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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 1st May 2016, 09:08 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,662
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: WordAI VS Spin Rewriter for authority site in 2016

I always get a good chuckle out of posts like this. You really think a bunch of spun articles is how you get ranked in 2016? That doesn't work anymore, dude.

When will you guys learn that people...
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2016, 08:35 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 907
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Why didn't this convert

Well first off, this really isn't copy. You basically wrote a 350-word piece of content with a weak CTA.

Why, specifically, did it not convert?


The angle is wrong
You told instead of...
Forum: Copywriting 1st May 2016, 05:06 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 640
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Care to critique this web page of mine?

Ewen is 100% right on this.

If your customer is searching for vein treatment, they're already in the buying phase and don't need convincing. What you need to tell them is why Dr. Campbell is...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st February 2016, 05:46 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 810
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Where can I learn more about content writing?

Good content writing is about writing great articles that genuinely help people, not SEO. Stop writing for search engines and write for people. That is what will get you visitors who keep coming back...
Forum: Copywriting 21st February 2016, 03:03 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,196
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: THE most important part of copywriting is...

Don't mind him, he's just a grump. I'm pretty sure the rest of us appreciate your eccentric brand of humor, Princess ;) At the very least, it makes this place interesting.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st February 2016, 02:50 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 3,680
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Online FREE marketing strategy to get hits to WP site

This should be the poster child for why so many people have left the Warrior Forum. Why even post if you have no idea what you're talking about?

STOP GIVING PEOPLE BAD ADVICE AND SPREADING...
Forum: Copywriting 20th February 2016, 09:43 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,196
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: THE most important part of copywriting is...

I feel like most good marketers and businesses these days get traffic through a variety of methods – not just one.

They're going to be getting organic traffic, doing email blasts, and utilizing...
Forum: Copywriting 17th February 2016, 09:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,045
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Fresh New Copywriter - looking for USP/site review

I did read both of those. Unfortunately, it comes across in the writing.

Saying "Now I’m an AWAI-trained copywriter. I’ve learned from top authorities in the field," screams "I'm a brand new...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th February 2016, 08:37 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 1,724
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: How Do I Become a Guest Blogger?

From the sounds of your blog, your best bet is to pitch political sites who don't mind off-the-cuff writing.

Unfortunately, you've really pigeonholed yourself into a very specific niche and I...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd November 2015, 07:41 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 1,892
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Are all content writers so slow and...

Like Ray said, this normally only happens with low-tier writers. Do 50-50 upfront payment and make sure you sign a contract. Only hire reputable writers who have proven track records.

If you're...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2015, 09:39 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,242
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Amazon product description writer here ...

I'm confused. You were taking $550 a month for doing email marketing for 10-15 lists...or a different service? If you're any good and your emails are converting, that's way too low for that many...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd November 2015, 11:01 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 762
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Quick review of my work please

You didn't make your benefits exciting, your headlines are bland, and you have no angle. Also, you over-optimized the crap out of it for SEO, which is a huge no-no in copywriting.

"Get your music...
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 20th August 2015, 04:39 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,644
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Is Drop Shipping on Ebay from Wholesalers still a good way to make some extra cash?

Yes, I do it but I don't "technically" dropship. It's easy to list items on eBay and order them from Amazon straight to your customer's address with a PayPal business debit card and a Prime account. ...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th August 2015, 06:39 PM
Replies: 67
Views: 6,917
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Can someone teach me how to make money? *Urgent*

The FL mods are asleep at the wheel half the time. Threads that should be locked are left up for more discussion that holds no value. People that should be banned are not – I had a guy from the...
Forum: Copywriting 16th August 2015, 10:26 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,303
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Can anyone recommend an article spinning service?

You just showed up to an MLB draft and asked to see the finest selection of Little League pitchers.

http://i61.tinypic.com/168926v.jpg
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th August 2015, 10:01 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,240
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: 5 Ways To Turn Nothing Into Money - [Concept I'm Developing]

Why would anyone revive this god-forsaken thread? The OP only posted it to get a sig link out with minimal effort. Please. Just let it die.
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2015, 02:09 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,381
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Can I get some feedback on my sales letter?

I personally hate headlines like this and feel they come off as disingenuous. It's an instant way to show people you made up an imaginary number and are BSing them.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th August 2015, 01:48 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,267
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: My Amazon Aff site - please review and suggest

I would highly suggest getting an editor to go through your content and correct sentences like this:

"Overall, the Olympus LG-4 is for the person who likes to wander even in the furriest mood of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 9th August 2015, 01:37 PM
Replies: 245
Views: 8,994
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Is someone like me doomed from finding a job making money online?

