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Forum: Copywriting 28th October 2015, 11:07 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,694
Posted By maximus242
Re: Has COPY become a "COMMODITY"?

I think you're only highlighting your own ignorance of marketing.

It has always been the case that copywriting is 3rd or 4th on the list for impact on bottom line profit. This is true in direct...
Forum: Warrior Forum Classified Ads 12th October 2015, 07:50 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 302
Posted By maximus242
[DIME SALE] WSO Stop Wishing For Success.. And Take What You Want!

Dont Wait... TAKE What You Want TODAY

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If you are...

> Searching for an answer but don't know what to do

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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th October 2015, 01:14 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 581
Posted By maximus242
Re: How much money do i need

I recommend $10,000 and strong key performance indicators to prevent losing your shirt
Forum: Copywriting 11th October 2015, 09:04 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,694
Posted By maximus242
Re: Has COPY become a "COMMODITY"?

I think copy is less of a commodity than ever. As competition on the internet increases, marginal changes in conversion rates become more important. As the volume of sales on the internet increases,...
Forum: Copywriting 11th October 2015, 06:54 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,677
Posted By maximus242
Re: What is the latest on pricing psychology?

You want the latest in pricing psychology? My honest answer is go to your local walmart and see how they do the prices. It changes depending upon the price point. Walmart has way more testing data...
Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2015, 05:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 578
Posted By maximus242
Re: Why don't you tell us how it did or is doing?

It made money for a year, its kind of my little hobby project that I test different things out on, nothing ive ever done very seriously, always just used it to try out different variables in copy and...
Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2015, 05:32 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 578
Posted By maximus242
Re: Copy Critique

Everybody seems to hate the opening so im definitely going to try that
Forum: Copywriting 8th October 2015, 07:52 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 578
Posted By maximus242
Copy Critique

What do you think of this? http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-special-offers/996318-unlimited-success.html
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2015, 10:00 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 794
Posted By maximus242
Re: 2nd Attempt At Copy. Can you Critique?

It was not clear whether 10k meant $10,000 or 10,000 homes at first glance. I was unsure if it was an ad for realtors, real estate investors or advertising buyers.

I would try to summarize your...
Forum: Warriors For Hire 12th April 2015, 01:15 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 319
Posted By maximus242
Who Else Will Stick Their Money Where Their Mouth Is? Copywriting Backed By Cash

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> Responsive Advertising has written hundreds of...
Forum: Copywriting 20th February 2015, 07:03 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,075
Posted By maximus242
Re: Did Dan Kennedy do me justice here?

I think you are getting the benefits right, your talking about what your prospects want more or less, I think what you need is more proof. Nobody buys without belief, and your proof sucks b*lls.
Forum: Copywriting 13th December 2014, 05:48 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,204
Posted By maximus242
Re: How long should a VSL be for a $9 product?

As long as nessecary to make the sale, but not longer
Forum: Copywriting 22nd November 2014, 08:45 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 2,786
Posted By maximus242
Re: Critique my sales page

I would eliminate the headline and replace it with testimonials
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 09:37 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,165
Posted By maximus242
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

I think you lack a compelling headline to make people want to read your ad.

A headline is like an advertisement for your advertisement. Why should they read your ad in the first place?

If your...
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2014, 02:43 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 829
Posted By maximus242
Re: Critique - Put all your brain on my copy for a while

1. More proof
2. Clearer explanation of how it makes money
3. More concise and to the point
4. Elaborate on your story better
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2014, 02:18 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,227
Posted By maximus242
Critique Request Unlimited Success Program

The secret of the ages...

“Is It Possible That A Secret Has Been Passed Along From Generation to Generation of High Achieving Individuals?”

HINT: Positive Thinking, Manifesting Your Destiny and...
Forum: Copywriting 1st June 2014, 05:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 922
Posted By maximus242
Re: THANK YOU for changing this back to the Copywriting Forum!!!

The purpose of the copywriting forum is to promote and perpetuate the skill of persuasion in print.
Forum: Copywriting 24th May 2014, 11:40 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,246
Posted By maximus242
Re: How to quickly and easily nail your hook, message, and offer in an afternoon.

Its simple statistical regression, nothing new, he just used new variables in his regression model which brought down the error rate in his predictions.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd March 2014, 11:42 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,625
Posted By maximus242
Re: Wanna critique my sales page?

