Forum: Copywriting 
18th February 2011, 06:01 PM
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Views: 1,141  Re: Help with television copy
Hi Sailerie,
You've received some really good feedback already, here are a few other things to consider...
* "The goal of my insurance agency is to help you to understand your insurance."
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd February 2011, 10:08 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,103 Dan Kennedy, Herds & Balls
If you've got an old copy of Dan Kennedy's "free gift" (the old one with 8 physical CDs, not the newer online one), you might remember his story about a woman's ballsy email.
If not, here's the...
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Forum: Copywriting
24th January 2011, 10:54 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 1,233 |
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Forum: Copywriting
19th January 2011, 04:57 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 742 |
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Forum: Copywriting
18th November 2010, 11:38 AM
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Views: 1,360 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th October 2010, 10:51 PM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,617 |
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd May 2010, 01:11 AM
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Replies: 77
Views: 7,892 |
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Forum: Copywriting
19th April 2010, 07:48 AM
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Replies: 51
Views: 2,995 |
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Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2010, 08:41 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 701 Cool viral idea...
A friend of mine in Vancouver just sent me a cool website...
The site is for a lawn care company (www.libertylawn.ca (http://www.libertylawn.ca), no affiliation) and once you fill out their...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th March 2010, 09:57 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
17th February 2010, 04:51 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,877 Re: Have a Happy Period.
Just got back from a trip to Florida and saw a few noteworthy billboards there too...
http://www.atcair.com/images/yourwifeishot.gif
The same company had another one that read "Your husband...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th January 2010, 10:50 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,806 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2010, 12:25 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 3,558 Re: Here's my postcard what do you think?
Nice to see a postcard here... good job! :)
- As previously noted, change "learn" (discover)
- "The First 3 Reasons" sounds weird. How about "3 main". Also, do you divulge other reasons in...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th January 2010, 01:45 PM
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Replies: 11
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
7th January 2010, 12:28 AM
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Replies: 107
Views: 3,479 Re: "Freeze" By Hey Sal and Steven Wagenheim
I like it - great job!
(I actually listened to it twice in a row...)
It's an interesting song; at the start it reminded me a bit of 70s music... then at 1:04 made me think of Jethro Tull......
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
19th November 2009, 05:22 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,398 Re: Number FIVE
Well said. In that case, maybe after the next letter you can celebrate with a trip to Spain! :)
[Side Note...
A few years ago, a friend of mine imported some illegal & highly-potent (95%...
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
19th November 2009, 04:40 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,398 Re: Number FIVE
Congratulations!
"Le gout de la lucidité inspirée" --> The Taste Of Lucidity Inspired... Must be tasty! :)
Cheers,
Dave
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Forum: Copywriting
13th November 2009, 03:01 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,407 |
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Forum: Copywriting
9th November 2009, 09:29 PM
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Views: 937 |
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2009, 04:34 PM
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Replies: 63
Views: 3,614 Re: Hypnotic copy! DUH!
Ronakshah,
Unless you are personally delivering your salesletter by hand and forcing your prospect to buy or else you'll kill them... I don't see how you can force your will on someone in print....
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Forum: Copywriting
1st November 2009, 04:28 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 833 Re: Please Critique My Sales Page
Hi Craig,
A lot of great points have been made already, especially by Gil-Ad.
Again, you have way, way too much highlighting!
Besides that, a few minor things...
- The first quotation...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th October 2009, 03:48 PM
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Replies: 36
Views: 15,413 Re: The Lazy Man's Way To Riches
Wow Jason that's an amazing story! Can't wait to read it...
Judy - no problem :)
For further Karbo reading here's an interview with him...
The Lost Joe Karbo Interview…Was He Really...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th October 2009, 01:03 PM
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Replies: 36
Views: 15,413 Re: The Lazy Man's Way To Riches
Sugarman dissects this ad in "The Adweek Copywriting Handbook". As Mr. Subtle states, it was written in 1973 and he attended Sugarman's seminar in 1978. It sold 3 million books - anyone ever read the...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th October 2009, 10:39 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 15,413 The Lazy Man's Way To Riches
Hi Fellow Warriors,
Many of you have probably already seen Joe Karbo's legendary ad, "The Lazy Man's Way To Riches":
http://www.teddersrandomnotes.com/bl..._Karbo_Ad1.jpg...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th October 2009, 12:41 PM
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Replies: 88
Views: 5,411 Re: Are many testimonials fake?
NEVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER Make up testimonials. Did I mention Never?
"How important are testimonials to the sales letter?" --> Extremely important. People will believe others...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th September 2009, 06:08 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,115 |
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Forum: Copywriting
25th September 2009, 09:37 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 707 Re: I think I Did a Better Job?
Hi there,
Overall looks good.. Here's a bit of feedback:
-Pre-head- highlight "warning" and add colon: --> Warning: The Internet..
- Headline: changed a few spelling mistakes and made a...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th September 2009, 03:59 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 44,365 |
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Forum: Copywriting
25th September 2009, 12:44 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 983 Re: Amazingly talented copywriting geniuses
Hi Susan,
Of the list you gave I like "The Success Center" the best. Vin Montello's "Your New Life" is excellent and the idea regarding the receptionist is just brilliant.
A few more ideas...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd September 2009, 01:36 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 739 Re: Critique Request: Squeeze Page
Hi there,
Here are a few comments:
1. The "pre-headline" is in the blue part of the page and difficult to read (and distracting). Put it in the main body (white background) in italics.
2....
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