Where on EARTH are you buying domains and hosting? A diamond factory? A domain should not cost you more than $15/year to renew and hosting should be no more than $5-$10 a month. That's very...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 2nd August 2015, 02:03 AM
Replies: 245
Views: 8,994
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Is someone like me doomed from finding a job making money online?

If you've already wasted money on all these books, programs and courses, then there is no sense in continuing the trend.

You HAVE the knowledge. If you haven't taken action by now, you're not...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 29th July 2015, 08:23 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 2,307
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: I have 50$ in my PayPal account .How to double it?

If you can't be bothered to use the Search function to read up on the thousands of methods that are already on this site, and insist on asking a question that is asked literally every single day, the...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2015, 07:29 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,044
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Is it A good idea to use specs as your portfolio?

If you don't have a portfolio from real clients, then there's nothing wrong with using specs. But they better be damn good.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th July 2015, 06:15 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 3,649
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Do skilled Copywriters really make good money?

Content is not copy. You can be an amazing content writer, but suck ass at copywriting. I would only suggest getting into copywriting if you are dedicated to spending countless hours learning,...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 10th June 2015, 06:52 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 630
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: So I have this "push button" software

Why bother with software when you can just use Search Tempest (http://www.searchtempest.com/)? It searches all of Craigslist for free.
Forum: Copywriting 6th June 2015, 02:52 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,384
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: What Are Your Biggest Copywriting Challenges?

Does watching The Wolf of Wallstreet count? Lol.

I'll have to check them out - I haven't actually read any phone sales courses because I do pretty well with emailing and networking/referrals. I...
Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2015, 05:18 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,237
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Copy to use for building credibility

Rick Duris has a bunch of copywriting formulas on his blog. You should check those out.

21 Incredible Copywriting Formulas (I Use) | CopyRanger.com...
Forum: Copywriting 5th June 2015, 11:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,746
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Please critique my sales page when you get a spare moment

1300 words later and we still have no idea what your report is actually about. All I know is that I'll be able to magically produce a novel in 90 days.

You need to explain your product better....
Forum: Copywriting 2nd June 2015, 12:37 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,384
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: What Are Your Biggest Copywriting Challenges?

Personally, I'd be more interested in business strategies than writing strategies. I'd love to learn more about how to market myself better through cold calling.

I can write a killer email pitch,...
Forum: Copywriting 1st June 2015, 02:43 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,384
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: What Are Your Biggest Copywriting Challenges?

That's why you thoroughly vet a client before ever starting on a project. I never initiate a contract with someone who is wishy washy or won't give me the information I need to determine what they...
Forum: Copywriting 1st June 2015, 12:29 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,157
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Dare I Ask...? Yet Another WFH Critque Thread

We all get a little heated, but picking fights with the entire copywriting forum is not the way to go. Especially when you're very wrong on many of the points you were trying to make.

I do agree...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2015, 11:48 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,490
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Craigslist Crisis

Just post an ad on Upwork/Elance and filter applicants with good feedback. Unlike most cases, agencies will usually be able to deliver the best results, since they are usually equipped with proxies,...
Forum: Copywriting 31st May 2015, 11:37 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,230
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Offering free copywriting critiques a good idea?

I would advocate prospecting/pitching over free critiques. Much more bang for your buck.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st May 2015, 06:23 PM
Replies: 105
Views: 5,103
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: To be successful at Internet Marketing- you need to be Greedy

I don't think you actually understand what marketing is - helping your customer solve a problem. Please tell us where the "greed" is in that.
Forum: Copywriting 30th May 2015, 10:34 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 4,543
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Does long form sales copy still work?

You can call me Jen – no need for the patronizing nicknames.



That's like saying "If people aren't watching Game of Thrones, they're not watching TV." You are comparing reading fiction for fun...
Forum: Copywriting 29th May 2015, 05:19 PM
Replies: 72
Views: 4,543
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Does long form sales copy still work?

I really don't want to jump into the middle of this epic debate and all (and I'm going to gloss over the fact that you used 17-year-olds as your target market) but...why are you using a statistic...
Forum: Copywriting 28th May 2015, 06:18 AM
Replies: 72
Views: 4,543
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Does long form sales copy still work?