The graphic design of the page makes me think its a low quality product.

I find it hard to read, I see no compelling reason to respond. There are no benefits, no features, no reasons to buy at...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd March 2014, 11:39 AM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,366
Posted By maximus242
Re: Critique Request, House Painting

Thanks for the feedback everyone, taking it all into consideration, and will post a new concept soon. As for why it is written as a press release, its an old tactic to get more readership. People...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd March 2014, 06:49 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,366
Posted By maximus242
Critique Request, House Painting

Hi,

Please critique my copy, attached in pdf in this post.

Muchas Gracias
Forum: Copywriting 30th December 2013, 11:27 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 817
Posted By maximus242
Forum: Copywriting 28th December 2013, 04:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 817
Posted By maximus242
Copy Critique Request: What do you think of this home renovation ad?

Your feedback and opinions on this ad please


How To Get A High Quality Home Renovation At A Guaranteed Price, Finished Precisely When We Say It Will Be - Or We Pay You!

Dear Homeowner,

If...
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 1st December 2013, 11:37 PM
Replies: 148
Views: 29,380
Posted By maximus242
Re: Where can I buy low priced, quality wholesale goods?

No, its because they are fakes, thats why the price is lower.
Forum: Copywriting 21st November 2013, 08:29 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 950
Posted By maximus242
Re: Having John Carlton Review Launch Copy?

I think you should split test first
Forum: Copywriting 10th October 2013, 10:44 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 550
Posted By maximus242
Copy Critique: Your Thoughts and Opinions Please

