon when you need one?)

Why didn't I just join this...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 08:04 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Ahhh man! I thought I caught all of those! Dangit! Thanks for clarifying, I did waffle on whether to include the dollar sign or not.




LMAO!!! Thanks. :D I will be sure to do those daily...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 05:15 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

(Ohmigod, Reflection Marketing. Tell me how you really feel. :o)

Truthfully speaking, however, I do appreciate your point of view. It's obvious that I really overreached in trying to appeal to the...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 03:16 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

Thanks Steve, I know I'm not really spooking anyone, but I thought it would add a bit of intrigue. :o I do like your angle about turning the newbie thing into a benefit, so I'll work on that tonight...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 02:51 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 980
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Headline feedback, please

What about "a floor care service" that they'd rave about? It is after all a service, right?
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 02:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 765
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Sweet story, with great marketing lessons

Wow that little kid's sitting on a goldmine! Why didn't I think of that? Oh, that's right. It's only fun when the kid does it. If a big 30-year-old lady like me were to build a cardboard arcade,...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 01:54 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 980
Posted By SMSWriter
Re: Headline feedback, please

Personally, the first one did it for me. It was more specific. The second one left me thinking, "Brag about to whom?"

I think that the reader will get an instant mental picture of their best girl...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2012, 01:08 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,642
Posted By SMSWriter
Arrow Re: When are you ready to launch a copywriting career?

@debml: I received your PM. Thanks! I just can't respond via PM due to post count, but your advice was warmly received. ;)

I have no problem discussing the pricing structure because I anticipated...
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