No problem, I was just poking fun. At least you had a sense of humor about it, as opposed to someone else :cool:
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 28th May 2015, 01:26 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 450
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Please help. Can anyone guide me on this

"“Are you looking to make some serious money online? This incredible method is going to show you how to make upwards of $50,000 per month” 1500 people have already quit their jobs and started living...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2015, 05:57 PM
Replies: 72
Views: 4,543
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Does long form sales copy still work?

Who has the bigger ePeen?

Find out next time on...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th May 2015, 03:07 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 787
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Lots of traffic, no sales

The lander isn't great. Looks like generic clipart and the header is very, very bland. I'd click off, if it were me.

As someone else said, I'd focus on getting email optins rather than sending...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2015, 01:30 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,891
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Copywriters: How important is showing sample work ?

I'm really glad this came up. I've been re-doing my personal website and having a dilemma over whether to include a portfolio or not. Sounds like a bad idea.

I've also been wondering if I should...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th May 2015, 12:53 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 860
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Ummm... Ahh.. Y'know... Err....

It's never bothered me when I hear people do the "um" thing. It's so common that I never notice it much.

If you're really set on getting out of the habit, try writing a script before you do a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th May 2015, 09:32 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 835
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: ANybody in IM who isn't a liar?

You say I know nothing about you, then turn around and accuse me of something you know nothing about? Pot, meet kettle.

Your mindset is atrocious.

You know how I can tell you are lazy?...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th May 2015, 08:36 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 835
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: ANybody in IM who isn't a liar?

Before you start slamming the people you bought these methods from, did you try Googling what solo ads were? Did you try learning the basics of how to build a website and what affiliate marketing...
Forum: Copywriting 26th May 2015, 08:17 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,635
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Critique this landing page copy please

Although you asked for advice regarding your home page, Tim asks a valid question – and he's right about your grammar/voice issues.

What good does it do you to tighten up the home page if your...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 26th May 2015, 04:35 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,683
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Big Day

I would fix the site before even thinking about how to advertise it. It looks very spammy so far (random Amazon affiliate link at the top and a theme/domain that does not match your niche) and you've...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th May 2015, 02:23 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,490
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Craigslist Crisis

You can Google how to change IP addresses, but that's really not going to solve your problem. There is a lot more to getting around CL filters than just switching IPs/clearing cookies and those of us...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 26th May 2015, 12:27 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 4,383
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: PayPal "Loophole" Gone

If you have a great product, it shouldn't worry you.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th May 2015, 08:42 PM
Replies: 74
Views: 3,059
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: A Plea For Help.

You missed his point.

He wasn't telling you that negativity is marketable. He was telling you that something about your post elicited emotions from people and made them respond. He was telling...
Forum: Social Media 25th May 2015, 03:40 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,744
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: How I Get Hundreds Of Targeted Twitter Followers Daily

It shouldn't have to be that way, though.

This is why BHW will always be my home. Lots of great methods, lots of people actually willing to help, great marketing topics on a daily basis...I could...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 25th May 2015, 03:24 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 613
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: What is Nintendo games and how to sell it?

Wait. Are you selling the games yourself under your Facebook account and then he is going to "ship" them? If so, you're getting scammed.

Why wouldn't he just sell the games himself through...
Forum: Social Media 25th May 2015, 03:13 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,744
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: How I Get Hundreds Of Targeted Twitter Followers Daily

Direct linking to a personal website is completely understandable. A "matching sig file" is not.

If someone has expertise in a certain area, promotes that expertise in their signature and posts a...
Forum: Copywriting 24th May 2015, 03:39 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,817
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Not strictly COPYWRITING but WOW - great piece of writing

I meticulously edit pieces in my head as I read them, but I didn't find myself doing that with this article. The story was captivating, every word.

It was long, but I never felt like it lost me....
Forum: Social Media 24th May 2015, 03:33 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,744
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: How I Get Hundreds Of Targeted Twitter Followers Daily

Very good method for new marketers. Glad to see a helpful thread in WF that actually works (I've used this same strategy to grow Twitter accounts in the past).

Wish more people posted "how-to"...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st May 2015, 12:05 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 631
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: Info Regarding Warrior Forum Signature

Oh, it's showing up all right...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th May 2015, 12:40 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 700
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: How to discover if guys claiming to be legit I'm coaches are actually legit or not

Maybe because doctors and flight instructors aren't internet marketers who work on the internet...you know...where forums are? Where different ways of advertising exist apart from the real world?
...
Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2015, 01:22 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,947
Posted By Jennifer Hutson
Re: The Most Powerful Copywriting Secret Ever!

I think the lack of clarification was the answer ;)
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