This is for a 1 page direct mail letter

```$1 Bill Attached At The Top Of The Letter´´´´

Dear Friend,

As you can see I have attached a $1 bill to the top of this letter.

Why have I done...
Forum: Copywriting 30th June 2013, 04:17 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,978
Posted By maximus242
Re: Advanced Copywriting...Lesson 1..."Proof"

Actually if you read the book "How To Argue and Win Everytime" you will discover top lawyer Jerry Spence, who is famous for having NEVER lost a criminal case - says that Story is the most persuasive...
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2013, 06:18 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,978
Posted By maximus242
Re: Advanced Copywriting...Lesson 1..."Proof"

Actually there are plenty of control ads without a smidgen of proof. The key is not "proof" it is believability.

One of the most powerful but underused elements is the reason why. You can knock...
Forum: Warriors For Hire 20th June 2013, 05:12 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 394
Posted By maximus242
How To Make Sure That Your Sales Letter Is Going To Sell

Want to make sure your sales letter is going to sell? Here is how:

I have a 100% no risk guarantee that your sales letter will successfully sell your product or you pay nothing.

Here is how it...
Forum: Copywriting 13th June 2013, 11:48 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 478
Posted By maximus242
Idea For Sales Letter Competition

So in light of the popular sales letter competition things going on.

Why dont we set it up as a service on the warrior forum?

Rules

1. Money is put into escrow through escrow.com
2....
Forum: Warrior Forum Classified Ads 27th May 2013, 10:13 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 273
Posted By maximus242
If You Buy Articles, Please Help Us Improve Our Service

Hi

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Forum: Copywriting 26th May 2013, 03:09 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 575
Posted By maximus242
Re: Another newb looking for some feeback

Question, since it works via static electricity, is it possible for the fibers to fall out?
Forum: Copywriting 24th May 2013, 08:09 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 777
Posted By maximus242
Re: Would You Keep Reading?

I definately would not keep reading
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd May 2013, 03:15 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 684
Posted By maximus242
Re: Branding vs Solving Prospects Problems

If you know anything about branding then you should know that branding focuses on solving the prospect problems.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd May 2013, 03:11 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 944
Posted By maximus242
Re: My Squeeze Page is converting Terribly.. Any Advice???

Its obviously the copy thats the problem. I think people are uncomfortable with applying military techniques on their pets. Sounds rather violent or cruel.

The whole copy is a bit too extreme. How...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 22nd May 2013, 03:08 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 666
Posted By maximus242
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st May 2013, 11:36 AM
Replies: 59
Views: 1,703
Posted By maximus242
Re: What to do with 10-20k??

Do ten small and cheap projects. Out of those ten, find the most profitable project, pump money into it, expand like crazy.
Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2013, 10:28 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,190
Posted By maximus242
Re: How did you get good at writing copy?

Understanding why people buy in the first place
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th May 2013, 02:50 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 838
Posted By maximus242
Re: Price psychology in Internet Marketing

Go back to your guitar greg.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th May 2013, 02:49 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,559
Posted By maximus242
Re: Why is marketing so hard?

Make something that a lot of people want to read and share.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 13th May 2013, 11:15 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 838
Posted By maximus242
Re: Price psychology in Internet Marketing

Cool thanks for the info, good to know.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 13th May 2013, 11:01 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 838
Posted By maximus242
Re: Price psychology in Internet Marketing

Its in Dan Kennedys book on Direct Marketing and in Ted Nicholas' Course on Direct Marketing. He also includes it in his copywriting courses, Ted did price testing for several years (hes one of the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 13th May 2013, 10:51 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 838
Posted By maximus242
Re: Price psychology in Internet Marketing

No you dont understand the theory. The theory is that given the following choices:

1. $19.95
2. $19.97
3. $20.00

The price ending in seven will produce higher sales, all other factors being...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th May 2013, 01:38 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 575
Posted By maximus242
Re: My Autoreponder Isn't Selling

- What is your average open rate? 25%
- What is your average click through rate? 15%

- What is your average conversion rate???

This should identify the problem quickly

With 25% open that...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th May 2013, 01:36 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,214
Posted By maximus242
Re: Can Any One Recommend A Free Or Cheap Autoresponder Software?

I am all for the self hosted solution. Alls it takes is your mailing list provider to get pissed off, and BOOM away goes your business in one night. Years of hard work down the drain? No thanks. Self...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th May 2013, 01:33 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,304
Posted By maximus242
Making Money Online Is Simple, It Just Takes Hard Work

Making money online isnt complicated or difficult. It just requires you do one thing, dont be lazy.

Want to make money today?

> Get on the phone and sell websites
> Build websites and flip...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 11th May 2013, 01:30 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,855
Posted By maximus242
Re: How Can I Make A Consistent Income Online?

1. Go get a job (or a second one)

2. Invest money into your business

3. Build a real company instead of fooling around
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 8th May 2013, 02:18 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 808
Posted By maximus242
Writers Wanted

Writers wanted for my expanding article writing company. Please email samples and rates to maximus242@gmail.com

A few good reasons to work for my company:

> You dont have to do research, we...
Forum: Offline Marketing 5th May 2013, 11:58 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,282
Posted By maximus242
Re: $1,000 to invest, but I could use some advice.

What I sugeest is a lead generation campaign

You can do PPC, Flyers, Classified ads, Direct Mail, Space Buys, etc.

You will need to

1. Create a decent ad
2. Test the ad in several media
3....
Forum: Copywriting 4th May 2013, 06:40 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,347
Posted By maximus242
Re: I just sold a copy of Breakthrough Advertising for $60, was that too cheap?

I think breakthrough advertising is the best book ever written on advertising, ever. Its better than bencivengas course or claytons stuff. Its pure psychology and strategy.

The only way to really...
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2013, 11:32 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,590
Posted By maximus242
Re: Please give me feedback on my fitness sales page

You know whats the problem with this letter? Boring. B-O-R-I-N-G Boring.

P.S. Headline = Sucks
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 24th April 2013, 07:25 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By maximus242
Whats The Best Way To Get A High Opt In Rate

Quite simply, whats the best way you've discovered for getting high email opt in rates?
Forum: Copywriting 17th April 2013, 07:49 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 861
Posted By maximus242
Re: Plain Sales Letter vs. Graphic Sales Letter: Who Wins?

I think its pretty obvious he is talking about percentage points. There would have to be a huge test to get a statistically significant result for a 1.5 percent increase instead of percentage points....
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 16th April 2013, 05:36 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,598
Posted By maximus242
Re: I Feel Like Giving Up...

Just think of it this way, at least it wasnt $550,000
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 05:38 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,359
Posted By maximus242
Re: Critique Request: Screenwriting Analysis Sales Letter

This is not very good.

Lets start with the subhead:

"Want script coverage notes to improve your story almost overnight?"

Change it to:

"Want to improve your story almost overnight?"
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2013, 05:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,109
Posted By maximus242
Re: Who else want to BRUTALLY destroy my headlines?

No

They care about making mistakes. One of the best control packages for this market was written by Gary Bencivenga. The title of the ad was:

"Do You Make These Mistakes In Job Interviews?"
...
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