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Forum: Copywriting 27th April 2009, 09:31 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,057
Posted By Kevin Lam
Re: How to be so great in bed she's the one falling asleep afterwards.

Yes, looks better. You can thank me with that black button that says "thanks" lol.
Forum: Copywriting 26th April 2009, 09:24 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,057
Posted By cheeze69
Re: How to be so great in bed she's the one falling asleep afterwards.

hmmm... I wasn't really "drawn in" by this page. Not even a chubby, if you know what I mean. I think you need to include a certain amount of the stuff that turns guys on (i.e. pr0n) for a letter...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2009, 04:15 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,472
Posted By MichelleB
Re: Fierce B*tch or lame dog? Critque my site please

Overall it's good, but I think you really need to crank it up a few notches to make it more compelling. Because if you aren't compelling me to buy your services as a copywriter, why should I think...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2009, 04:06 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,472
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Fierce B*tch or lame dog? Critque my site please

I'm not a designer, but as a visitor, your page is cluttered and confusing. On first glance I don't really know what to look at, and even if I did, nothing is particularly attractive.

You wanted...
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2009, 02:05 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,472
Posted By vistad
Re: Fierce B*tch or lame dog? Critque my site please

The top menu tool appearance is not attractive enough. Further do something about 'The Sexes' hanging in the second line. Maybe you could do something as unconventional as placing the 'About Me'...
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